Rising Sun..Vs God's Son..
 

aight you know the rules..
15 lines max..
spit first by 12

yo sry for being so inconvenient but i balled all day and my friend came over so i couldnt drop. today, im going to battlegrounds at toronto so ill drop when i get back im really sry but if u wanna give me the loss thats fine although u arent getting anything out of it.

yo i'll give you till friday at noon...


















if not you are DQ'd

k checking in.....let me type it up my bad man....im a busy person

iight you can spit first ..............

i got five more lines and i will be done sorry man,......................

Your polluting this industry like SUVs
It’s best-you-leave cause your identity’s-deceived
If your God’s son…
I’m gonna let-you-see why nobody’s gonna celebrate Christmas-Eve
Get realistic-please, it’s easy to tell-your-fake
Dwell-your-fate into thinking that hell’s-the-place for you-to-go
Stop lying, you died many years ago
To beat me, you need a miracle bigger than your resurrection
Get to my recollection, many differences as you cannot get-affection
Nor are you a remedy to my ill-skilled infection
Your far from perfection, a contradiction from what your disciples-claimed
You have a psycho-brain to call yourself “God’s son”, your a disgrace-to-God
Stab you with-a-cross and piss on the altar if you were actually divine
Nobody “sees” how good you are, so you haven’t “cured-the-blind”
Giving me a loss for a no show, prophets aren’t down-with-that
If Jesus ever rapped, I hope that he would never sound-this-bad

Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//
Finally after 4 days of you not spittin, i'm attackin like a raptor i'm vince carter//
Just with ya mom last while she was screamin "oh baby come on and fuck me harder"//
I shouldve just take the win sice you never bothered for 4 days to even show
But i'm gonna Rise up and hit you, and throw a couple of 'bows//
claim ta kill punches from Grace "N"ine "B"ullets "C"ocked and aim at will//(will n grace)
shame-ya-drilled my mettah-kills(medical) shock this dumbass more than retards exchanging-pills//
try and take-it-and-stop-me let him tell u he rich, but he like a cheatin game player he's only fakin a yacht-see//(yahtcee)
the stakes are too hot-b my punches like hitler to your eyes , one jab'll make him a not-see//(nazi)
Like masterbating next to ya mom...Im hard to cum by///(surpass my level)
Kickin ya off quick cuz you just irritatin on my nuts like ya gums & ''tongues dry''//
Now the times are being rearranged and changed its time to make room for The Vet
Its over cant you see that you lost and this Suns about to set??//

nice spit you got some talent lets leave it up to the votes...

this battle was pretty one sided yall... gods ripped ya apart... no hate tho but this is how i see it... rising sun didnt rhyme nearly enough, most of your lines didnt rhyme hommie and thats a must, ya gotta rhyme, so basicly gods wins by default right there... but GODS came real hard in this battle with punches personals and the flow was on lock... this one was over before it began...

VOTE- GODS

yo gods son just to let you kno it takes forever to get votes so im getting honest votes from other people. peace....
heres an example

LyriclMenace: u rap?
Mike12Ikeda: ya
Mike12Ikeda: who is this
Mike12Ikeda: yo u there
LyriclMenace: yeah
Mike12Ikeda: u from rb?
LyriclMenace: yeah
Mike12Ikeda: haha nice why'd u ask if i rapped then
LyriclMenace: cuz i added u to my list but i forgot y
Mike12Ikeda: jw
Mike12Ikeda: yo u wanna vote honestly on one of my battles...and i will return the favour with an HONEST vote
LyriclMenace: nah,im not registered at the original rb
LyriclMenace: im on relaunched
Mike12Ikeda: same
LyriclMenace: link me then
Mike12Ikeda: even if u say im wack i wont be offended so dont worry
Mike12Ikeda: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131179

damn we got some trouble.....
that was a terrrible battle.. and my main problem was your newbish structure....
both of you.. sure Gdos son is new but you all need to elevate... hopefully you will


but anyway...

godson
ur lines were horribly strecthed and this really fucked ur structure to hell....
your punchlines were connecting like a blind boxer( sparcley )
your actually lucky u had one good punchline...
but

Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//
never use that line or anything like it again it was wack

overall *3*


rising

u had strecthed lines to ya vers ewas on the verdge of being wack..
to mee this battle was on sided... you won becuz of just harder
hitting punches... witch still hit weak.. u cannot do this against an experienced batteler
and when i say this im only saying this to help ya not offend ya...
overall *5.6*

my vote obviously rising sun for just better punches alone
with out this u woulndt ahve won

this battle was pretty good but rising sun won this one real quick

gods son your lines were way to stretched and they werent really working for me..
punchlines were iight but some of them didnt really make that much sense...personals were really good and thats basically all you had.....your flow was way off it sorta changed in the middle so i wonder.....but overall your verse was iight but your structure was way off and you really need to work on that...

