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Mental v.s SPuL (PUNCH LINE BATTLE)
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yea here goes:
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow |
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_002.jpg
Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew.. Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew.. Lol if u dont get that then jeez |
haha aight i liked this thing spul that was funny it was good. mental urs was good too but the only thing wrong with it is hes indian so that took off from the personal now if he was arab u woulda k.o'd him aight it was funny pc
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Lol Indian bassicly is Arab.
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LMFAO @ Indian is basically Arab. Anyways, I'm 75% black, and 25% Indian.
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spul if i were u id embrace bein indian and use it like i do wit bein italian cause theres not many italian images in hiphop if theres any and theres not any indian i dont think in mainstream sorry for freepost jus had to say that
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^weerd. Yea, I do. :cool:
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here is the over sized breack down for this battle
I think that spul had an over flow and great structure to his verse begining to end. I loved your opener and your closer was even beter... Favorit line- You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow spul- flow:9 structure:9 punches:7 only had one punch.... lol personal:8 tight personal over all 8.5ish metal I felt that your verse picked up towards the end...I think that your opener was not as good as your finsher... favorite line- Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew.. Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew.. flow:9 structure:9 punches:7 only had one punch.... lol personal:7 tight personal overall-7 close but his verse was better than yours v-spul |
Lol... are you serious?
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow |
^That fuckin line is from birthday cards and wack shit like that. Mentals line was poor aswell. But if I had to vote thru some sort of originality it would be him
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Man, you must be dumb if you don't get that. And no that line ain't from birthday cards. Also, that vote ain't explained. Uppin' for REAL votes. |
damn....how do i break this shit down.....1 bar
Spul- You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow ha ha...that shits funny...nice punch Punchline rating:7.5/10 Mental- Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew.. Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew.. that shit would of hit hard and been funny...but he's indian.....still funny but off punchline rating:7.0/10 vote-Spul |
get it cancelled if u want. But what im sayin is that ur line is totally unoriginal. Its like one of those stupid witty phrases u get on cards, badges, poor peoples t shirts etc
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mental anews yours was str8 but it wasnt hott...spul yours was good kinda funny...puncline battles are weak cuz its just one bar....at least thats what i think...
vote :spul ~!1!~ |
ok, uppin this. 4-1 me.
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uppin' for one more vote.
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uppin' again.
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Spul-
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow Had me laughin man. Agreed that I have the feelin I heard it before, and not in a rap, but somewhere... Still - punch was full - punch at 1) his name, 2) borrowing lines, 3) calling dude a dumbass. All around good punch. 9/10 Mental- Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew.. Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew.. 1) Arabs speak arabian, jews speak hebrew. 2) Spul ain't arab. 3) What does Taliban have to do with Blueprint? - Nothing... This was off... Its like using a weak kracka line on a nigga. It was weak in the first place, making it inaccurate, and even if Spul was arabian, jewish, OR in the taliban he would have beat you. 3/10 (woulda got zero, but your rhymescheme and structure were nice) vote/ Spul |
Apotheosis is RESOLVE look at their IPs
haha,CAUGHT THAT FUCKIN SPONSORED CHILD........NO WONDER HE TALKIN SHIT TO ME UNDER AN ALIAS........HE CANT DO IT UNDER HIS REAL ID.......BAWAHAHAHA......AN ALIAS WITH 900+ POSTS...WHAT A FUCKIN FAGGOT |
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i cant belive you think i'm harold.. IT's a fucking AOL PROXY SERVER..... Go find out IN ANYTHING ELSE Because were both from UK and after STROBE SAYS THAT I'm not HaROLD i dont want you saying anything to me... LMFAO at you thinking i'm harold .. wow get lost... |
i was pretty surprised myself that u'd pull some shit like this........but after kryogenix did it,i said its very possible...............i'll wait to see what the admins say..........i maintain that 2 computers cannot have the same ip at the same time.....n i saw yall online at the same time before with the same ip......so we'll see
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^Drama in the battle thread. lol Ok, uppin'. 4-1 me.
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uppin'
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You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow Haha- This was good- right to the point- you were able to say alot there... good job Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew.. Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew.. I understand where you wanted to go here, but this is why Ima vote against you--- the rhyme is way to basic... if spit out loud the rhyme is real choppy- if lookin at your opponents- it flows well and has a three syllable rhyme.... I understand this was sposed to be a personal diss also- Just not a great one in my opinion- Vote Spul. |
oh jeah.. and please return the fav... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305
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SPul
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow /\ lol nice punch dawg that was funny Mental http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_002.jpg Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew.. Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew.. /\ Weak ounch also i couldnt see tha link V/SPul better punch Mentals was weak RTF on this link...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981 |
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