.The Deuce. Vs. A.K.A.
 

ok you no the rules you spit first and i'll finish your ass. :shoot:

ok check in you asshole. i'm ready to battle after you spit. (i can't believe this cat thinks he can beat me lol thats really funny)

checkin in ill spit soon..........................

yo


ima slice this bitch to pieces, my knifes lyrically scraping your wrists/
i own your crew, my goverment, ill merk you all, thats how it twists//
Banned: too worthless to be worhty at rapbattle relaunched/
im stoppin ur flow like the best rappers flow being staunched//
Actually Known As, the worst emcee, hes guilty to plead/
i got this bitch on lockdown, still suckin on his mom titties for breast-feed//
M'Just finish this bitch of with just a couple of punches/
Unfortunaltly, im chompin this kid down, a fat kid with a couple of crunches// (of food)
My Raps are SiccWitIt, i can flip and rip any style you want/
This is an upset, me beatin u like Smarty Jones at Belmont//
voters remember, hes just thinks all his loses are dick riders/
You and your whole crew are goin down, Wannabe Rappers, Fifty cent biters//

scrap

uppin for ur spit

explanations..>

2nd line= thats how it twists// Twisted Goverment is his crew
5th, 7th, 8th 9th line, all starts with the members of his crew
M'just = Mite Just
10th line-- his sig says Voters Remember..a link to the rules of voting
the lines with his crew..

his crew just sucks. lol

Fifty cent biters
what the fuck you talking about?50 cent can suck my dick and you can too fag. i'll spit after pizza

I think its the opposite. Your on fiftys dick. Spit ur verse u lame queer.

ayo check it

the name is a.k.a., a killin' asshole cause i'ma true villian//
i'll crack this kids skull open and be like where the cream filling//
see you new so you at the end of the train like a caboose//
my level of skill well send a bullet to the deuce//
i been here long and i came alot stronger don't think you even close to my crew//
you call yourself the deuce but this kid can't even coiunt to two//
i was banned for being too good and you got the shit twisted like my government//
i can spit simple shit and everyone even you loving it//
dude your just battling me why diss the team//
this can't just mad cauise he can't get in if you no what i mean//
this cat ain't even got a battle record so how does he think he so good//
get out of the game right now you really should//

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lets get some votes
but we no who won:

your truely

k uppin number 1 vote on this.............................................. ......................

ok let look at some shall we
i got tupac as my rapper no fifty
no where have i ever giving props to fifty or siad his lines cause his are just gay
and i ain't got to explain my votes people get them the first time

I explain because so retards dont understand high vocab and good rhyme scheme.

Uppin..................uPPIN!!! vote on this bitch................................

alright check this

duece: ur shit was good i liked ur personals..and ur punches were ok...your flow was good..but ur structure needs work on...PM me and i can help u..or if u have msn or aim..good job

AKA: not that good..it was aiight....but u lacked personals..and ur punches werent that good...ur flow and structure was good..but thaz about it...good try thouigh

vote: the deuce

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Yo AKA , ur shit was ill , the rookie punch lines was good, u need some better Vocab but other than that ur shit was clean

Duece ur shit was good but if ur gonna dis on a number of peeps then u got to make the shit more amusing....i didnt like how u put it together


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ooo shit real close battle... i liked aka's verse even tho he didnt have the best flow.. but he definitely came with better punches then deuce soo close battle but punches win battles soo vote goes to aka

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ayo state you just mad cause i' wouldn't let you in my crew

iight this was a tight battle from both but i was really feeling aka's verse alot more .. he had some nice personals and he had some tight punchlines fav line:see you new so you at the end of the train like a caboose//
my level of skill well send a bullet to the deuce//
i been here long and i came alot stronger don't think you even close to my crew//
you call yourself the deuce but this kid can't even coiunt to two//
^^damn son you merked him right there

deuce your shyt was pretty good for a newbie but you really lost the battle sorry...your personals were iight but they were pretty off at times....overall you did a nice job and you really tried hard but you lost..

v:aka

close battle..nice punches from both, i liked da flow from the deuce..im gonna give it to the deuce since everythin was even i was jus feelin his flow

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yo aka took this the best line that he had was

you call yourself the deuce but this kid can't even coiunt to two//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ funny shit

duce i cant see why e-dubz and state voted for you cause you just suck

so my vote goes to A.K.A.

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hmm.. arright... The Deuce.. Pretty decent drop, nothing stellar but you were consistent, decent flow- a couple of good punches in there--- 6 out of 10 overall

A.K.A - You opened with a basic flow, but you said some funny shit- After reading your opening bar I thought that you were gonna take this battle easily, but your verse just started falling off... I started getting worried but you still had a couple decent lines up until your closing bar- It was just way too simple- abrupt and I think it killed your verse- You showed superior talent in the begining but it seemed like you just said fuck it or your mind drifted from the subject-- I'ma give you a 5 out of 10 overall- Vote The Deuce. Please return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305

a.k.a- yo shit needs improvement.........i didnt see any punches that stand out to me. you didnt use any good vocab or no multis really.

Duece- yo i think your verse was betta......didnt really have any punches either but you did betta on personals.....overall elevate though.

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structure: both
Flow: AKA
Punches: AKA
Enjoyable: AKA
Vote: ALA

aka flippd hiis sht proper,i was fellin him more than duece. better stucture even though some those rhymes seemd simple...better punches but still he stayd simple
v/aka

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Thanks for cleaning the thread strobe or admin.

Uppin for good votes...............uppin for right votes....

deuce you won this fa sho.
aka your flow was better then his but D came much harder with the personals
punches.... i say it was a tie.
but its punches and personals that win battles and coz o` that imma have to hand my vote to deuce
no hate jus an hounest opinion.
vote...deuce

Uppin This Battle>>>>>2-1 Me<<<<<<<<<uppin This Battle

what up with all theses votes getting dqed? ayo deuce you being a bitch again?

Flow -aka had better structure, which made it flow better

Punches - aka, some were played , but i felt that some hit harder hit alot harder

Personals - duece, had alot more, and were alot better.. just wont hat catogory period

Multies - Obviously aka, by his type of rhymes and just better flow and nothing was forced

Vocab - aka his verse was kinda played.. but in my oppinion had better evrything inclucding vocab

my vote aka
obvious reasons behind this.. the only reason this battle was even close was the fact that duece had personals you all need to elevate on ur structure also my vote... aka

i have to go wit aka cuz hes tight vote l8er!

A.K.A squashed this bitch

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ok what is with this shit we got like 20 votes and it's still just 2-2 i went from being the winner to being tied.

Duece Took It. Simple As That. His Rap Had Good Meta's On All LEvels. He Had Good Punches. AKA's Lacked Them. A Fairly One Sided Battle. AKA i Give You Props For The Cream Filling Dis. You Had A Lot Of Filler And i Don't Dig That SHit.

Vote - Duece.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134161


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dayumm i was feelin both of yall spits but i have to go wid AKA cuz his rhymes were more complex and flowed better. His punches hit harder and i enjoyed it more.

Punches: aka
multis: aka
metas: aka
Structure: tie
Flow:aka

Vote: AKA

this was a close battle but Deuce had the punches and the flow

ayo you got this shit twisted first you vote for me without preesing the poll now you vote for him.? gay ass

hardly a battle and i think it gay how fucking long this shit has been open but what ever.

flow: a
Opener: a
closer: a
punches: tie
personals: tie
funny: a
vote: a

Flow -aka
Punches - aka, but deuce did have one or 2
Personals - deuce, he hit the crew alot
Multies - AKA
Vocab - both i guess..

on that note. AKA gets my vote.