Horus(thetruth) Vs. !Riff Raff!
 

20 lines max., no crew votes
ok you know the rules. c'mon, you go first

nah you made the challenge you gotta go first boy

you're scary, it's all good though, i'll give you something to feed off.....

look man how bout we do a time limit
our shit needs to be droped within 1 hour of you accepting
what ya say
THEN YOU KNOW I CANT FEED OFF YOU

the max is 20 lines, and i'm writing now in a diff browser so, go ahead and start now

I'm a God of Rap and i'm makin this last/
while your like constipation, just a pain in the ass/
i'll break u in half just like a kit kat/
so "give me a break", my flow's fresh like i took a tic tac/
spittin sick raps, while you imitate a cartoon cat named Riff Raff/
you want me to go first so you can premeditate yo verse/
but i'm hungry in this game so i'm eating you, no thirst/
i rap and bitches yell, "I love the way you do that right there"/
so yell it bitch, you know my rhymes will grow on you, like hair/
and your really nothing but a dumb trick that sucks dick/
and your a chicken, so i'm gone beat on you like drum sticks/
speaking of chickens, how do you walk with out a brain?/
that's why i doubt your fame, your a broke MC with out a name/
you'll get dowsed in flames for playing little childish games/
i'll sock you and knock your puny chest right out your frame/
and iv'e seen you cuz, your flow prolly sounds to up/ (tore up)
but as for wordplay, my "punches" hit you harder than Rocky Bowboa/
so where's the competition man, these are some weak fucks/
you weren't even a road block, your more like a fucking speed bump/

Horus, Your Not A Challenge But Worse Of All I`ll Murder You
Fuck Punches How This For A Personal...
.....ive Never Heard Of You...
For Life Y`a Scentenced Ya Petty In Damage So Im Intense
You Winning Would Be As Lucky As Oj When Announced Innocent
Your Not Even In A Crew...cuz They All Left U Rejected
You Used A Shit Load Of Punches But None Of Them Connected
You Have To Cheat You Can Never Win This Battle Rightfully.....
...... Only Time You Drop Hot Is When You Bite From Me
I Read Your Words & Started Laughing Every Line Hit Worse.....
And To Think......
.......... I Actually Spent Less Time On This Verse..
Time To Switch...jus Got Fucked.....but Hey Its A Game..
Dont Worry Your Winning 1-0 ....
.......well In The Hall Of Shame

Yo Nice Spit Man Good Luck

Upping For Votes On This Fucker

Yo Upping Twice
Need Sum Votes

Thanx Riff, you too.

uppin for votes again, c'mon ya'll, what do you think?

Good battle

bumpin up for some votes

Over-all
 

it was either way 4 real 4 real.. both were good but i'd have to hand it to RIFF RAFF!!!!!!!

thanks d.n.a
bumping up this fucker for some more votes..
come on guys, where y"all at......

RIFF RAFF: i felt like your punches were decent, but your flow wassnt the best it could have been... that last line was kind of wack =/.. but you had an attempt at a punch everyline, and i liked that.. overall 7/10

Horus, Your Not A Challenge But Worse Of All I`ll Murder You
Fuck Punches How This For A Personal...
.....ive Never Heard Of You...
^ ok bar.. decent


For Life Y`a Scentenced Ya Petty In Damage So Im Intense
You Winning Would Be As Lucky As Oj When Announced Innocent
^played.. but it was decent

Horus:ya verses always sound good.. but you not makine your punches stick! they like lil jabs na mean?.. you need to go for the power hitz and knock niggas face off lol..

so where's the competition man, these are some weak fucks/
you weren't even a road block, your more like a fucking speed bump/
^..ok punch

and your really nothing but a dumb trick that sucks dick/
and your a chicken, so i'm gone beat on you like drum sticks/
^..humor point :P

over all i think my vote goes to RIFF RAFF.. he had some nice punches that suck wit horus... horus did really have to hard of blows.. good batttle tho.. both verses were nice..
v/riff

naw, i really think that Horus took this, Riff Raff didn't have any punches at all period. Horus atleast threw some in to diss him, and had some metaphors for him. Also Horus' Flow was way better so I was feeling his a lot more.

I vote for Horus

anymore votes?

Horus, I like reading your shit. I do think that RIFF RAFF came cool, but Horus obviously had more punches, RIFF RAFF's only punch was about OJ simpson and it was basic. The rest of his verse was just kinda weak ta me, like him being rejected and punchlines not being connected wasn't really hard disses either.

so based on punchlines I have to go with Horus man...

nice, nice, this was a cool battle, I can't say too much now though, i'll be back to reply and vote

I agree, like I was about to say, I have to Go with the obvious winner to me which happens to be Horus. His Punchlines were just better..

break down

opener:riff
punches:both
flow:both
structure:riff
wordplay:none
personals:both
closer:riff
overall:riff raff

good battle

Punches Both? RIFF RAFF didn't have any punch liines

look, i aint biteing but how can you do personals on someone you dont know, let alone seen.... anyway this shit is close..
so upping for more votes......
peace out......

Need Votes

End this battle too

thisn the best battle ive seen in a minute both yall came hard

riff you ripped but you did disaopoint in the end

horus damn son he kept comin and comin....

horus you made the battle intense and personal 8/10
riff smashed into your tyhreats 8/10

so out of harder hiting punches and more battle hard lines v/ riff
good shit my niccahs

uppin fa votes

bump