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ThisGirlspitfire\\vs//Ambitionz
aight here are the rules
no hatin no feedin no d/r no crew votes 10-15 lines |
make it 3-0 ko....checkin in ya verse due 10 minutes afta mine...
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aight we can do that.....dont worry ill write mine right after yours
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hol up naw nigga how u gone take all day and tell me i only get 10 minutes its been 10 minutes since yo check in....hmmm....imma take as much time as you did how bout that
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huh......still waitin......clocks tickin......yea i know u aint back down
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o my fuckin goodness why the fuck haven't you dropped yet....well its saturday and im not waitin all night fa u so the rule bout 10 minutes or wuteva time limit shit is off aight cuz u takin mad long.....dam ya rhymes aint hot anyway i gotta go holla back maybe you can write somethin hot by then
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Spoke a rhyme of water, and ya dyin to float
Wrote shes a girl...but ya afraida dickrydin votes? Neva make it big, im here to expose the hoar in ya sig And when I sed 'wacks in you' the bitCh started to dig Defense low, and wack is stress, and each word spokens tense Shiet only 'shellz' you throw come at the end of ya sentence Face-it, aint gonna fake-it, fuck ya jus str8 up dont fit how u gon rap when ya look like an octopus takin a hit Claim to fame, but ya wack as before still didnt change Only thing you did right...was oxy-moronin ya name *sigs seys 'put bitches to sleep', dig=finger **period... ***hit=sex ****oxymoron is a contradicting statement or sentence aiight extendin to 30 minutes...dont get dont vote...good luck |
aight it said i was uppin the battle to much but i haven't even posted my verse yet...i dont know wuts going on ....but here is my check in imma try to see if it will let me drop my verse now
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I flow like a pro tho still i stay sexier than yo girl
How i spit better rhymes than you...and yet its a mans world? You coming at me nigga you didnt bring ya A game cuz ive heard every femcee joke and been called everyname But again ill explain cuz its not gettin to ya brain check me out this girl spits fire and throws flames The votes are not in so this battle is up for grabs This pussy prolly seen and rode more dicks than i have Woah I know that aint ya only rhymes cuz ive got plenty You get no pussy thats why ya lotion bottle stay empty Im simply...the best... lyrical shots to ya chest will put u to rest Exterminatin these pest one by one with no weapon You need some help but sorry theres is none for your condition I thought you was comin harder than that...change ya name nigga you have no ambition |
that is thisgirlspitsfire's verse she asked me to post it for her cuz it wouldn't let her do it
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yea i sent my friend to drop my verse becuase it kept sayin that i had upped my battle to many times or somethin like dat so i juss sent it to him to drop
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aiight
thisgirl: your shit was nice...good flow good structure....good personals good punches good vocab...good wordplay...jus all around god ambitiionz: ur shit was confusin and jumped around a bit ur shit was aiight nothin special...good personals...ok punches....good flow n structure vote:thisgirl i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1369886 |
Uppin............................................. ...
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aiight his vote should be dQed for two reasons
1.He didnt get my punches...i said if you dont get dont vote 2.We're currently in a battle against each other |
Ambitionz-- ya shit was tite i didnt like your flow, strucutre was coo and punches were decent
Thisgirl-- this merked ambitionz wit it Woah I know that aint ya only rhymes cuz ive got plenty You get no pussy thats why ya lotion bottle stay empty ya whole verse made me laugh, humorous strong punches i like dat v/thisgirlspitfire |
Upin for votes....................................
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aight lets get some more votes in here and end this battle
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yeh the girl ripped ill post so she can get my vote!
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dam we need some more votes in here aight....lets get this ova wit please...im tired of lookin at this
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Urm...alright battle..i lied this girl on this battle for some reason..i liked her creativite....her standing up for ..the female's that spit the fire...iight girll...iight...ya need to still work on some wordplay more...and more complex.......and use some more personals...iight for ambit...ya need to elevate man come on man let do this shit right...iight lol...nah u trieds but u need to work on really making it look like you really tried to do this battle..iight elevat both on personals...punches and wordplay iight !let go!
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lets get some more votes in here....fa real and end this battle aight
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girl is good..... ya got tah flow girl... dude was good too... i think
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Thisgirl u made Ambitionz look like a bitch i like dat u got my vote
Ambitionzu the bich in this battle :shoot: R.I.P bitch |
you can dq my vote if you want but i dont think anybody got what you were talking about in some places and thats on you if it doesnt make sense not the voters
Spoke a rhyme of water, and ya dyin to float Wrote shes a girl...but ya afraida dickrydin votes? ->>i dont like the first line at all but the second is pretty nice Neva make it big, im here to expose the hoar in ya sig And when I sed 'wacks in you' the bitCh started to dig ->>wack Defense low, and wack is stress, and each word spokens tense Shiet only 'shellz' you throw come at the end of ya sentence ->>dont get the second line at all Face-it, aint gonna fake-it, fuck ya jus str8 up dont fit how u gon rap when ya look like an octopus takin a hit ->>i get the hit thing but still terrible second line Claim to fame, but ya wack as before still didnt change Only thing you did right...was oxy-moronin ya name ->>kinda decent closer I flow like a pro tho still i stay sexier than yo girl How i spit better rhymes than you...and yet its a mans world? ->>nothing extroardinary but i could bob my head to it You coming at me nigga you didnt bring ya A game cuz ive heard every femcee joke and been called everyname ->>same as first 2 But again ill explain cuz its not gettin to ya brain check me out this girl spits fire and throws flames ->>filler The votes are not in so this battle is up for grabs This pussy prolly seen and rode more dicks than i have ->>decent punchline Woah I know that aint ya only rhymes cuz ive got plenty You get no pussy thats why ya lotion bottle stay empty ->>pretty good got a chuckle from me Im simply...the best... lyrical shots to ya chest will put u to rest Exterminatin these pest one by one with no weapon ->>filler You need some help but sorry theres is none for your condition I thought you was comin harder than that...change ya name nigga you have no ambition ->>stretch but alright closer v-ThisGirlSpitFire vote on mine: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134617 |
aight anyway lets get some more votes in here we only need to more votes and its ova....aight good lookin out aight
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lets end this battle fa real...it only takes a couple more votes and i know more than this number of people that have posted have looked at the battle so please just vote and get this battle closed
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aight it obvious the thisgirlspitfire took this hands down... i liked the wordplay from ambition... but overall t.g.s.f. had a betta flow and punches...
the closing: You need some help but sorry theres is none for your condition I thought you was comin harder than that...change ya name nigga you have no ambition that was funny, girl... just get a lil' more complex and your str8. My vote: This Girl Spit Fire... i don't have any links... lol sry ~wun~ |
needless ta say this girl got skill, n she tottally merked this ambitionz cat and thats y she got my vote cos in every aspect of the battle she merked ambitionz
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