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Ambitious Vs Polfick
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You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared,
why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there? I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?' & why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?! If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup! And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that! Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans..... Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance |
Beating Newbs The Only Time You Gettin Applauded..... He Catching More Boos Than A Drunk Wasted Achoolic...... Must Have Butterbean Cuz Visions His Punches Off Target.... Should Star On MTV Because Polifick Easly DissMisses You..... He Came 2 Relaunch Because He A Replacement On Original...... Asscending Ass whoopens Go back 2 Origanal lyrical Crippally.... He Stay In Cypher..Because Thats As Close He gettin 2 a Victory.... 30-12...Dont Try Audio Because even Yo textness Is wasting..... Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination..... Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation..... |
^ y'd u take that shit bout the roc out ya sig.
put it back in there, thats cheating. |
^^^ uppin 4 votez.................................
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Ambitious-
You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared, why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there? I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?' & why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?! If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup! And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that! Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans..... Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance you better read your verse again kid....cuz its just wack...some lines didnt even rhyme.....punches were weak and that personal about the roc were gay... 4.5/10 Prolifick- i think breakin down your verse would be a waste of time becuz i'll just be puttin his verse to shame even more...ive seen better from you its like you didnt try....and you still merked him Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination..... Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation..... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Killed his whole verse.. vote-Prolifick |
Thanx 4 da honest vote uppin this tho dont sleep ppl......
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vote on my battle
aiight ambitious...I was feelin ya opener...then u kinda lagged off in the middle.... Prolifiks verses came a lot harder.... Beating Newbs The Only Time You Gettin Applauded..... He Catching More Boos Than A Drunk Wasted Achoolic...... ^^lmao....if yall dont get it...read it like 2-3 more times...nice man....anyways yall both nice but Prolific brought it harder there fore he gets my vote and vote on my battle...both of u....and if there is no vote in my battle...I will have my vote deleted rom this thread...Uno |
Cmon Dont sleep Lest Close This....................
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Votez a be good....................................
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honest breakdown...
first up is ambitious You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared, why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there? 5 I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?' & why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?! 7 If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup! And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up 6 Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that! 6 Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans..... Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance 4 hmm not great good flow...really taht's all that was good though...bad punches...not good personals... polifick Beating Newbs The Only Time You Gettin Applauded..... He Catching More Boos Than A Drunk Wasted Achoolic...... Must Have Butterbean Cuz Visions His Punches Off Target.... Should Star On MTV Because Polifick Easly DissMisses You..... He Came 2 Relaunch Because He A Replacement On Original...... Asscending Ass whoopens Go back 2 Origanal lyrical Crippally.... He Stay In Cypher..Because Thats As Close He gettin 2 a Victory.... 30-12...Dont Try Audio Because even Yo textness Is wasting..... Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination..... Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation..... pretty good...not great...i've seen a lot better from you...no personals...good structure ...decent flow...a couple of funny disses... v-polifickk RETURN THE FAVOR>..I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE HONEST ON YOUR BATTLE NOW PLEASE VOTE HONEST ON MINE>...thanks http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130312 |
^ are u all serious.?
no wonder why i dont post on this site, most of you suck at voting, n knowing whats hot. upp. |
^^ Yeaa Uppin 4 Votez..............................
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AMBIT
You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared, why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there? not bad personal.. but ok opener.. 8 I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?' & why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?! not bad.. but not amazing 7 If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup! And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up not really a good punch.. 6 Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that! meh good flow.. but not a good punch 6 Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans..... Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance not an amazing closer, considerin its kinda played.. PROLIF Beating Newbs The Only Time You Gettin Applauded..... He Catching More Boos Than A Drunk Wasted Achoolic...... Haha that killed like his whole verse...8 Must Have Butterbean Cuz Visions His Punches Off Target.... Should Star On MTV Because Polifick Easly DissMisses You..... Haha nice punch..8 He Came 2 Relaunch Because He A Replacement On Original...... Asscending Ass whoopens Go back 2 Origanal lyrical Crippally.... Haha alright punch.. 7 He Stay In Cypher..Because Thats As Close He gettin 2 a Victory.... 30-12...Dont Try Audio Because even Yo textness Is wasting..... not a bad punch.. 7 Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination..... Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation..... another line that ripped his whole verse.. 9 Overal Pro has got this FO SHO..... Peace |
this battle was 1 sided
polifick-had the multies the punches, merked the kid ambitious-elevate, 1 word, keep practicin tho so ma vote is gonna have to go polifick |
End This Please....................................
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now this was one hella of a battle !!!!!.....
ambitious u came strong in the begining but u slowy faded away in the end u came hard but polifick put ya fire out!!!! keep praticin and trust me your shit will start to flow more better..but all and all u did good son 7/10........ambitious now polifick was even greater i think your verses came stronger and made everything come alive punches where stronger and came a hella alot harderkidd u did good....real good the flow and thymes where rather stronger but still rs kinda faded too but not as much u kept it alive at the end ....(destanation...humilation) yea that was tight great was y to end that shit too!!!! u both where great but only one of yous can win so muh vote...............polifick |
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