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Syck Vs. Maku JaiiLiin
A'ight...
10 Lines No Hate D/R Crew Votes Blind spit. Drops due one hour after check in. A'ight waitin for you to check. |
a'ight let's go...
checkin in on this one............. |
A'ight this i my check in...
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A'yo...check this shit...
Fuck these weak fucks...I'm winnin' when boozed The fact is I could win.........if I spit tryin to lose "I am what you can't be"...true.......I'm not weak You ill....... is like Adam Sandler tryin' to be meek Kids so wack...........he wont throw any punches Read you? I'd rather eat student's rotten lunches Ya ninteen beaten by a sweet-16 bet you ashamed Haha, ya fucked up style goes wit ya fucked up name I will always remember...herb I merk'd Maku Jaliin.... I'll compare it to when soldiers shot Osama Bin Laden... A'ight... |
Start Ya Crew’s Killing with my league of the horsemen//
I "want ya kids’ death" like~ chris reeves wit fetal abortion*// You couldn’t be like me if we both rocked a similar mask**// Cuz you’ll "take more beatings"~ than a weak criminal’s ass// Ya shook! You’ll know you’re not 'syck' when you hear this shit// I just made you bleed~ like a hemophiliac on her period// I’ll leave you to jack off till ya rupture ya hand// I boned ya girl, now I got ill intentions to fuck wit ya fam***// Took ya head outta the clouds, so I’m the nigga that earthed you// Originated ya best traits like I’m the chicken that birthed you// *for christopher reeves to walk again he needed fetal stem cells for the operation. He needed to use the dead children from abortions. **We both have the picture of The metal Gear character below our names. ***His sig says Ill intentions, don't fuk with the fam |
aight everyone, let's get some votes comin in.....
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syck i could tell ur spit was more of a new person's spit, you had weak punches and was just flowin rhymes together, but they didnt hit hard.
maku decent verse had some good lines throughout the battle, you basically just took this guy he didnt have the experience...good reeves line too i liked it ... holla v=maku |
Haha...wasn't even tryin in this battle...Maku, wanna have a rematch after this wit my real name?
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shit i really dont kno, but i guess i'll have to give it up to syke...i thought he was gonna merk maku...then maku put up a battle, but didnt quite make it...imma give my vote to maku
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oh my bad...syke...im trippn...ya'll both did yo shit though
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uppin 4 votes, thanks for the input!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yo this battle was shitty syck you like a newb and maku your stuff was really bad it was better though so u get my vote
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beat down
Start Ya Crew’s Killing with my league of the horsemen//
I "want ya kids’ death" like~ chris reeves wit fetal abortion*// 8/10 nice opener didnt get it at first till i read ya shit... creative You couldn’t be like me if we both rocked a similar mask**// Cuz you’ll "take more beatings"~ than a weak criminal’s ass// 5/10 alright Ya shook! You’ll know you’re not 'syck' when you hear this shit// I just made you bleed~ like a hemophiliac on her period//\ 3/10 didnt need to hear that shit, mental pic I’ll leave you to jack off till ya rupture ya hand// I boned ya girl, now I got ill intentions to fuck wit ya fam***// 6/10 got points for the dissen of his crew Took ya head outta the clouds, so I’m the nigga that earthed you// Originated ya best traits like I’m the chicken that birthed you// 4/10 alright punch shity endin Fuck these weak fucks...I'm winnin' when boozed The fact is I could win.........if I spit tryin to lose 5/10 good punch bad openin "I am what you can't be"...true.......I'm not weak You ill....... is like Adam Sandler tryin' to be meek 3/10 wack shit Kids so wack...........he wont throw any punches Read you? I'd rather eat student's rotten lunches 3/10 good punch, but not tru his punches 10 times harder Ya ninteen beaten by a sweet-16 bet you ashamed Haha, ya fucked up style goes wit ya fucked up name 7/10 nice diss with his name and age I will always remember...herb I merk'd Maku Jaliin.... I'll compare it to when soldiers shot Osama Bin Laden... 2/10 weak fuckin endin, and aint that bitch still alive?? Maku- 26/50 Syck- 20/50 hit my shit up honestly dont vote for me just cause i vote for you, and dont vote agaisnt me cause i vote agaisnt you.... |
uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Maku:i thought your whole verse was better,from start ta finish,the only line i did'nt like was the hemophiliac one,you had superior vocab n ryme scheme,
LM or SYCK,I think you know you came really weak in this battle,vocab was simple,was'nt feelin your punches ta tellya the truth,you got out battled in this , VOTE/MAKU PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 skforty7 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 gunit |
I'll Get 100 Posts N Come Back Ta Vote.....soon...
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yo, I'll give this one to Maku for keeping ill. Syck made me just that. Maku had an overall better verse becouse of punches and flows. Sycks shit was less punchess then it was just fillers and threats. work on Ur vocab, nobody wants to read or hear a verse completely covered wit the word shit, fuck, bitch. thats newb shit kid. just try harder next time.
V/ Maku JaiiLiin Hit up atleast one of the battles in my sig and drop and honest vote. peace |
thankx for the support, uppin 4 votes on this one!
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thanks a lot....but let's keep it going, uppin 4 votes on this one.
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Maku: ur vocab was good and ur whole verse was pretty good... I think u came a lot harder in this battle either that or syck has very little skill...
Syck: good personals and weak vocab but u gots ta elevate wit ur rhyme shceme v/maku |
aight okay battle...but 2 me dis shit was wun sided syck if u not a newbie datz fukked up cuzz u really need da step ya bar's up no hate
opener-mak...dat was hott strcuture-umm a tie punchlines-mak multis-nun from both creativty-mak personals-mak finisher-umm a tie on dat wun i wasn't feelin nun of enjoyed-mak....he came hard pause..his opener was betta than syck whole verse and datz a true story.. my vote-mak http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135012 ^^^LINK RITE THERE..PLEEZ RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL...GON |
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