NightVision-VS-Economics
 

15 lines, normal rules
no crew votes, hate, etc

i'm spitting first

good luck

yep

you set it up wrong

no i didn't

forgot to check in, verse'll due at half past as promised

checkin in.........

checkin in to ima start to write to aight man good luck

oooooooooppps i thought ya did mah bad

this guy likes long walks by tha beach and hikes/
he knew wat he was when he saw 2 spread open dikes/
i see him tryin to catch tha fuckin flow he bobbin his head/
he doesnt like jerkin off he likes tha fuckin dildo instead/
he likes to callout and try to battle fuckin famous men/
this guy's been pluged in the ass more then jenna jameson/
he dont like dem bad girls he fuckin likes dem nice nice ladies/
this guy' has fourty two fuckin remixes to ice ice baby/
ask him on this fuckin site i'm the only one fuckin fears/
he pm's me sayin ima slave for your like fuckin britney spears/
i know that he wants to say i'm rich i got a bently it's great/
he got that from tha pention for his fuckin mental estate/
i suggest that u open your fuckin mouth i'm ready to ejaculate/
special classes dont fuckin count i suggest u go back and regraduate/
make u run for hours and make u eat sand so u fuckin deyhidrate/


aight yall tha jenna jameson line was cause she is a porn star and got fucked everwhere
and that mental estate line a pention is money wether it be from a war or your self problems

o sorry and tha spread open dikes part was that spread open dikes would be pussy

come on man i got sick of waitin hurry up and drop that shit

Aight...listen up...listen up...here we go!

Thought ur da illest on da “block”…damn u can’t even be a “writer”//
You’re on “writer’s block”, nigga, I’m iller cause I’m a fighter//
Vision? I’m the nigga wit a vision to see through your plan//
I’ll leave this bitch short sighted, hit over the head with a frying pan//
I could just walk up to this bitches house and start fuckin’ his ex//
And this kid can’t protect her even if he was labeled latex//
Every1 has something to compliment me bout…

Wrong thread yo,
I never fail without a fight, let alone setting this shit right//
Embarrassed, right? Letting a flyweight saying that ur shit ain’t tight//
I’m a nigga with lyrical ambitions, while this bitch has medical condition//
People sayin this bitch would win is like “Beyond Belief; Fact or Fiction”//
Bitch, my shit is a mile beyond what you could “write with pencil”//
I type my shit out yo, I take this bitch out with a stencil,
Cause I have huge lyrical potential//

I was gonna go first yo...

yo good battle yo (clap, clap)

there's a lot of fake personals in your verse, that's gay, otherwise ur wise was good

uppin for votes.......

aight yall uppin for some fuckin votes in this bitch

break down

punches:night
flow:both
structure:night
wordplay:none
personals:both
overall:night vision

night vision.............. go check in................. your in the crew welcome stay active

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heres tha break down
punches:night
flow:both
structure:night
wordplay:none
personals:both
overall:night vision

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night vision got dis one wit better flow and punches..nice battle tho
return da favor wit honest votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131053

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aight yall uppin for some fuckin votes in this bitch

what the fuck?! every single battle i get into, none of them votes are explained properly, this is just a whole lot of shit man, one sentence is not enough, and flow: xxx is not good enough either, i'ma get strobe or cprogress on all this, so is my battle with J DOT

sure, i probably lost but this is fuckin rediculous

Nightvision won this cuz better everything. Flow, vocab., punches.....etc. Good battle to both of you. And good luck.

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night vision took this one easily there really no need to explain plain and simple he has better punches and better multies... personal's were iight but ive seen him do alot better.... structure was basically the same...flow was hot .. it was alot better the econmics and... it was hell enough to merk him

econicms your verse was iight but it wasnt good enought to win you the battle... structure was good but you need alot more then structure..punchlines were iight but nightvision's was alot better...personals were alittle off at points... mulites were straight ....overall your verse was pretty good but i really think nightvision took this one

Vote=NightVision
return the favor in my sig PROPERLY thank you

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

i suggest that u open your fuckin mouth i'm ready to ejaculate/
special classes dont fuckin count i suggest u go back and regraduate/

he dont like dem bad girls he fuckin likes dem nice nice ladies/
this guy' has fourty two fuckin remixes to ice ice baby/- My favorite from Vision- funny....

I’m a nigga with lyrical ambitions, while this bitch has medical condition//
People sayin this bitch would win is like “Beyond Belief; Fact or Fiction”//

I could just walk up to this bitches house and start fuckin’ his ex//
And this kid can’t protect her even if he was labeled latex//- My Favorite from Economics-

No vote- just statin what I saw... Good Luck Yall, free uppin.

aight people, uppin for REAL and EXPLAINED votes...

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

damn this battle was pretty tight i enjoyed reading both of ya verses
but to be honest i give this one to nightvision....

nightvision
your verse was really good and it really amazed me ...punchlines were really good and were hitten hard...personals were nice and they were makin there mark...flow was really good but ecomics had better flow ..overall you did a nice job with your verse and i reall think you took this battle ..nice battle

economics
damn son nice verse but it wasnt good enought sorry..punchlines were pretty decent...muties were iight but ive seen alot better...personals were iiight but nightvision had alot more...overall i really enjoyed this battle and i really surprised me...
overall i gotta give this one to night vision for haven alittle bit more punchlines and personal's

vote nightvision
please return the favor in the battle in my sig thank you

aight then......fuck it let's get more votes in this man..........

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

im bout to vote...
can u return the favour and drop an honest vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131625

aiight check

night vision: your shit wasnt that good man..you had weak personals..and i didnt see too many punches...your flow was there...but your structureu was weak...you did pretty good but i expected more..keep elevatin...and your opener...wasnt that good

econ: your sshit was ok..but you had a better flow and structure...and your personals were hittin and you attempted punches..i was feelin a couple of your lines...your opener was weak but the rest was pretty good...good job

vote:economics

can u return the favour and drop an honest vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131625

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

uppin for votes.........................................

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

NightVision- Your verse i liked it was good ....Your punches were nice too i thought they hit hard enough and they was better then Economics...You also had a decent flow to go along with your verse too...Your structure was good too it wasn't bad or anything...You really didnt have any multies or any wordplay but overall you get my vote for better Punches, Structure, & Verse

Economics- Your verse was decent but i wasn't feelin it alot...You had some nice punches but they didnt seem to hit hard enough...You had a decent flow wit ya verse...you also didnt have any multies or any wordplay...But you had some nice personals...but overall NightVisions got this ...but elevate yo....

v/NightVision.....

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

punches:night
flow:both
structure:night
wordplay:none
personals:both
Vote: night vision

Peace

return favour if ya dun mind, (link is in my sig.)

come on people......let's get this battle to end...

uppin for votes

jesus christ can yall vote on this shit and explain your votes i had it won wit all 5 votes but economics had it re opend so come vote and explain them

you both had solid verses

Nightvision-- nice flowwin son.. u had some solid personals and crazy punches mann i digged ya verse b.....

Economics-- u had a striaght verse.. good punches u was flowwin ok.. u was just a lil bit weaker in this battle .. ive seen u harder b... u could do better--

my vote

Nightvision

can yall both look in the first page of frontlines and vote on deuce vs. a.k.a thanks pz