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ILL Tempa vs. Atticus
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10-16 lines. No crew,hate, d/r, etc. Check in A.S.A.P. Verses due 30 min. Afta check in. |
Ayo This Is A Check...
But Make The Lines Lims Lower... 8-14... Cuz I Got Other Battles Pending So I Needa Have Something Left Na Mean... Lol, But Ya I'm Here... ~One~ |
Who's spittin first?
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You're Better So You Can Go First...
dsfdddddddasdddddddddddfadfdasdfaddddddddddggggggg gasdg |
iight check in............Have my verse in 20 min.
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Aiight Mayn...
I'll Have Mine Down Soon After... ~One~ |
I'm 2 and 0 wit 2 KO's, so you betta bring all yo weapons//
This nigga wanted me to spit first, cuz he's used to sloppy seconds// I keep it 10-16 lines, cuz my shit is short -n- sweet// Your like a legless track runner, you just can't compete// I open my mind, find tha rhymes, and let him have it// It looks like he stood behind a screen door and some1 threw shit at it// His parents offered me money to find him cuz he got kidnapped// I found this chump in "Textual Territory", gettin "Bitch Slapped"// This nigga got a set of "Dentures" made just for "Biting"// But he's still no good, like a cake without tha icing// Ya "Breath" stays "Hot" so when you "Spit Lyrics" they "Reek"// He's so dumb he takes a "Ruler" to bed to see how "Long" he sleeps// U got 40 posts and no record, garbage history// This battles over, I win, by Flawless Victory. |
ur up....................Good Luck kid.
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Where you at. You was supposed to post a long ass time ago. And u alrady checked in. You only had 30 min. but i'm gun wait for ya.
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Ayo Mayn, Sorry About This...
Like 10 Minuts After You PMed Me And We Sorted Ish Out I Gota Call And Had To Bounce... I'll Still Spit If Your Chill Widdit Though |
Ayo Sry It Took So Long...
Shit Came Up The Other Day... And Props Mayn, Thats A Tite Verse... Good Luck... ~One~ Homie Couldn't Be-TEMPERED If He Needed-To-Blacksmith!... And ILL?, Not Even When He's-Tethered To His TEMPA-pedic-Matress//1 I'LL Up The TEMPA-ture When My Lines-CEL-YA-THIS-Art...(CELYATHIS/CELCIUS) And Send-Ya-Verse Into ORBIT So You Can Say Your High-In-The-Charts//2 And He Says I SPIT-After Cuz I Love Them-Sweet-N'-Sloppy... But This-BASTEREDs Been On My -STEM- Like His Meters'-Used-Unproperly//3 (Regular METER And Rhythem,Goes On The End Or Beging) Daym And Just-Look At All Of Your -Punches-... Never Mind Jokes, Just-Look, It's Sad I Gota Show You What You Should Come-With//4 Says He Can RUN CIRLCLES Around-Me, But Not Even With Geometric-Math-Tools... Cuz He Has No FOOTING Around-Me Like A Leggless-Track-Crew//5 Tryn Be-Defiant By Sayin I'll Do 10-16 Instead Of Within-Those-Asked-For-By-Me... But He's-Lying About Not Listenen-See,Cuz Just Then-He-Didn't-Go-Past-Line-14!//6 |
i have 2 say ill tempa got my vote cuz he had betta punchlines, originality, structure, & his flow was on point but atticus u have a ok flow but u need 2 elevate it a lil bit mo
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first off the batt, atticus he already had that legless track runner thang in there... you prolly shoulda used somethin else... it was a nice bar, but still thats kinda feeding..
atticus ur verse really didnt have ne flow at all... your punches were like sentences, you need to chop that shit down a smidgen or focus on matching sylables or somethin :P... ill tempa i felt like your punches were real simple typed ones.. but i liked that ruler one, even tho it was a joke before it was a punch :P.. i believe atticus got this due to his punches... they hit a bit harder.. except for that fed line :P, that almost lost my decision lol.. v/Atticus |
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uppin fo votes.................
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while you wait, http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131511 lol... much appreciated
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^^^...
I Juss Seen This So I'll Vote Homie... Upping For More Votes... 1 And 1 ILL Temp You Faggot... PMing Me Like Your Gonna Get A Landslide Victory Or Some Shit... Bitch... |
^^^^Shut up jit. It shouldn of been a landslide victory cuz my shit was hotter than urs and u said ya self that i'm better than you. That's tha only vote you gonna get. Hoops prolly saw how garbage u was so he told you he'd vote for you if ya battled him cuz ur an easy win. And it took you forever to cum up wit that cheesy ass verse. You ain't even get it in on time.
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Ayo, Why Haven't I Been KO'd Yet???...
Lololmao... |
Cuz ur not gunna get KO'd. Cuz Hoops voted for you so you would battle him. But don't worry ur still gonna lose.
