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SPuL™ 06-23-04 12:22 AM

Mental v.s SPuL (PUNCH LINE BATTLE)
 
checkin' in

2 lines due in 10 mins

MoTiF 06-23-04 12:23 AM

Check.

SPuL™ 06-23-04 12:31 AM

yea here goes:

You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow

MoTiF 06-23-04 12:31 AM

http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_002.jpg

Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..

Lol if u dont get that then jeez

DON 06-23-04 12:49 AM

haha aight i liked this thing spul that was funny it was good. mental urs was good too but the only thing wrong with it is hes indian so that took off from the personal now if he was arab u woulda k.o'd him aight it was funny pc

v/spul

MoTiF 06-23-04 12:51 AM

Lol Indian bassicly is Arab.

SPuL™ 06-23-04 12:59 AM

LMFAO @ Indian is basically Arab. Anyways, I'm 75% black, and 25% Indian.

DON 06-23-04 01:05 AM

spul if i were u id embrace bein indian and use it like i do wit bein italian cause theres not many italian images in hiphop if theres any and theres not any indian i dont think in mainstream sorry for freepost jus had to say that

SPuL™ 06-23-04 01:07 AM

^weerd. Yea, I do. :cool:

virt 06-23-04 01:20 AM

here is the over sized breack down for this battle

I think that spul had an over flow and great structure to his verse begining to end. I loved your opener and your closer was even beter...
Favorit line-
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow

spul-
flow:9
structure:9
punches:7 only had one punch.... lol
personal:8 tight personal

over all 8.5ish

metal
I felt that your verse picked up towards the end...I think that your opener was not as good as your finsher...
favorite line-
Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..

flow:9
structure:9
punches:7 only had one punch.... lol
personal:7 tight personal
overall-7 close but his verse was better than yours

v-spul

Enhance 06-23-04 10:28 AM

Lol... are you serious?

Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow

Poppa Kap 06-23-04 11:06 AM

^That fuckin line is from birthday cards and wack shit like that. Mentals line was poor aswell. But if I had to vote thru some sort of originality it would be him

SPuL™ 06-23-04 12:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Resolve
Lol... are you serious?

Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow


Man, you must be dumb if you don't get that. And no that line ain't from birthday cards.
Also, that vote ain't explained. Uppin' for REAL votes.

DeLeon 06-23-04 01:01 PM

damn....how do i break this shit down.....1 bar

Spul-
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
ha ha...that shits funny...nice punch

Punchline rating:7.5/10

Mental-
Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..
that shit would of hit hard and been funny...but he's indian.....still funny but off

punchline rating:7.0/10

vote-Spul

Poppa Kap 06-23-04 01:29 PM

get it cancelled if u want. But what im sayin is that ur line is totally unoriginal. Its like one of those stupid witty phrases u get on cards, badges, poor peoples t shirts etc

FlowIntelligent. 06-23-04 02:52 PM

mental anews yours was str8 but it wasnt hott...spul yours was good kinda funny...puncline battles are weak cuz its just one bar....at least thats what i think...

vote :spul

~!1!~

SPuL™ 06-24-04 01:22 AM

ok, uppin this. 4-1 me.

SPuL™ 06-24-04 12:30 PM

uppin' for one more vote.

SPuL™ 06-24-04 11:14 PM

uppin' again.

Phenom-in-all 06-25-04 03:59 AM

Spul-
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
Had me laughin man. Agreed that I have the feelin I heard it before, and not in a rap, but somewhere... Still - punch was full - punch at 1) his name, 2) borrowing lines, 3) calling dude a dumbass. All around good punch. 9/10

Mental-
Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..
1) Arabs speak arabian, jews speak hebrew. 2) Spul ain't arab. 3) What does Taliban have to do with Blueprint? - Nothing... This was off... Its like using a weak kracka line on a nigga. It was weak in the first place, making it inaccurate, and even if Spul was arabian, jewish, OR in the taliban he would have beat you. 3/10 (woulda got zero, but your rhymescheme and structure were nice)

vote/ Spul

LaTiNKiTTeN 06-25-04 05:39 AM

Apotheosis is RESOLVE look at their IPs

haha,CAUGHT THAT FUCKIN SPONSORED CHILD........NO WONDER HE TALKIN SHIT TO ME UNDER AN ALIAS........HE CANT DO IT UNDER HIS REAL ID.......BAWAHAHAHA......AN ALIAS WITH 900+ POSTS...WHAT A FUCKIN FAGGOT

Enhance 06-25-04 09:56 AM

^ Latinkitten

i cant belive you think i'm harold..

IT's a fucking AOL PROXY SERVER.....
Go find out IN ANYTHING ELSE Because were both from UK and after STROBE SAYS THAT I'm not HaROLD i dont want you saying anything to me... LMFAO at you thinking i'm harold .. wow get lost...

LaTiNKiTTeN 06-25-04 07:41 PM

i was pretty surprised myself that u'd pull some shit like this........but after kryogenix did it,i said its very possible...............i'll wait to see what the admins say..........i maintain that 2 computers cannot have the same ip at the same time.....n i saw yall online at the same time before with the same ip......so we'll see

SPuL™ 06-26-04 04:54 PM

^Drama in the battle thread. lol Ok, uppin'. 4-1 me.

SPuL™ 06-27-04 01:46 AM

uppin'

Know-Gimix 06-27-04 02:15 AM

You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow

Haha- This was good- right to the point- you were able to say alot there... good job

Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..

I understand where you wanted to go here, but this is why Ima vote against you---
the rhyme is way to basic... if spit out loud the rhyme is real choppy- if lookin at your opponents- it flows well and has a three syllable rhyme.... I understand this was sposed to be a personal diss also- Just not a great one in my opinion- Vote Spul.

Know-Gimix 06-27-04 02:15 AM

oh jeah.. and please return the fav... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305

Mad Dog 07-13-04 04:41 AM

SPul

You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
/\ lol nice punch dawg that was funny


Mental

http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_002.jpg

Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..
/\ Weak ounch also i couldnt see tha link

V/SPul better punch Mentals was weak

RTF on this link...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981


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