bk 2 tha future vs. verbal violence
 

aight bitch i'll set it up since you close threads to quick

unlimited lines
1 hour after checkin
or DQ
3-0 is KO
5 win
you spit first

yo u want me to go first so i dont murk u aight

yo he talkin bout that gove is tryin to murder him//
ima kill this cat with all 10 deadly sins//
this a soulja war only survivors win//
ima kick him back to the future to pick a new career to begin//
reprocusion his whole body,i aint tupac but i be going kaluminty//
puttin bullet wholes with my spit its not a 12 guage shotty//
ya style to me seems kinda sloppy,cuz i came near//
blowin flows that brreak ya ears,make ya fear//
i come so hard it bring u to tears//
call me the ghetto pioneer//
flows kick so hard leave u black and blue behind ya rear//
im so sorry ya ending had to be sincere,now he my slave//
his rhymes are lame add an n and o and a way//
thas what people be sayin when u get bood//
NO WAY, im da master of a rap slave//
bk just got wipped by my bullets of an ak//
aint no cat can harm me,i scar ya see//
ima leave ya devistated cuz im overrated//
you like what to see homos naked//
im act like you beat me and just fake it//
ifinite lines i just might make it//
look at da sig to show u i aint playin//
ima pull a michael jackson and give him a thrilla//
ad some ice to this vanilla//
cuz there aint no commin back from gettin dropped by a true rhyme killa//~one~

aight here i go
bitch tha only time you verbally ''violent'' is when you steal ryhmez\\
kidnap verses and turn em into your own gay linez\\
give me a "thrilla" bitch please, im a hazard to hummanity like a viral disease\\
this bitch is cuttin n pastin like he is Micheal Jackson's plastic surgeon\\
you a doctor without a phd like Julius Earvin'\\
aka doctor J your verbal's flow burns out eyes like pepper spray\\
i lay down cold hearted killaz like everyday, i'll sevre your bitch-ass like soup of tha day\\
you spit ''crooked lines'' every flow you ryhmez is colorful like a rainbow\\
tha thing about a verb is its something you do, not like tha fantasy life you pretend is true\\
just me bk could take your whole fake-ass crew, crushin' trash like you is all in a days work\\
so who tha fuck you gon murk\\
wen you spit your flow you wuz blowin dope, this nigga ringz bells wen he drops tha soap, bitch\\

aight uppin for some votes leave a link and i will hit your battle up wit a vote~one~

NO CREW VOTESor hate votes
aight uppin for votes

[QUOTE=kidnap verses and turn em into your own gay linez\\
give me a "thrilla" bitch please, im a hazard to hummanity like a viral disease\\
this bitch is cuttin n pastin like he is Micheal Jackson's plastic surgeon\\
you a doctor without a phd like Julius Earvin'\\
[/QUOTE]

Did he use these lines on U befor? they sound familiar as hell but I could'nt find out from were.

bitch figure out how to make a quote box then hate
no crew votes

I aint hateing kid, Ur just upset that I ripped Ur flaverless candy ass on our battle, I know the rules. I dont vote in my Team mates battles like that. I just wanna know if U bit or if U spit that befor and R just Recycling, Ur trying to make it sound like I voted already U Bitch. dont get mad cuz I merked U son. ha ah ah

get tha fuck outtta this thread bitch, and we could add another verse onto our battle chump

uppin for mo votes peeps.......................~one~

ill only vote for this if u drop an honest vote in this battle... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131811

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132072 yo both of yall go here and drop a vote and i will be back to vote on this battle aight
~one Xplicit

uppin for some fuckin votes

Wtf, niggaz, How the fuck is U gonna go into other peoples battles and threten to not vote if they dont on Ur shit. Ur suppose to follow the rules. It says U can only drop a link to Ur shit after U make an ecceptible vote on some one elses battle.
Be real niggaz.

yo im feelin u eye but can yall vote on this...~one~

aight
future got this no doubt...other boi u gotta elevate alot aight
future got this wit better flow structure punches and i liked his verse overall

v/bk to tha future

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aight, uppin need valid votes