rising sun... damn son you had a nice verse .. you had some nice punchlines .. you had okay personals but they werent really that good...mutlies were decent..flow was really good and it was really merking god's son....overall you had a nice verse and this is the reason why you won good battle

Vote=Rising sun

ok wiinner rise by far way better drop

Open-

Your polluting this industry like SUVs
It’s best-you-leave cause your identity’s-deceived

nice 8/10

consitant verse

To beat me, you need a miracle bigger than your resurrection
Get to my recollection, many differences as you cannot get-affection


nice 8.6/10

closer

Giving me a loss for a no show, prophets aren’t down-with-that
If Jesus ever rapped, I hope that he would never sound-this-bad

overall 8.1/10

God

open



Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//

weak 7/10

consitant verse-u had none

closer

Now the times are being rearranged and changed its time to make room for The Vet
Its over cant you see that you lost and this Suns about to set??//

lame

overall 7/10

winner-rising sun

iight uppin for votes...

















yea i know ppl sleep on this shit..honest votes..

i thought this battle was pretty close...


Rising son:you had some pretty nice lines about him being jesus and stuff.. wase feelin you going after that... nice job

GOD: i was feeling your wordplay alot... hmm..

Rising sons punches hit harder, but god had some pretty nice wordplay in his verse.. and i was feeling that.. showed a lil bit more complex verse...



yea i think im a go wit gods son on this one... really close battler tho...
v/gods son

sorry.. thought this was in frontlines.. cant vote, not a registered voter or sum crap.. my bad... (backs off)

Iight lets vote up on this..please dont sleep...

Givin This Battle To Rising Sun... The whole verse was packed with punches... you made enough catholic references to murder him wit the quickness, but your closer really finished the job... GodsSon, you weren't too bad, elevate the punches for the future-- Good Job both of you- E.Z

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305

still uppin for votes this has been on for a week or so...

Weak Battle But Close one too.....

Rising Sun- your verse was nice ....your punches were good too...you had an decent flow to go along wit it....Your structure was good...you had some nie wordplay...but overall you did good in dis battle.....so good work on dis....

God's Son- your verse was also nice too...your punches were good and plus they were a tiny bit harder then his...you had also a decent flow to go along wit it...your structure was pretty bad seriously...some wordplay but overall you get my vote for hard hitin punches...but not by much...only a tiny bit you get my vote....honest vote

v/God's Son

no no no gods son took this.rising son u started out bad really bad but then u got into it and got good at the end christmas eve line very good personal.ur flow wasnt great a lil choppy but on stage definately would work not a bad verse at all cept for the beginning.7/10gods son u barely won this battle id give it to u cause u had the stronger opener its a lil played out but thats aight u had some weak personals and good personals and some hard hittin punches.an ok flow so u barely won id say 8/10 aight

v/gods son

uppin still lets go..dont sleep.

god gotz my vote, cause i was gettn lost in ya rhymes sun, and gods rhymed a lil more/better. But it wasnt a bad battle. Keep up the workd u both. Peace.

damn kids..vote up on this one and i'll return the honest favor thanks.

ok this battle was weak but I'm a vote

Rising...your opener was wack an so was your closer an everything in btw was jus ok or wack also, the jesus stuff was close to being good personals but somehow you messed those up, your verse was a little upsettingcuz all your personals an punches were close to being hot, your wordplay was kinda weak an your metas were lacking but you were jus a little rewording or rewriting from having a fire verse keep elevating you'll get there

Flow: 7/10
Punches:6/10
Personals: 4/10
Structure: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Overall: 27/50

God Son......ok you weren't much better, your opener was horrible don't do that again, your closer was a little better not much, you had a few punches nothing special, an your personals were momma jokes not good or creative at all, you had a few metas an a little wordplay, so even though a lot of your verse was played the punches that hit. hit hard so thats it

Flow: 5/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 6/10
Structure: 4/10
Metas: 6/10
Overall: 28/50

Close battle but god son edged it out by a little
Vote: God Son

Blah...horrible fucking battle...both spits weak...but I think Gods son had this slightly...both need to work on structure, and both severely need to work on punches. GS had the upper hand a bit in the punches department...but weak battle overall.

Vote- Gods Son