The Black Plague vs. integer1337
 

10-12 lines
House Rules
No Bullshit

Spit 30 mins after me, I'll drop in about 30 mins

You can take the 1 out of ya name after this battle is done...
..and put it in your loss column,then take the other 3 #'s and run
Kid I'm takin away your confidence so much you afraid of yourself
You lookin around in desperation, and all you can say is :help:
Check this out, his bitch slapped thread read "challenging all noobs"
Challenging? That was funny, but this kid's faker than pamela's boobs
Sorry man, I'm not trying to be rude, but this dude is fuckin pathetic
Just droppin this kid so easy, you'd think it was just my rhetoric
I feel less sorry for you than I do for your computer keyes
Already got 33 posts, droppin wack shit like a sped on speed
The plague has been unleashed, I'm already spreadin my illness
Anti-biotics ain't gonna work, you cant stop an unstoppable sickness

For you fools who dont know, rhetoric is like a set of rules, its somethin you're supposed to do

I keyed that shit in half an hour....

Integer, u got 30 mins, startin now :gfy:

Put your hands in there air
'cause integer is here!

1-2-3 now get it on h0!


You know I'm the best, you should go get dressed
just like the rest, I'm not the one with 1 breast

I got the illest rhymes up-to-date
I'm like an armor plate, you shouldn't overrate!

You know how I eat my sandwiches for dinner?
Just like a sinner, wanting to be a winner!

You know who the fuck I am, I'm the bad joke
You know I put sugar in my great white coke

Look at that idiot, Black Plague
I'll kill him faster than you can say 'nouvelle vague'

And I know how fast you can say that, just try
Cum shot right in your sister's eye

God, what a fag...

Uppin, drop a battle link and I'll return the favor

Mann both yall some fags dat suck big cocks. escpecially mine cuz im gay. Ill battle both yall.

uppin' huppin' for votes, boats, quotes, throats

wooahhh.... I'm still too great

Uppin', duppin' for votes

uppin, duppin, guttin, owwwww!
more votes for sho!!!!!

to be fa real both of ya'll are garbage...but if anybody had to take this battle it would be the plague..he had better everythin than the other homeboy....integer i changed my mind i dont want to battle you...you would be a waste of time fa real and i dont have no lyrics that are wack enuf to compare to yours....plague your wack as hell to and now that ive seen your lyrics i dont wanna battle you eitha but i am if u aint scaread cuz u stepped ova the line...
Opener:neitha
Multies:neitha
Structure:integer
closer:Of Course Plague
overall:plauge

Integer you were garbage beyond belief how can u try to rap with lyrics like that...sorry man you just need to do some serious elevatin and im not tryin to be funny...your ryhmes remind me of that guy from scary movie 3..u know the white rapper...thats who u remind me of

Ha, Lmao at girl spit fire. She is a fuckin dumbass, she just mad cuz I made fun of her in bitch slapped. Who from underground Atlanta would be on this site?

Anyway, uppin for some votes

punches plague

flow the other guy

vocab neither

over all vote plague

o yeah and i dont got tha link rite now but go vote on my battle wit dipset_boy

Uppin this shit again.......

The Black Plague
structure was pretty good...flow was on target...a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...most of ur punches connected...personals were ok....

integer1337
structure sucked...it was way to simple...flow was on target, because their was nothing that could mess it up...no metas...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a stable flow...the black plaque had the better structure...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...the black plague gets my vote...

VOTE - THE BLACK PLAGUE

Ok, thanks for the votes, but I still need 3 more

Uppin...

Uppin, please vote, drop a link and i will return the favor

Aight, here this is how I break it down.

Integer, you need to work on your rhyming sense and become more complex in lyrics because 3/4 of the shit you wrote was gobbage. "And I know how fast you can say that, just try/Cum shot right in your sister's eye." C'mon now, that was so simplistic.

Black Pague, you also need to work on your complexity, you need to elevate more.

Opener: Plague
Multies: Didn't see any
Punches: Plague
Personals: Plauge
Structure: Integer
Ender: Plague
VOTE: Plague

Here's my current battle, please return the favor.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100

I think Black won this battle hands down...i really did not gety the other person rhyme.....1...2...3..wat good wit that but ya...Black had some good struc not alot of wordplay ort multies....nothing came from...the other person...weak battle..but black did some ok work........vote on my battle wqit metah iight///ill poll my vote when my battle get voted on

Vote....Black

One last vote needed....

Uppin

This was a really simple

Plague-you had pretty simple rhyme sceem going on and your ish was okay but i seen better from you......your punches was okay so keep it up

integer-your shit was good only thing you had was your flow you need to elevate man

but keep it up

v/Plague

both work on vocab
flow int
structure both need work
puunches plauge
overall plauge both need elevation though