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Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 12:58 AM

Yung Tek vs Blaq-Ink
 
5 barz
no hate no crew no dick ride votez
due afta 30 minz of my verse

Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 01:09 AM

They say thats there more way to skin a cat
but i'll skin a nigga by resting bullit's in his logo on his fitted hat

this nigga really think he hard-core spittin these hard ganstaz remarks
If u talk it i'll blow ya brain on the pavement 2 prove to u that u street smart

Yung-Tek kno when i go off its hard to contain when i go crazy
if u temp me i'll grab u and dangle u over a balconee like michal jacksons baby

niggaz kno im nasty on the freestyle but i killa on the writtin
cause now and days when rhymes dont come togther rappers like TEK turn tyson and strat bitein

Homie u dont want it cause i'll size out ya body and drop u in ya afta-life coffin
u goin against blaq-ink thats gonna end ya life before it starts like a women havin abortion

Yung Tek 06-27-04 01:26 AM

com on man...shit is weak

My flow make u retire like your names HoVa
U Gotta Feel Me once i FLIP it.. da GAMES OVa

u tryin to prove dat tek not hot?
u better off tellin mike tyson take his best shot

mess around dats shells to ur whip like mario kart
u better den me? u gassed like 3 farts

u aint Blak ink u justa dry pen
u kno u gon lose ....so y try then?

u couldnt get high on a airplane overseas
your flows CONSTIPATED my SHIT flow wit ease

Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 01:35 AM

aight
we need some votez
let get this popin
dont sleep on this
1

Yung Tek 06-27-04 01:36 AM

lets get sum votes in this mutha sucka...up it cuz i cant

Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 07:25 AM

uppin 4 votez....
uppin 4 votez....
uppin4 votez.....

Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 07:26 AM

ayo votez must be explained
uppin 4 votez
dont sleep on this

Yung Tek 06-27-04 12:31 PM

up up up up.
vote danmit!!!!!!!
vote! vote! vote!

Decree Wun 06-27-04 12:37 PM

ill vote for this only if u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131919

Decree Wun 06-27-04 01:10 PM

hmm

yung tech: bad structure...make ur lines longer..but good punches and personals....good flow...bad vocab...u did pretty good...keep elevatin

blaq inq....hmm..ur shit was aiight u shuld of worded things differently n u had bad flow n structure..n ok punches n personals..vote tek

Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 01:38 PM

uppin for votez........
0-1
yung tek-1 votez
ink-0 votez

-bODy CoUnT- 06-27-04 01:40 PM

I gotta go wit yung tek on this jus cuz i feel like i heard blaqs verse a million times before:
They say thats there more way to skin a cat
but i'll skin a nigga by resting bullit's in his logo on his fitted hat- lloyd banks reworded

this nigga really think he hard-core spittin these hard ganstaz remarks
If u talk it i'll blow ya brain on the pavement 2 prove to u that u street smart-hard

Yung-Tek kno when i go off its hard to contain when i go crazy
if u temp me i'll grab u and dangle u over a balconee like michal jacksons baby- i heard this shit on freestyle friday and in a million other battles here

niggaz kno im nasty on the freestyle but i killa on the writtin
cause now and days when rhymes dont come togther rappers like TEK turn tyson and strat bitein- doesnt rhyme

Homie u dont want it cause i'll size out ya body and drop u in ya afta-life coffin
u goin against blaq-ink thats gonna end ya life before it starts like a women havin abortion- doesnt rhyme

Yung tek:
My flow make u retire like your names HoVa
U Gotta Feel Me once i FLIP it.. da GAMES OVa

u tryin to prove dat tek not hot?
u better off tellin mike tyson take his best shot

mess around dats shells to ur whip like mario kart
u better den me? u gassed like 3 farts

u aint Blak ink u justa dry pen
u kno u gon lose ....so y try then?

u couldnt get high on a airplane overseas
your flows CONSTIPATED my SHIT flow wit ease

Enough to put his shit away... Vote: TEk

Yung Tek 06-27-04 01:46 PM

ayo explanation.....U Gotta Feel Me once i FLIP it da GAMEs Ova"...
U gotta feel me = lil flip's album...
Flip= lil Flip
Game Ova = first single