Vote/bk 2 tha future
verble violence had an aight flow but i think that bk had better punches but the otha dude did aight to
~one Xplicit

a yo re-explain your vote so it aint DQ'ed and poll that shit

can we uppin them fucking votes please fuck...............

yall muthafukas see this battle dont you than vote please got damn for tha last time already shit.............~one~

akright can yall fucking vote on this shit already so it can be closed got fucking damn just vote leave ya link and i willv ote on ur shit if u drop a proper vote`one~

vote on this muthafucka shit, yall need ta hurry up so i can dget this win shit
j/k verb

structure:verbal violence (both need work)
flow:verbal
punches:verbal(other guy had to many played ones)


i felt that verbal won, simply because the future talked about MJ's nose... if you used a played concept, you need to be clever with it or dont use it.. that is what lose him the battle, becuase he didnt really rhyme his words to well.. and is structure wasnt exactly up to par.. but it was a nice try.. stick with it..
both verses need to elevate a lil bit..

v/verbal

return the favor...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132624

can we uppin the votes yall please drop a link i will return tha favor~one~

yo czn we uppin for mo votes yall leave a link i will return the favor

ok well I say this was not a ill battle at all...........................................

structure was fucked with both of ya'll, vv had really short lines..........
and bk had stretched ass fucking lines.............................................

punches go to vv because man future had played lines about Dr.J & MJ

creativity/originality go to vv cuz guess what????? future had played
obvious lines using plastic surgery and MJ in the same bar is not uncommon...

vocab: both was lacking but I say bk 2 tha future had it......

flow: easy none...one drop was stretched and the other was short......

therefore vv takes this with the punches category.

uppin fo mo votes on this drop a link i will return tha favor

damn good battle
 

bitch tha only time you verbally ''violent'' is when you steal ryhmez\\
kidnap verses and turn em into your own gay linez\\
give me a "thrilla" bitch please, im a hazard to hummanity like a viral disease\\
this bitch is cuttin n pastin like he is Micheal Jackson's plastic surgeon\\

was a fuckin sick openin, not tryin to hate verbal but if this kat didnt bit that shit, that right there is why i chose him... VV ive battled you how many times i know your shit's better then that kinda had a weak spit no effense i just know you got better shit to pull outa ya sleves return the favor on my shit too since i voted honestly on this...

yp uppin fo mo votes and give a good reasin like sparsin

leave a link i will return tha favor

uppin need some explained votes

punches - verbal
structure - verbal
flow - verbal
metaz - neida

vote verbal

now i no how u feel wid ppl ignoring battle so drop a fair vote on these 2 links plz. aight thanx

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...366#post1394366

sum fuckin DR ass votes but wuteva fuck lets get some more fuckin votes

vv opened good but i think he tried to do too many bars and he ran out of ideas towards the end...lines got shorter and he was talking about slaves like three times. some strectching at the end

bk was feeding with the thirlla thing...the whole micheal jackson thing was played out but the rest of it sounded pretty good i liked the metas and stuff

v-bk

return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134617

a verb i was winnin 3-0 then down 0-2 now its 3-3

u know i wun dawg were you get these voters frum

Bk Wats Good That Was Fire Im Bklynafc And Im Not Wit A Crew Either
But I No That Street Is Straight Street And I Respect That And Verbal Good Job But I Think Bk Got U Just A Bit And I Have People In The Room Reading The Battle Like 5 Of Us Are In Here And Like Three People Said Bk

Yo, back2dafuture you had a great verse with nice structure n flow. I loved ya opener and you finished strong. everything between was solid.

verbal, ya flow an structure was not even on the same level as future's. you had some ok punches but nothing to knock a nigga down. try expnading ya vocab for ya next battle dawg.

Vote: back2dafuture

return da fava

Kizza--VS--2Hard2Lose.

thanks.

Flow:VV
Structure:neither.....future was super stretched
Metas:even
Punches:even
personals:none really

my vote goes to Future
check...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344