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e-dubz vs. state capitol
8-10 lines due 15 mins after check
u spit first, i set it up no hate, crew or d/r votes, no feedin good luck... |
no make it blind spit.....................................
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iight blind spit..but its due 15 after check.. checkin in
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i’ll stay sprayin for days..............this kids playin-with-gays
his spits couldnt be path-Illogical if he lost his way-in-a-maze this battles a fairytale n imma be the gingerbread man cuz u cant-catch-me even if we was playin cards n both drew a pair yo still cant-match-E it dont matter this bitch tryin to be Mrs Mathers, so gather all yo ammo erupt fire on yo ass like a volcano, yo lines couldnt play me if i was a piano neva attractin a woman cuz you couldnt make the bed rock if you was Fred its like im drummin my verse into your brain im guna get it through you head your aim is clearly off target your showin emcees that you miss-this way my punches goin thru you, makin your ass more “holy” than Christ-mas day |
Beaten Me Is like retards In College..It Aint Gon' Happen......
Guns is Clappen...kids spittin serious, but the crowds just Laughin.... you couldn't stack doe even if you worked at the bakery.... You couldn't see gold even if you played for the Lakers, G..... Stay Alert, Dubz Just Got Merked..And His Feelings Are hurt..... one line will leave you burnt, Your Shits out of style like Fat Albert..... you,and your career have the same things in common, they both fake.... Lines'll Kill You, leave your body at the bottom of the lake.... Burn you to crisp, you lied when you said you was sick ...so i guess the sayin "Lier Lier Pants On Fire" works For You..... Cause really i dont know who's wacker..you or your crew ITS OVER KID |
spit that in 5 mins...i was eatin LOL my fault..n i freestyled it...
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this battle was aight....but my vote gotsta go to e-dubz. his punches were clearer and his style was more constant and it just flowed a lot better. state capitol...i was feelin ya in our battle homie but i think your rhymes were too simple in this one...no beef y'all.
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i guess...but my verse was sick its wordplay patna..LOL
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uppin
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iight i like e dubz style, even though i really didn't understand it but i'm feelin it, nice punches and a nice flow. State, your shit was tight to, and i like how u keep it simple, but i think it was juss a little too simple. Ok battle threw and threw, ya'll both could elevate a lil, my vote goes to:
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i forgot
o yeah vote on thezz plz
thanx http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130988 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130971 :thumbup: |
edubz gets this battle cuz his verse was way harder than states... State- opener was boo boo and closer was boo boo... word play was koo tho...
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E-Dubz - Good verse. Good lyrics, structure and punches. Opening wasn't bad. Last two lines weren't very good for a closer but it was a hot bar.
State Capitol - Last line was nice. Good verse just as e-dubz. Lyrics, structure and punches. But i'm goin wit dubz on this cuz he was just a little ahead of you lyrically. Vote - E-Dubz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin fo da ko....
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theres some D/R goin on in here...dont get me wrong u did have a good verse...but not a good enuff verse to KO me..theres somethin up...jus play fair and dont fuckin cheat
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aight dubz great flow.capitol sounded liek some prewrites in there thats never good no matter how funny they are. dubz great opener wit a really good flow.punches were good specially the maze one.jus try not to use the word gay cause that weakens watever the punch is cause gay is jus played out.capitol not bad flow.needed some work wit unches use more personals. and come straonger wit punches.dubz had better punches and flow so i vote for him
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wtf..dis is bullshyt, wutever uppin
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uppin
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ight ight ima break it down
wordplay: e punches: tie flow: capitol metas: E vocab:capitol personal: capitol capitol jus made it more personal and thats what these battles is about good shit da both of ya vote/////////////capitol Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
one of the major reasons for y i am gong to be picking against e dub is because ! i seen some bitten ass lines in his rhymes recycled ! that is the biggest no no ! i just battle a guy that used the sam type of line on me ????? not kewl so it goes down like this iight.. judgeing 1-5 1 being wackest ever 5 being illiest in exzistance!! l0l
e-dubz originality:1 flow:3 punches:2 overall:2 State CapiTol originality:3 flow:3 punches:3 overall:3 vote=State CapiTol your flow was average but i feel that you did better over all peace! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
damn this was a very hard battle to call but ima have to go with state on this he had reall good verse .... e-dubz your verse was decent but you really didnt have any personals .. you basicall had structure and alittle bit of punchlines...
as for edubz you had nice punchlines that hit hard and were really sticken and... nice personals.....but overall it was very close it was maybe on of the closed battles ive seen ... but i gotta give this one to state sorry.. e-dubz -vote=state please drop your poll on my battle in my sig No dickride... |
jea jea coo.........uppin dis......................
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uppin..look at all da unexplained vote..cud it b d/r?
