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SevenThird vs. -bODy CoUnT-
8-10 Lines- House Rules.... I'm goin to sleep- Ill drop tommorow
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Aight homey...hit this battle up 2morrow i'll have dropped by then also...1
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Checkin in- Where you at? you said you were droppin by tonight... My verse will be up midnight, will yours?
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I Just Murdered You, Just no Show it will look better for you.
This kids 8 and 5- But "Body" can't "count" to Nine And with a 45 To ya Skull- I'll Blow Victory Out-your-Mind and I just figured out why someone would join Chryme Syndicate Cuz You like Fuckin in the Ass- Cummin Shitty's just deliberate My Spits-Intricate - Watch me smack this fag in his face Knowin Last is his Place Always Like Fat-kids-that-race Just a Bay-Area-Drag-Queen- and a Lightweight Be Realistic You can bring "Fi-bros-sis"- Still I'll Leave you "feelin-Cystic" (Playing of Cystic Fibrosis- Saying you can bring "5 Bros Sis") This "Hitchiker's in the bad side of town- Just Wishin for Dumb-Luck" Not Even Mad That you "Lost"- Still "flippin a Thumbs-Up" Quote:
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Yo Last night ended a Half Hour ago in "Frisco"- Thought your verse was gonna be up- where you at?
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My bad homey... here it goes
Some big shit talker, but in this spit i got yo number A bay area killa, put a so-called psyco in his slumber So anxious to get yo ass whipped, nigga you get discredited THe battle was up 2 days before you post, so you could write and edit it Nigga you said it, cept this city nigga wont go out like dat NO One said a thing to you when you disautimized yo kitty cat Played pitty pat wit daddy's booty cheeks and spladdered dat Detsined 2 rhyme, you destined 2 get fucked wothout a jimmy hat "I'm going to sleep, i'll post tomorrow... shit sure took a while So get yo 2 day written shit samshed by a 30 minute freestyle |
iight this was a tight battle from both but i was really feeling seven verse alot more ..
and I just figured out why someone would join Chryme Syndicate Cuz You like Fuckin in the Ass- Cummin Shitty's just deliberate My Spits-Intricate - Watch me smack this fag in his face Knowin Last is his Place Always Like Fat-kids-that-race ^^damn son you merked him right there bodcount your shyt was pretty good for a newbie but you really lost the battle sorry...your personals were iight but they were pretty off at times....overall you did a nice job and you really tried hard but you lost.. v:seven |
good drop by both of ya bot body count sorry but ya lost dont feel bad everyone does it
vote seven |
Uppin for some votes.... we'll return the favor...
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lol one sided battle
seven third: nice shit dawg...sick structure...good personals...good flow....god punches...this shit was straight fire....nice opener too it was sick....keep elevatin mayn cuz u hot fo sho body count: was aiight not enuff to take seven but u tried...u had good flow but bad structure..bad vocab n ok personals n bad punches i aint gon poll vote this until yall vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131972 |
seventhird: i was feelin your verse it flowed together reall good...was pretty consistent and nice structure...some really good punches and a good personal also...i think you coulda came harder with the punches but they were decent and hard enough for you too win this battle:
overall : 7.5/10 body count: your verse wasnt that bad but it wasnt that good either it was mediocre...some good punches some weak punches flow was consistent for the most part....structure was decent only choppy in one place...you also coulda used harder punches and more multies wordplay and multies woulda made your verse hotter overall: 6.5/10 vote: seventhird ~!1!~ |
Imma have to go wit seven on dis one da comin shitty part did it for you though body count came back wit some shit off top that was decent good battle but seven got dis check some of my battles and I'll return an ohnest favor
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uppin this for more votes..................................
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aiight body count, u had some aiight lines, ya shits pretty good. but the nigga seventhird took this one hands down, i laughed at that shit about fat kids in a race dog.
vote-seventhird but ay, i poll when i see a vote on my battles.. they in my sig..... |
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k..
punches:seven flow:seven :complexity: definatly seven.. to me the complexity of sevens verse, compared to that of body coutns, cause just a outstanding difference.. this was enought secure the win.. good job to both of you... Bodycount: you \r verse was on the simple side a lil bit, just work on more content in ya verses.. v/seven |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754
Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win.... Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=( |
SevenThird - Good verse nice vocab and structure. But you should make punches easy for tha ready. Ones that you don't have to explain. 7/10
BodyCount - Don't know bout everyone else but i was feelin you to. This was a good battle. I liked yo punches more. But seven got cha a little on tha lyrical tip. Vote - Seven |
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