I Shot Ya\\vs//Blimp
 

aight its set up drop ya verse....here are the rules
No feedin
no bitin
no hatin
no crew votes
10-15 lines
due 30 minutes after check in

checkin in ill drop in a minute aight nicca.......

it's blimp fag dis nigga betta duck when i blast man//
cause these shells a leave u topless like a trash can//
dis kid talk a good game but is lame as fuck//
he feel da pain from his dane, when we train his duck//
on my worst day ill beat u in da worst way//
u thirsty, heres some piss, you're bout as sweet as a slurpee//
i got shots dat a tare ya face up//
i heard ya girl powder her nose, but she ain't neva used make-up//(she sniff lines)
ill have ya ass paralyzed from da waist up//
burn into ya toungue dat a really fuck ya taste up//
u want weight then come and get me//
i done ran through mo base then babe ruth and ken griffey//
anything you want is gone be costin a quarter//
i talk in person cause my phone stay tapped like faucet water//
da way u rap ya career won't get dat far//
u da type 2 hate cause im hood like da front of a car//

holla back

waitin on u don't take 4 eva 2 drop a verse neither

shut up bitch im droppin right now...here is my
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This niggas all talk he dont really throw no shells
Punk pussy juss a blimp on my radar scale
Your rhymes is older than throwback point blank u suck
Your punches aint reachin me so why the fuck should i duck
Dont get it twisted we aint the same dont try to play or push me
The difference is i make pussy pay nigga u pay for pussy
You a blimp in the air but i fly higher than a plane
You the Goodyear blimp but on the side reads my name
No we're not the same your prewritten your lame in this game
Im holding on to more bars than your lil sisters bicycle frame
My lyrics paralyze you..u drop cuz u cant stand
Untill u get hot nigga keep yo ass in Newland

aight good enuf that will work for now i gotta go but ill be back to see wuts really good wit the battle

aight lets get some votes in here fa real...get this battle closed

yo half of his lines were from lloyd banks mixtapes betta yet listen 2 banks cd and you'll find it..

I shot ya needs 2 be original

matta fact is ya name dee smilz cause he do da samethang and he from my way

imma give it up to 'I SHOT YA'...this was a hot battle, i though blimp had him, but i read the other katz and it as harder, it was more directed to blimp then blimps was directed to 'I shot ya'...porb. becasue blimp went first, but it was still hot..good shit both ya'll

v./ i shot ya

aight lets get some more votes in here....and end this battle....man wut the hell u talkin bout how imma get some song from the llyod banks album and it doesn't even come out yet??hmm...is somebody scared there gonna lose......pussy

aight lets get some more votes in here aight.....The Underground Is Here

yo come on lets get some votes....only 1 person voted...that aint good enuf we need some honest votes in here and end this battle....

aight lets get some more votes in here this aint enuf to end the battle

waitin 4 votes need yall 2 check dis battle out so we can end it

i think blimp was raw and i shot ya did get some lines from bankz mixtape.... 1

yall check dis battle out so i can battle others

need some mo votes yall check dis out

I wasnt really feelin I Shot Ya...he was even feedin a lil bit. Wasnt really any good metas in there either. Blimp had a lot more creativity, he was usin some good metas, I like the one about bases and griffey lol that was nice. Blimp had the better flow, but he had a few streched lines, wasnt too many syllables off so the flow was still straight though. Tight structure from I shot Ya though. I just didnt think any of his punches were connecting.

v/Blimp

move ya body like a snake ma

Im ridin with Blimp on this battle....I shot ya had some nice disses and it was more direct. But Blimp punches were catchin my eye.

Flow:Blimp
Structure:Blimp
punches:Blimp
personals:I shot ya
metas:Blimp

Shout outs 2 da 9-1-9 and da 2-5-2 and my crew Mosiac
R.I.P. 2 all my falln soliders
Im still on da blok for ya "Hustle Hard Inc."

check....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136311
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136748
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

Fuckers learn how to vote, rules was no feedin....Shot ya fed...DQ Vote=Blimp

I like the way shot ya started THE BATTLE , and it almost seemed he ended the way he started it
(other words he started hott then came out hott)
he stuck to a topic of breakin down the opponent, which shows enuff skill to win this battle

blimp: you were also flamin, but i feel the 1 hitter punches was all over the place ,a couple nailed him, which was enuff to cause wound but overall

my vote: I shot ya

make sure to return the favores in my upcomin votes

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CHEK IT OUT1 LUV
GONE.....

although i cant vote i dont have 20 posts yet, im just spitten whats on my mind, it was a good battle!!

Blimp had the punches and the flow he has my vote

I loved Blimp's punches and metahpors, but I Shot Ya's was more personal wat swayed me was lines 10 and 12.

i shot you spit a good few bars and i liked blimps verse too but i shot ya was a little slicker and i like slick shit so i give it to him.



yo vote for my battles daillest vs caliph and killa vs caliph give a honest vote no hating crew love or dickriding

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vote on da prodigy vs exit wounds an i'll return the favor

need 1 mo vote

need 1 mo vote

yo i think blimp lost so yall need stop crew voten the other due was iaght yall we even but i give it to the other due besides blimp you no waht i'm sayin

blimp cuz his was funny and harder and i enjoyed his

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uppin

get the fuck outta here with the crew votes homey.....it said in the rules no crew votes....everybody knows im hotter than you so stop cheatin pussy...those votes should be dqed......uppin so i can finish this pussy off

OMG CALIPH YOU STRAIGHT D/R DOOD IT WAS ONLY A 2 SENTENCE EXPLANATION OMG WHAT A DICKRIDER JESUS blah blah

ya i gotta vote for i shot ya i agree with jdot i thought blimp had this battle until i read ishot ya's verse his hit harder but blimp not bad good battle

v/i shot ya

i shot ya took it

open close i shot ya
multiu non
enjoy ment ishot ya



v/ i shot ya

good battle...blimp you did koo but yo basics rhymes aint gone cut it against i shot yas assault you had good structure rhymes were alright but punches weere weak
i shot..that was koo nicewordplay you won this battle to me bcause yours was hittin harder andi was feelin you more.......no hatin just real pimpin.....

can you guys please vote ....holla
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