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E-dubz: Well This Was One Nice Drop From You Best I've Seen From
You Yet Wordplay Was Really Hitting In This One ~big Up~ Punches Were Really Hard......flow Was There As Well Best Flow I've Seen From You...vocab Was Good......originality Was Aight Not The Best Tho....... Overall: 7.8/10 State Capitol: Whoa That Was St8 Crazy Most Of It Was Fire Cept For The Opener It Was Just Average......flow Was Exactly The Same As Dubz To Me.........punches Hit Hard Nice Job There.... Vocab Was There Also Like E.d. Originality To Me Was Better In Your Drop So That Takes The Battle 4 U Overall: 8/10 Vote Goes To: S.c. Sorry For Taking So Long To Vote Formatted Computer And It's Fucked Up Right Now Ya Know. ~big Up~ To Both Sides For Real |
aiight here it iz.. e dubz u did aiight but wasnt good enuf to take out capitol. capitol showed some potential there, was n aiight battle but capitol took it. better punches and metaz and flow. e dubz u were aiight too but i think u fell off a bit in tha middle, keep tha hard punches going. e had a good opener but i think fell off from that. capitol had a consistent verse, stayed strong tha whole way through and hit hard. thats y im voting for capitol
vote = state capitol -1- |
open: State, first line got me focussed immediately
close: E-Dubz nice closer personals: State the way u played those, original... vocab: State vocab was slightly better but it's close punches: both both nice punches flow: both, flow was tight with both win:close one but State takes it...E-Dubz did good job but State Capitol showed his skillz,was on fire! |
this battle was aight....but my vote gotsta go to e-dubz. his punches were clearer and his style was more constant and it just flowed a lot better. his lines was jus hittin harder. i have no beef at all.
ur best line i think: his spits couldnt be path-Illogical if he lost his way-in-a-maze 8.9/10 hot^ state capitol...i was feelin ya in our battle homie but i think your rhymes were too simple in this one. i think dubz had this edged over you with his structure. it flowed easily ur best line i think: you couldn't stack doe even if you worked at the bakery....8/10 decent^ my vote/ dubz |
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i’ll stay sprayin for days..............this kids playin-with-gays
his spits couldnt be path-Illogical if he lost his way-in-a-maze ^Nice Opener' .. Was Heated..!!!!! 7/10 this battles a fairytale n imma be the gingerbread man cuz u cant-catch-me even if we was playin cards n both drew a pair yo still cant-match-E ^Weak Punch FoReal..... 2/10 it dont matter this bitch tryin to be Mrs Mathers, so gather all yo ammo erupt fire on yo ass like a volcano, yo lines couldnt play me if i was a piano ^Nice Multies...!!!! Aight Punch 5/10 neva attractin a woman cuz you couldnt make the bed rock if you was Fred its like im drummin my verse into your brain im guna get it through you head ^Aint Likeing It ToO Much.. But Its Aight 3/10 your aim is clearly off target your showin emcees that you miss-this way my punches goin thru you, makin your ass more “holy” than Christ-mas day ^Straight Closer' ..!!!! 7/10 ----------------------------------------------- Beaten Me Is like retards In College..It Aint Gon' Happen...... Guns is Clappen...kids spittin serious, but the crowds just Laughin.... ^Aight Opener... 7/10 you couldn't stack doe even if you worked at the bakery.... You couldn't see gold even if you played for the Lakers, G..... ^Safe Punch' ... And Personal..!!! 4/10 Stay Alert, Dubz Just Got Merked..And His Feelings Are hurt..... one line will leave you burnt, Your Shits out of style like Fat Albert..... ^Ok... Punchline.. Decent Bar 7/10 you,and your career have the same things in common, they both fake.... Lines'll Kill You, leave your body at the bottom of the lake.... ^Fell Off Short With Your Second Line... Playa 2/10 Burn you to crisp, you lied when you said you was sick ...so i guess the sayin "Lier Lier Pants On Fire" works For You..... Cause really i dont know who's wacker..you or your crew ^Nice Closer' ..!!! Wasnt Nothing Great Though... 7/10 Vote: E-Dubs' ..!!!! Came Close Though.....!! Capitol You Just Fell Off A Bit Short BabeBoi' .. But You Gawt Madd PoTential..!!!!! Wun Luv ~Lil Swirl~ |
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State Capitol...27/-- Mah Bad' ..!! LmfaoO Vote Goes To State Capitol..!! I FuCcked That Up And Got Chur Names.. Switched' ..!! My Apologiez...!!! |
uppin
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structure: Tie
flow: Tie Punches: Dubz personals: Tie Enjoyed both this was hard but Ima have to go wit DUBZ HERE |
ok both were aight state had a good opener and closer he had good punches nice flow good use of words and pretty much came strong with all the right material
yo e dawg u came good to but state had more punches u had some but not as much as him v/state |
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