...Eclipse...vs SparSin
 

yo eclipse go drop a vote on this battle i need one more vote and if u vote i'll vote on dis one http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131153

checkin in
 

ok 30 minutes starten, lets trip and flip this shit eclip

since we times
 

do the math, i started this after checkin....

eclipse best hold pussy lips so ya dont piss ya pance
Sparsin emptyin full clips seein if this cat can dance
even murder ya only fan, cuz you down with this clipse,
the mods should ban you wit quickness
wtf this fools problem, he sound like an iraq terrist
not gana stop to bomb them till ya back is bair less
Sin jackin ya fake chain, look at the flames in my eyes
slice ya brain wita razor blade then release my discise
its the DEVIL surprise, your spit aint gana phase me
shit ya flow couldnt even scare a new born baby

.............can't compete with best verses where quotes-and riddles-linger...
you cudnt get the "upper hand" if you asked for votes-with-middle-fingers!..
.....................calling my self the best is the only way to stress-my-level...
..........you can bite my bars all day and still wont test-my-mettle![metal]...
.............dropping the skill-in-scrolls livin for no reason? i'll kill-these-souls...
................my techniques-are-malice wicked puchlines seek-and-damage...
..................i reak-with-talent sick flows designed to reap-the-challenge...
if Adam is Gods image of perfection then nature made you to keep-the-ballance
fuck it i'll start to strangle these vets go for it bitches wanna tangle on text?
i'll kill you so many times that i'll get hated on by the angel-of-death!


came weak.. butgoodluck!!

my fault my lil sister pressed my send when i was doing my verse so if amod could delete that i would much apreciate that

can't compete with best verses where quotes-and riddles-linger...
you cudnt get the "upper hand" if you asked for votes-with-middle-fingers!
calling my self the best is the only way to stress-my-level...
you can bite my bars all day and still wont test-my-mettle![metal]...
dropping the skill-in-scrolls livin for no reason? i'll kill-these-souls...
my techniques-are-malice wicked puchlines seek-and-damage ...
i reak-with-talent sick flows designed to reap-the-challenge...
if Adam is Gods image of perfection then nature made you to keep-the-.ballance....
fuck it i'll start to strangle these vets go for it bitches wanna tangle on text?.
i'll kill you so many times that i'll get hated on by the angel-of-death!...
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aight yall truthfully eclipse got this his punches were hittin harder and he had his vocab goin for him both of yall's structure's were good but ima go wit eclipse he just came harder and sparsin u was good your flow was but eclipse got this wit a lil harder punches

This was truely a new b battle. Not to discourage ya'll but you both need to elevate. But that's what battlin is for right? I give this to eclipse cuz he had more punches that were also hitting harder. Sparsin yo verse was just hella weak. No good punches. And both of you had parts of ya verses that didn't rhyme. Keep elevatin and good luck in future battles. Vote - Eclipse

P.S. - Both of you return tha favor. Tha link is in my sig.

iight but why dont we have any poll vote!!

come one we need some more voted please

uppin .......2 x times come on now lets get some votes please

show some love
 

hey hit up an honest vote, this was a free style also so give both props, we wil hit ya shit up just leave a link

I'ma go with Eclipse on this one, to be honest Eclipse I wasn't really feel'n the opener and some of the shit after that, fortunatly about half way through you really picked it up, the adam line was tight, your flow was kinda choppy but I read the first drop not the edited one.

Sparsin you need to work on your punches, get creative with them, your flow was okay but your punches were weak.

Cause of better punches that hit harder this one goes to Eclipse.

dont sleep on this shit!!!!!!!
 

uppin please vote on this honestly, and leave a link, im not gana just vote for you if you vote 4 me, and wont vote against you just cause you did me...

aiight both of u had decent verses, sparsin, ya opener was pretty good, but the last line of ya second bar didnt have enough syllibles, also some parts of ya rhyme i didnt understand, but u do got skill dog u aint wak.
eclipse, your opener was a bit weak, but like that other nigga said, u picked up well afta that. the adam line was hot i actually laughed when i read that, also ur finish was pretty good. ima give this one to eclipse.

Vote- Eclipse

[b]Yo is this that nigga from Orignal RB......if so what up man this is Unbroken


I'ma go with Eclipse on this one, to be honest Eclipse I wasn't really feel'n the opener and some of the shit after that, fortunatly about half way through you really picked it up, the adam line was tight, your flow was kinda choppy but I read the first drop not the edited one.

Sparsin you need to work on your punches, get creative with them, your flow was okay but your punches were weak.

Cause of better punches that hit harder this one goes to Eclipse.

v/ecipse

eclpise dawg u got this spar dawg u good but didnt come like in our battle su came pretty hard but i gotta give this to eclipse he won by more punches
v/eclipse no hate in this vote just speakin the truth

return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131634

close this shit!!!!!!!!
 

hey man good battle eclipse you got ya KO, but check out my AUDIO wit tempa in my sig... peace dog take it easy

somone jus vote for eclipse...
 

so this shit closes and he gets his win, good battle dog, hey check out my first audio if ya got time but dont just right down winner and vote explain what we need to work on, or if ya couldnt understand shit... c what im sayin peace..
battles in my SIG

SparSin- Excellent flow, I could feel it all the way out, nice rhymes, I liked the ending.

Eclipse- You started out strong, but I lost you dawg, so I'm gonna give the W

Winner- Sparsin

if this is eclipse from rb original then :laugh: he dont need to elevate
this guys a vet am i right or am i right

Vote 4 Eclipse
 

man he got this shit just say some B.S. and vote for that fool, so i dont have to look at this shit every day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok this battle goes to eclipse nice punches....sparsin work on your vocab...
and be witty with the words...and be more personal...because personals win battles...
flow and structure was even..but eclipse gets the creativty and punches...

vote/e
for having harder hitting punches...
this was just a newbie battle....both need to to elevate....im just playin
props to vote...keep it up...

i mean props to both....my bad...dont let me discourage you all.....
after all.....this is a newbie battle....just playin..... :thumbup: