SiccWitIt vs. One man band
 

U spit first dog, U got 30 Min , then i spit after u .........

oy man can we make it 16 lines max??? cos i work in fours, its better for flow.. and 12 isnt enough

aright thats cool just do ur thing 14 line max...................................

i mean 16................................................ ...........

aight cool. no probs.

im gonna ice ya slowly, if im on the mic behold me..
i rap nice n gory, all the dickriders like to blow me..
like christ im holy, id say you rhyme below me..
but soon as you post, your wackness will do it for me..

with ease im smackin-this-bitch, cos it just so happens-im-sick..
rappin-with-wits, unlike you, a noob just flappin-his-lips..
bring earth shattering-hits, when im in battles with kids..
crunchin ya dome, your crunchin it wrong, my punches 'll rattle ya mids..

your multis are non existent, punches faulty with-rotten-lyrics..*
set-ups are tame, metas are lame, im flexin my authority-over-dipshits..
always cryptic and critical, turn your back for a second im rippin-you..
always killin-noobs, unlike you wackness aint sumthin i like to get into..

judging by lyrics probly find more bomb shit when its christmas..
and him gettin anywhere is more far fetched than his disses..**
real life he'd be redder than ketchup, like paper he bout to be shred-up..
im gonna let-up, been easin off punches cos all i need is the set-up..

*in his other battles i have never seen him use multies.. just lettin you know so you dont think its just some random punch from nowhere..

**again a reference to his other battles... i reckon his disses are pretty random,..


your turn brother you got half an hour.

one.

Hmmm.........

YO! I said 2 this bitch 16 lines thats Plenty instead...His dumbass Puts 20//
Im sure He Needs as much fuckn lines as he can get//
His Ass is typin real quik cause its his bed time and his fuckn moms havin a Fit//
And Bitch who the fuck u calln a Newb//
O No ur the big bad Vetran...Bitch all ur Raps Blew//
And NOw u say u Studied my shit,Ya with some KY jelly while ur Jackn ya DIck//
Im sure all u wanna do is studie My ass, When i put up this challenge u sure answered fast//
U dick ridin fagget ass fuckn slut, I bet ur boys run a train on ur ass, put it in ur Butt//
I keep It real just chilln in the cut, bLaze big bLunts with sume RemmiMArtin in my cup
U sayn how ur alwas cryptic and crytical,By the judging of ur Rymes............//
THIS MOTHERFUCKERS PITIFULL!!(oooo)
U think u can fuck with the My sicc State of MInd//
I BUst so hard in ur Eye i leave ur baby MOma Blind//
U shoulda listened to ur mom when she said People aint kind//
Speakin of that BItch I got her Ass on the line....Say HI bitch ....//
Fuck shes talkn dirty dog i got to go...Hey Just like u Shes Feenin for MY DICK//

yo
 

yo uppin for votes fuck the structure feel the flow . holla

man that was 16 lines not 20... 4x4 = 16?
.................................................. .....
VOTES

ummmm......... lol?.. ay this batle is hands down one-man-bad.. i dotn even think i need to explain this.. but i will......

sic:your verse was all filler.. you had not one punch or personal, and i wasent feeling the flow.. sorry man, just work on your rhymes and you should get better wit time...

one: merked him with really like 10 lines.. metas and multis were hot.. im still trippin off those multies haha... aight *gets off dick*

v/one-man-band

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ...........votes????????????

The flow,vocab,punches,personals,multis...were smokin from One-Man-Band, that stuff was on fire...I really like your style
Sic: u did your best, but wasn't always feelin u flow and u lost me in the middle...but he put 16 so why are u bitchin he used 20 :s

win: one-man-band

Upin for Votes in this bitch fuck the structure feel the flow, this shit aint fuckn politiks feel the words and motherfuckn shit like that holla

this battle has gotta go to One-Man-Band cuz his flow was off da hook. His rhymes were easy to read and understand. And his punchlines were pretty tight and got me laughin. da other cat's rhymes were really simple and i just wasnt feelin him at all.
vote: One-Man-Band


drop an honest vote on da battles below...

a yo i dont no why but i think i like siccs flow better
1. is because you went over lines and he used it
2. i liked his punches and strutcture
if you think its a hate or d/r vote then DQ it

not a hate vote, i never seen you before, but youre first reason is wrong... i had 16 lines dude...

one.

uppin again

Ayo i was sorta feelin both verses
Sicc i think only lost my on flow witch for me messed up the flow. Punches hit and missed for both but One Man def brought the A game this time so ...
vote One Man Band

on a higher note i liked both verses just it all came down to structure and flow this time...

im voteing for SiccWitIt man he rite fuck tha sturture his verse had a nice flow

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

lol... this shit is pretty funny... but yeah... uppin for vootes^^

one

One-Man-Band...wins this easy. He ripped this kid wit multies...and his punches and personals were hittin home. Sic...filler verse...you need to elevate ya shit fo real...no punches in ya verse at all. Both need to werk on structure.

Vote- One-Man-Band

No hate.