Daclassin Vs. Hoops
 

RULES:
10 lines
no hate/v
no crew/v
no dr/v
no feeding
no recycling
no biting
Due in 30 minutes from this post.. lets go...

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My verse
 

10 lines aight..
this kid thinks hes an einstein, the IQ of a genius..
when really theres a thin line, between him and a penis..
they think "strait", but all thoughts are predictable..
and like unregistered voters, all spits he spat are restrictable..
funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother"..
search the net, only things my verse biting is you..
and yea ya lines are classic, cause your rhyme styling is thru..
you cant "put me down" like gay men tranqulizing on top of me..
fag would prolly "cop" a feel,cause thats the only way he knows of stoppin me..

The Classic verse
 

Ladies and gentlemen once again.....he did it....

I'm like shaq when it comes to attacking the hoops

The classic vs hulahoopz

I'm bout to leave this fucka somewhere secluded with no population

I'll leave you with writers block left on an island for rhyming stories
He always finds himself lost in thought - It's an unfamiliar territory
I will tear his glory in pieces with something compared to a thesis
That was said By something In bibles that was quoted by jesus
Why I'm facin' the creation of a hideous, Ferocious fuckin hoard
All your battles is a team battle, When your a siamese twin of a backboard
I'm detachin' your chord , From hard tapping on keyboards. Oops!!
The reason I'm america's most wanted top ten, Is for shooting hoops
Females say you not even cute, Make up artists would take a full day
Can I borrow your face, because My Ass(butt) is going on holiday.

nice verse... lets get this voted one





=)....

uppin...bring votes please

uppin this to the top for some votes.. =) much appreciated

dunno if it will be counted, cos i dont think i have 100 posts... but ima drop a vote anyway just to give a opinion..

i reckon hoops took it.. was close though. His punches hit harder and his personals were solid. Decent flow, maybe one or two stretches but pretty much kept it on all the time.

classic, your punches were weak man... flow was aiight, and i think a little better than hoops, but you gotta hit harder, use personals and wordplay and shit brother... could have been a lot better. I think you think that by using big words or more than one syllable rhymes it will win you the battle... that shit means nothing man, its all punches.. but punches with no flow are shit.. its keeping balance that wins you battles.

v/hoops..

peace

thanks for your thoughts, I'm not a simple rhymer like most. If you ever read my other battles that's the way I always rap. lol Nothing new I guess it's new to you. I truly think I am going to come out on top anyway...even though it's not my best shit lol. Thanks for your opinions. uppin.

and to tell you the truth I had a personal and the wordplay was there do you even know what a personal and what wordplay is....lol this is my last battle in frontlines maybe ? lol

sorry guys didnt realise you needed 100 posts to vote so imma not going saying anything dont want to swing it in anyones favour
all im going to say is koo battle from both of you.

No hate on this vote but...i think daclassic won this battle...he punches hit hardewr and hes wordplay was good....hoop.u had a chance if u didnt use the Penis line but stil...ya rhyme was ok.....ya wordplay was ok.....da classic used some personals....ok both of ya on struc and mutlis....but....overall daclassic wins wit wordplay and personals

Yo sine i votewd on this battle both of ya vote on ym topical wit .....Virt iight

Look it was sick verses from both competitors, i'll break the battle down from the sickest 2 bars(4 lines) from each:

Hoops:
they think "strait", but all thoughts are predictable..
and like unregistered voters, all spits he spat are restrictable..
funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother"..

I was feelin these bars from Hoops...

Da Classic:
Why I'm facin' the creation of a hideous, Ferocious fuckin hoard
All your battles is a team battle, When your a siamese twin of a backboard
I'm detachin' your chord , From hard tapping on keyboards. Oops!!
The reason I'm america's most wanted top ten, Is for shooting hoops

Was feeling these too...

Both cats spit put hard verses but i simply have to go with Da Classic cuz his word play was much better and therefore made for a stronger verse... Plus his shit was funny... Keep up the hot shit both of ya

hehe.. coo coo.. im down 2, but mike aint make the bball team either freshman year.. so wus really GOOD!! lol jus jokes hehe.. aight uppin .. 0-2 classic..thankx for feedback thus far

Uppin Can You'll Bring The Votes Please....let's Get This Thing Over With.

whoa sick intro...that shaq shit was illl mfao

anywayz:

hoops: your shit was surprsining good...your flow was good...your structure was good too...your punches were there...your personals were hittin too...good shit dawg....your vocab and wordplay was right on point good job

class: got damn this shit was hot...good intro...opener was sick...closer was sick too...vocab and wordplay was flamin...good punches n personals...this was a sick verse

vote:da classic

i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1369886

hoops: aight hmmm......in my opinion you had a pretty good verse ok punches in there flow was nice but not the greatest I've ever seen in
my life vocab was ok....... wordplay was ok aswell as the rest of the
categories i've seen in there

overall: 6.5/10

DaClassic: aight........I say you had a really really tight verse your
punches hit harder than Hoops no hate tho......flow was nice rhyme
scene was really good....vocab was nice syllable was real good &
the rest of your categories were the same as the rest

overall: 7.5/10

vote goes to: DaClassic

do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature....

damn.. 4-0.. looks like i got served... all good tho.. we still uppin.. thanx for the votes thus far fuckers (jokes) hehe.. but on the real, much appreciated..

uppin...

Uppin for more votes.. leave links and i'll drop a clean one

uppin.

I dont have 100 posts, but this was really a great battle and I just wanted to drop my oppinion on it.

Hoops: Ive seen some of your other battles, and I really like your style. Although I dont think you came as hard as ive seen from you before. Your structure and flow was a lil off (as I did flow your verse to a beat).

" funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother".."

This really threw your flow off, and Brother+color I think was a bad choice of rhymes/wordplay.

" this kid thinks hes an einstein, the IQ of a genius..
when really theres a thin line, between him and a penis.."

A good personal, Im not sure what other dude was sayin about this, but I liked it.

DaClassic: I liked flow, and it went together well. There wasnt much I could complain about.

" I'm detachin' your chord , From hard tapping on keyboards. Oops!!
The reason I'm america's most wanted top ten, Is for shooting hoops"

That bar was tight, esp with the double meaning on "Shooting hoops"

" Females say you not even cute, Make up artists would take a full day
Can I borrow your face, because My Ass(butt) is going on holiday."

I really thought you got bored when you got to this point. Even though its a diss, its real weak, and just comes off to me as filler. I didnt like the wordplay in this either.

Overall though, nice verses from both of you two.

Vote = DaClassic

aighyt.. just clearin the lien about his IQ, its below his avatar and some where else.. but good look and thanx for droppin an opinion... Still uppin yall.. lol

uppin people come on with the votes...so this thing can get over with....

uppin..

hoops ya opener started out pretty tight then the punch was weak as hell brah nice set up line but no punch to me your closer again the same thing nice wordplay in the set up but no real punch to me an the rest of your verse had a few nice lines to me like this 1 killed it
funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother"..
^ LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
but the rest of your verse lacked punchs to me had good wordplay and a few nice lines but didnt feal most of it

classic ya opener was decent i think the punch wasnt worded right or somethin more like lost in thought bein familiar territory would have sounded better to me sayin hes there all the time but um ya closer lmao clownin nice set up an nice punch an the rest of your verse started off slow to me then kinda picked about after the first for lines then the rest was nice nice spit

vote daclassic