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LyRiKaL19 vs unfortunate
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aight 10 lines spit... i go first... no crew... no hate... explaine votes... holla |
i got to handle some shit...b bak in like and hour
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I KNOW BITCHES LIKE TO RUN THEIR MOUTH THATS WHY I PULL A BLADE AND THEN YOU ARE OUT//
YOU SAID YOUR FROM THA HOOD, WEREN'T YOU A BOY SCOUT? EARNED YOUR BADGES IN WHAT...HOW TO TALK EBONIXS WHERE YO FROM HOMIE//BETTER TELL ME NOW// IF YOU CAN RUN MY LIFE BETTER//TELL ME HOW//CAUSE YOUR AS WELCOME AS WHITEY AT A POW WOW// LIKE TO SEE YOU TRY ME NOW// I'VE MADE YOU BECOME A PART OF MY PAST// THE GOOD DIE YOUNG BUT THE BAD SEE LYRICALL CAST WHEN I BLAST//U THINK U CAN LAST THEN COME ON HOMEBOY BLAST :shoot: MUCH LUV YO...ITS BEEN A WHILE... |
when this battle gets up and runnin, i'll vote on it. meanwhile can you vote on my battle, the link is in my sig.
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he been gone so long, unfortunatley im bout to burn him like chek and chong
ill smoke you longer then a bong, beat you hard then a muslim beating a gong you lieing to self lyrkial, those punches were so weak you need a marycle like rhyming its unparable, crowds flock in bunches cause its so terrible my punches mutalate the living, you can relate since im the one giving try to compete i leave you spining,im undefeted and still goin on winning i looked at your record its a relieve, he hasent even got a single vote i beleive trying to win pulling shit yo sleeve, i beat this nigger so bad i just got to leave im gifted by all of the gods, you talk some more shit ill kill you with metal rods try asking the mods, il ship you out and mail you to a guy near the cape cods |
that line were it says shit yo sleve is suppose to be shit out yo sleve
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well were not open for votin so come in and vote or take some notes
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yo uppin for some votes...and yo unfortunate...that wasnt even my best mayne...
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lmfao this wasnt my best either your shit was wac so i took it easy though
no offense |
unfortunate
was an iight verse... multies were iight but nothing was spetacular... punchlines were iight but not very good but they were enought to merk lyriak911.... personals were iight but ive seen alot better....structure was alot better then arrest and that is why you won...flow was pretty nice and it had it ups and downs but overall you won this battle lyrikal 19 you had an iight verse but it was pretty weak at times... structure was way off but you really need to stop with // and shyt to end your lines that really getting played...mutlies were iight but pretty lame at times ... personals well i think werent any....punchlines were str8 but unfortunate had alot more.. and that is the reason why you lost Vote=unfortunate please return the favor in my sig thank you |
So Weres All These Freestylerz In This Battle Forum Ive Been In Here For 2 Hours N Im Struck With Boredom,
Thought Id Just Pop In To Let This White Boy Show How Im Gon Make Lots Of Cash And Fuck A Latin Hoe! |
yowe need votes so go vote now ill repay the favor by doing an honestr vote
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break down
opener:un punches:un flow:both strcuture:un wordplay:none personals:both closer:un overall:un i'll poll after you vote on this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=130196 |
yo trigga i voted honestly on you battle now vote here oh yea and everyone else vote to
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uppin for votes in this bitch...and u have to explain them or else they dont count...lets get this closed...
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ill vote on this if u vote on my battle first http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131972
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dude u suck you sorry i merked you lol
your kod like the rest of your battles i bet u wont even get 1 vote |
yo wee need some votes well repay the fav..............................................
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weak battle
Flow-Since Lyrikal didnt rhyme much or it was really weak, Unfornuate won here Punches- Weak punches lyrickal, unfornutate and so wat good punches Complexity-Unfornuate seems more experienced so his skils are more evolved Overall Unfornuate came harder So vote Unfortunate RETURN DA FAVOR, LINK IN MY SIG |
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yo i like the battle but unfortunate killed hes got my vote
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vote please
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uppin for votes so vote
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yo uppin for votes lets get this thing over with already send a link and ill repay the favor
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yo lets get this closed, so we need some votes, we'll repay the favor
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damn I need ya'll mafuckas to hurry up and close this battle out 4 me.....Its 3-0 me so far here is the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132586 you vote on mine I vote on your scouts honor!!!!!! Lol :laugh: |
yo lets get some votes, we both want to end this battle so well repay the favor
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unfortunat killed should be a ko.......................
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-Lyrikal19.
I KNOW BITCHES LIKE TO RUN THEIR MOUTH THATS WHY I PULL A BLADE AND THEN YOU ARE OUT// YOU SAID YOUR FROM THA HOOD, WEREN'T YOU A BOY SCOUT? EARNED YOUR BADGES IN WHAT...HOW TO TALK EBONIXS flow was off and on, aight wordplay, weak punch WHERE YO FROM HOMIE// BETTER TELL ME NOW// IF YOU CAN RUN MY LIFE BETTER// TELL ME HOW// flow was off and on, no wordplay, no punchline CAUSE YOUR AS WELCOME AS WHITEY AT A POW WOW// LIKE TO SEE YOU TRY ME NOW// flow was average, aight wordplay, first punch was aight, should've switched the lines around I'VE MADE YOU BECOME A PART OF MY PAST// THE GOOD DIE YOUNG BUT THE BAD SEE LYRICALL CAST WHEN I BLAST// U THINK U CAN LAST THEN COME ON HOMEBOY BLAST coo flow, no wordplay, no punch -Unfortunate. he been gone so long, unfortunatley im bout to burn him like chek and chong ill smoke you longer then a bong, beat you hard then a muslim beating a gong good flow, aight wordplay, weak punch you lieing to self lyrkial, those punches were so weak you need a marycle like rhyming its unparable, crowds flock in bunches cause its so terrible good flow, weak wordplay, weak punch my punches mutalate the living, you can relate since im the one giving try to compete i leave you spining,im undefeted and still goin on winning coo flow, no wordplay, weak punch i looked at your record its a relieve, he hasent even got a single vote i beleive trying to win pulling shit yo sleeve, i beat this nigger so bad i just got to leave coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch im gifted by all of the gods, you talk some more shit ill kill you with metal rods try asking the mods, il ship you out and mail you to a guy near the cape cods coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch Overall, Un got this. He had the better flow and atleast attempted punches. Un, you're trying to fit too many ideas into one line. Just focus on one idea and word it well mayne. Lyrik, work on your flow, wordplay, and punches mayne. Vote - Unfortunate. |
aight wack battle but heres the explanation
opener - unfortunate closer - unfortunate structure - tie flow - tie wordplay - unfortunate metaz - unfortunate punches - unfortunate v- unfortunate drop a vote on this link http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062 |
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