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tempa.. first off.. i vote for who i think deserves it.. you gettin real cocky, and annoying actually.... dont put my name in shit, cause you dont know me, never will... *shakes head at cocky ass INTERNET emcees*... if you think my vote was swayed by any reason, then blacklist me or shut the fuck up and live with the truth
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when I first red, Temps verse, I thoaght he would get my vote. but ATT got em wit about 3 or 4 personals. I dont give a fuck if he fed, if Ur verse is tight, It shouldnt matter. He kill that legless track crew reversal type shit. his openers werent all that great but the rest was much better. Ill Tempa kept it comical but too simple. niggaz luv to hear and read word play, punches, and metaphores. Try getting more of this into Ur rymes then rematching him. all in all, Atticus did ok as long as he stops that roman word Yatzee game shit. niggaz dont care about vocab if it doesnt have to do wit the battle. We all can do dat shit, but we dont becouse it wont get U too many wins. but its kewl, keep doing ya shit.
V/Atticus |
Don't get me wrong i ain't no bitch. But Hoops and Atticus my bad about gettin mad. But aye i that's where i got my name, ILL Tempa for my bad temper. But n e wayz i ain't tryin to net beef so as far as i see tha shit is squashed. What's done is done i can't get mad ova ya opinions. So that's that. Uppin 4 votes.
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This was a good battle this shit was neck and neck both came off strong but id have to give this one up to Tempa his punches and rhyme scheme was better i liked the way atticus used tempas name alot to go with his rhymes but he used it too much it got played out and one other thing that made me vote for tempa was that atticus said "Says He Can RUN CIRLCLES Around-Me" and tempa never said that so it kinda made it look like he was making shit up just to make his verse better but both of you keep elevating and good battle
vote - tempa |
All Evens, I Think...
2-2... Keep With THe Votes... ~One~ |
DAYUM..this was a sick battle
ill tempa: the personals was killin it mayn sick shit......the punches were pretty good...but i think atticus outshined u on ur own line...punches and structure was there....vocab wasnt there......your opener and closer was SICK...overall 41/50 atticus: hmm...your personals were good jus not as good as his...but your punches were hittin harder than his......your structuer was ok and ur flow was sick..ur vocab was better and u had more word usage adn better wordplay overall 42/50 Atticus took this cuz of vocab...sick battle though can u return the favour and drop an honest vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131625 |
no beef or nething.. but y does his IP match on ill tempa and drastic outlaw......... horus just got banned for that, and his IP's matched like that also... check em both say exact same thing
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our IP's are the same cuz im his cuzin and im at his house for the weekend if you dont believe me check my IP's that are on all my other post from before the weekend that was my honest vote just like yours for atticus if i thought my cuzin lost i would of said so
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thats cool an ery thing, but if i was att i wouldnt want some dudes cuzin voting in his battle na mean ? thas like askin the kids mom who look sbetter between the both of you... but thats just me.. aight , get at me
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I understand. Bat damn you like a detective n shit. LOL. I never even noticed that IP shit till you said somethin. And when you said sumthin i didn't even know what it was i had to figure it out.
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aye im at tha crib right now but damn dawg i aint knoe fam couldnt vote u knoe wut i mean and if u dont think my vote is an honest vote disqualify it but im sayin if i wanna vote for fam i dont see tha problem in it hit me back one
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uppin for votes.......
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I voted on this battle, so could U guys do me a favor and vote honestly on my battle 2 verse each battle wit Bk 2 Tha Future. Hay hoops, I stayed off that gangsta theme just to see what U'd use againse me dis time.LoL
Hoops- "Hay Eye, I did'nt like the way U presented Urself, U ripped this kat rather unfit for a Newbee. I'll vote for him cuz his name makes me go Zoooooommmm." Just fuckin wit ya ha ah ah. check out this battle in my sig. and sorry for freeposting. back to the battle. |
Uppin for vote......
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3-2 Me...
I Dont Care About The Cusin Shit... I Dont Take The Internet Seriously To Swet Shit Like That... If They Are Cheating... Well, I Feel Bad For Them Cuz That Means The Actaully Had To Take Time Outa There Day To Make More Then One Account To Get A Vote... Haha, So Its Whatever... Vote Counts, Now Keep The Votes Coming... ~One~ |
Uppin for votes.........
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Yo atticus get a mod to close tha other thread that u started.
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Aiight...
And Ayo... GIVE SOME FUCKING VOTES YOU STUPID FUCKS!!!... Goddam, Lazy As Shit... This Is Getting Rediculous... We've Got Like A Whole Page Of Me And ILL Tempa Upping!!!... |
LOL. Uppin for votes...........
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Upping This...
Lololmao, Why I Really Dont Know... |
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