!RIFF RAFF! VS the metaphor
 

aight, its a 10 line battle (1 hour time limit) to start once youve checked in.

usual house rules..e.t.c e.t.c.

good luck homie..... peace out :thumbup:

alright g im checkin in and good luck to ya

yo check it

You wished this loss upon you...so you can call me the genie/
I'ma call you Michael Jackson...cause I'm still battling wennie's(whack mc's)
this guy's a cow...so he spit nothing but bullshit/
you hate to take an L...but i'll fade over you like an eclipse/
nigga I'ma assassin...so you next to get asssassinated/
the only time you'll ever beat me...is them day's that you masterbated/
you gonna need more than some 4 leaf clover's...cause you pushin your luck/
Im'a hurt you like you got cuaght a porn...let's just say you got fucked/
I'ma end this one quick no one has to here ya riff raff/
you gonna get slaughterd...woarse than a fucken baby caff/

aight ere it goes.

yo, i even dropped first, and still he didnt hit me where it hurts
cos hes jus fake....like an antheist kissing bibles in a church
no doubt hes a kon....cos he thinks he can bite for free
shit! the faggogts like low fat drinks, hes too light for me
you bring shame and disgrace on your fucking proud nation
i mean, ive battled better `cats`....in the stray kitten foundation
son i know you retarded.... so i`ll drop this half hearted
you jus like shite builders....ya never finish what you started
you may merk fakes daily....like that takes balls, go get a tutor
never stepped to a vet before....now hes getting neutered

yo guys.
the first line is meant to be. ( he even dropped first not i) jus makes a lot more sense....

nice drop dog I like it if you beat me here wwe gonna go at it again

thanks man. your drop wasnt bad either
dont matter who wins
we`ll do this again some time fa sho.......
keep elevating and i`ll do the same...... peace out

every body knows who won this but i can't vote cuz we in tha same crew cough*metaphor*cough

never mind the above i won this hands down
like ma sig says ( thats my wurd)

uppin for some hounest votes on this fucker.
peace out

thug matrix.. dont post if you cant vote, freepostin for no reasons annoying...k now...

metahpore didnt really have one punch that lnaded hard... and his flow was kina off... the words he used to rhyme stuff i didnt like em that much...you just talked about what you gonna do to him, but didnt do it na mean? you need to work on cuttin out that filler some, and get ot the punches and start swinging..

riffraff - your strongest punch was that cat line.. was original.. but besides that line, your other punches werent really stickin... your flow was pretty good.. last line tho was shaky.. didnt really feel the nuterd line.. should have used some punch using future or something.. at least thats what i would have done..

v/raff got this is every catagory pretty much.. good battle both of you

thnx for the advice dog.
bumping this fucker for some more hounest votes..

alright here check this

the metaphor: your shit was pretty good mayn..i can see you have MAD POTENTIAL..some of your lines were ok but if you worded them differently they would be sick...your personals were ok...but again if they were worded more intelligently it would of been better...punches...were pretty good...vocab...not there but you tried...flow was there..and strucuture wasnt that good...keep elevatin you have the potential to be a vet

RIFF RAFF: vocab..you had better vocab then him...and you sounded more intelligent when you spit your verse..your good too...but if you worded some things better it would of been SICK....your punches were there...some lines were funny...personals were there aswell...and you had better flow and structure.....keep elevatin you good mayn

vote: RIFF RAFF

can u return the favour and drop an honest vote in this battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131625

upping for more fucking votes on this.
where the hell y`all at

Flow-Tie
Punches- Riff
Multies- Riff
Vote~ Riff

aight cheers mate.
not much feedback though but thanxs for the vote anyway.
upping this yet again.
c`on guys vote please!

flow-riff
punches-tie
personals-riff
multies-riff
swearing-the metaphor (just playing)

good battle

metaphor u did godd but riff came harder

v/riff

hit up my sig please

jus need one more vote
so uppin

METAPHOR: FLOW WAS okay. no need to explain punches, and structure was fair. I seen a personal in there too. note: come with punches that will stick and make a dude be like damn.

RiffRaff: You had betta flow, and better structure, You came equipped with stronger punches especially that line where you were talking about he too light for you....keep it cuz i see potential.

v/riffraff....ps. return the favor and place a vote to this battle in my sig