Yung Tek 06-27-04 02:41 PM

u know wat the midwest is
yung and restless
where restless (niggas)
mite snatch ur necklace
the next thing (niggas)
mite jap ur lexus
sumbody tell (niggas) who kanye west is

kanye west
_-Jesus Walks

mC RIOT 06-27-04 02:56 PM

yung tech...u came out weak from da start of da whole shit. your rhymes were way too simple and blaq ink already played out a line about Tyson so ya shouldnt do it...u were just flat out weak.
my vote goes to blaq ink

Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 10:14 PM

uppin for votez some fair shit tho i think these nigga be hatein....lol......any way it dont matter i aint mad...so letz get some votez up in here
~1~

Yung Tek 06-27-04 11:46 PM

uppin ..uppin ..uppin ..uppin.. uppin.. upin.. uppin... uppin !!!!!votes votes votes votes votes votes

Blaq-Ink 06-28-04 08:42 AM

votes..............
votes..............
votes..............

Blaq-Ink 06-28-04 11:53 PM

votes..............
votes..............
votes..............
favor will be returned
:cussing: vote

Tycoon 06-29-04 01:07 AM

aight both were dry for something that should flow but black ink had funnier punches and personals

Tycoon 06-29-04 01:08 AM

return tha favor

Blaq-Ink 06-29-04 07:58 AM

uppin 4 votes its tied up now 2-2
............................................uppin for some votes............................................

Envee 06-29-04 01:39 PM

Ink - aaah not bad.... you could have done better on this battle it was a close battle but i think both of ya need a lil work on how u set up ur punches...

Tekk - Nice shit but still not tha best that i've read u could have done better on this battle... Nice closer...

Overall Thoughts - Tekk and Ink could improve their punches by buildin they structure more like

Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah HIT-YA// << Set up for tha punch!
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah SHIP-YA// << Add a lot of multies a lot of wordplay 2...

And Ink woulda won this battle but he stretched his bars way 2 much and his structure sucked he had some good word play...

Tekk u need some work on word play and punches...

Weak battles guys real weak...

Vote: Tekk

Envee 06-29-04 01:42 PM

Return tha favor guys i judged fair i think u should do tha same...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132257

Blaq-Ink 07-01-04 09:56 AM

uppin 4 votez............................................. ......................................

Blaq-Ink 07-02-04 09:55 AM

uppin for some votes..............votes..............votes

Miss. Lyricist 07-02-04 02:32 PM

Both of you sucked, plain and simple.

Y'all need to work on your flow. Both of you need to make sure your syllables match in your bar. The flow is ruptured when one line has more syllables that the line it's supposed to rhyme with.

Both of you need to work on your personals. The punches were weak and you had me yawning. Blaq, I see potential in your spit, just work on the flow and your vocab.

vote/Blaq

Please vote on my battle vs. Hoops, if you have 100+ posts

Blaq-Ink 07-02-04 09:46 PM

i dont 100+pionts...sorry
uppin for votes........

Blaq-Ink 07-03-04 11:34 PM

uppin for som votez niggaz......................
i'll return a fair vote on one of ya battles

Blaq-Ink 07-04-04 02:47 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Blaq-Ink
uppin for som votez niggaz......................
i'll return a fair vote on one of ya battles
:cussing:

Blaq-Ink 07-05-04 11:05 AM

votez.....uppin for some votez......will return favor

Decree Wun 07-05-04 11:24 AM

sup fam vote in this battle and ill rtf
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133197

Blaq-Ink 07-06-04 06:59 AM

[QUOTE=Blaq-Ink]aight
we need some votez
let get this popin
dont sleep on this... :cussing:
~1~

For$akeN 07-19-04 07:47 PM

blaq-Ink: well this wasn't a all-together verse I was only feeling
it on times not all that well done..............flow was ok nothing
special.....original I say it wasn't and it also wasn't all that effective
in my eyes atleast...........punches were lacking like crazy not feelin
it at all......overall: 5/10

Yung Tek: again not a very good verse at all...................
flow was ok syllable count was there.....punches hit a lil
bit harder in my opinion......original nope I wasn't seeing it......
overall: 5.5/10

vote: Yung Tek


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