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da pimp vs. ILL Tempa
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10-20 Lines No Crew No D/R No Hate Check in sometime today. Verses due by 12 noon tomorrow. |
Since you haven't even seen this yet or just haven't even checked in i'm gunna extend tha deadline to 30 minutes after check in. (This isn't my checkin cuz u spittin first)
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ay, can yall please vote on ma battle wit ..eclipse.., i'll vote on dis if yall vote on ma battle wit eclipse
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Don't free post in my threads or i'll have to KO you again. LOL
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checking in
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Even if I spit first/
I'll still drop a sick verse/ Who wants to start a beef/ I'll grab the pliers and one by one, pull out your teeth/ My torture methods vary/ my techniques scary/ But my flow will cripple you like voice of Mariah Carey/ I'm beating a cheater/ I’ll slice him up with the scythe of the grim reaper/ My shits deeper than the ocean/ what's with all the commotion/ stop boasting/ You’re to blame/ the very same hater who tried to cheat his way to fame/ You’re no veteran/ everyone watch as I shatter him/ |
You can't be serious, is that tha verse you gonna try to win with//
Read my verse and pay attention, let me show you how to present this// Tha battle is on, it's war time so bitch nigga knuckle up// His verse looks like it got beat wit a bag of "What tha fuck?"// I can't believe you 1 and 0, who did you "get lucky with?"// Probly anotha guy cuz ya profile says u like suckin dick//(Fa Real) From his icon i can tell that this nigga likes "Lil Wayne"// But not tha rapper, he likes tha geeky gay one cuz he's tha same// I ain't even gonna waste my time with you cuz it's obvious you "suck"// Talkin bout you gonna shatter me, bitch you couldn't shatter a glass mug// I'm done merkin you, so you can go back to watchin looney tunes// This "CAT" needs some time by himself, so he can go "lick his wounds". |
Tempa took this battle with ease his punches obviosly crushed da pimps pimps lyrics were wack u need to up your vocabulay and u may want to concider hittin up tha tutorials
vote-ILL Tempa |
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i`ll temper you get this n` every catogory.
da pimp ( what sort o` names that) your stucture was jus str8 up ridiclious. and i wasnt feeling any line you spat. i`ll temper your best line was definitey the closer ( the lick his wounds one) but i wasnt feeling the others all though they were hella lot better than da pimps. vote-i`ll temper |
Obviously Ill tempa took this one.. nice word play, flow and hard punches... da pimp work on rhyme scheme, strucutre, vocab and personals. merking battle.
v/ill tempa plz hit up my sig |
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i think its quite obvious who won this....
Tempa knocked him out!! pimps punches were too weak |
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People Fucking Come Vote On This. If You View This Thread And Do Not Vote I Will Haunt You.
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da pimp you just didnt come hard at all. You werent hittin any punchlines. Your structure was WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY OFF. No personals, no... .. . nothing. But you did try I guess.
Ill Tempa: Good verse, structure, flow, I think you said it best, Thats what you expect to win with lol v/Ill Tempa |
IIght one more and it's done. Preciate all tha votes.
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Word, drop an honest vote on one of my posts if you dont care
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illl tempa you won this handsdown, da pimp didnt stand a chance and thats why my vote goes to ill tempa
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