I want a better flow
 

I'm kinda struggleing at da moment with my flow when spitting lines that rhyme because I see so many differen't ways of rhyming it's kinda confuzing me. Can you please explain how it fits together with words and rhyming words, cause i see alot of half rhymes like spineless and mindless for instance instead of criminal subliminal for an example. This is what is confuzing me cause I don't know which way is best in rap, so can I have an answer for everything I just said. Need this explaining very well so I can elevate, thanks. Peace

just stick to one way of flowing ...

to help you i would need you to spit something

I don't understand the problem you are having with trying to rhyme.Its very simple.

Example\/

You got no friends cuz you a geek
You sit in the house for a whole week

^^^See how those last two words rhyme?That's all you gotta do,nothing to it.

learn how to rhyme first buddy...

Tip: words don't have to rhyme exactly, but they have to sound similar.

If don't understand exactly what I'm saying. I'm open for PMs

example of what daclassic means... lemme think of some crap.. aight ima use situation and blatant..

time ticks and tocks, and moves fast in situations
enjoy present celebrations, some futures end blatant

situations dont exactly "rhyme" but they sound familiar.. just how i would describe it

exactly.

yeya dat its rite there yo. Keep it real, fo sho.

if ur really serious about ur flow do a syllable count...

...make all ur lines the same number of syllables...

but i dont care about my flow that much, so i dont do that, but if u want a really tight flow...

count the syllables...

once again exactly

jus keep spitin and it comes natural slowly

people don't understand about, how would I set the rhyming pattern in my head. Cause people rhyme differen'tly like iternal rhyming for instance and I don't get how to rhyme in the flow and 2 da end words, just need it explained perfectly please. And I did yall a favour I got N site banned for you, he's never coming back for his threatning hate messages saying he wants everyone 2 die and said da same 2 da admins... Since I got rid of him can you help me wid dis

You Just Gotta Have The Last Word Have The Same Ending In Atleast Two Lines...
Dont Worry About Multies Or Anything Else Yet...

word I've been saying that to you before but I don't think you got what
I was talking about.

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