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Flash vs mC RIOT
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aight check'n shit
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aiyo
They call this cat Flash, cuz he gets merked in an instant/
Like instant mashed potatoes his REALNESS is subliminally distant/ I'm really feelin ya in your signature, I gotta say I love da picture/ I took a look at your Poetic Scriptures, and THREW up more then a pitcher/[check out da link at da bottom of his signature] I'll cut ya up like scissors, u a poodle, I'ma doberman pincher/ Your rhymes should be held to a curfew, but I'm da lyrical Cinderella/ Cuz I'ma pull some magic on ya, and BEAT u in an acapella/ We agree on one thing, 2PAC is a legend in this so called game/ My rhymes are young and fresh, yours are so old and bald, its lame/ spit ya best man EVERYBODY VOTE |
drop a vot ein this battle and ill get back to u http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131811
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upp'n fo your verse man
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people go against you can be like 50..aint even gotsta try tah rhyme...
Taking one look at your rhymes is like taking a look back inta time... Kid gets caught prewrittin like Bill Clintons "Monica Lowinski'sCapitol Affair Like Bill Clinton you rhyme like you scared and not very aware... Only way you could be Syck if you had cought a case of AIDS... Saw his picture on buddy pic and hes a white boy with braids... ur wack and just crazy! u 'gettin fucked all the time' what do u rap as a lady... i mean once he 'hit his spit' his Rep Dropped faster than Arnold back in the 80's... ......ass droped in wit disses! u better askin a doctor of sickness...... hes' 'gangsta' folks', cuz '860' will be how many shots his body gets hit with... |
people go against you can be like 50..aint even gotsta try tah rhyme...
Taking one look at your rhymes is like taking a look back inta time... Kid gets caught prewrittin like Bill Clintons "Monica Lowinski'sCapitol Affair Like Bill Clinton you rhyme like you scared and not very aware... Only way you could be Syck if you had cought a case of AIDS... Saw his picture on buddy pic and hes a white boy with braids... ur wack and just crazy! u 'gettin fucked all the time' what do u rap as a lady... i mean once he 'hit his spit' his Rep Dropped faster than Arnold back in the 80's... ......ass droped in wit disses! u better askin a doctor of sickness...... hes' 'gangsta' folks', cuz '860' will be how many shots his body gets hit with... |
lol this was prett close battle but i gotta give it to.................................Flash...
flash: you had some nice punchlines...decent flow..and i liked those little links you used...they were really usefull....multies decent...overall you had a nive verse and you really impressed me nice battle mc: damn son y0u had a nice verse...punchlinse were decent..but they werent good enough to beat mc riot....multies were decent,,,,personals... were iight but overal i gotta give this to flash [b]VOTE=FLASH |
upp'n shit
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uppin
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mc riot - nothing special...spat basic weak lines....nothing amazing....no good meta's or personals....go straight at him....flow was ok....just work on u whole punches....yeah....give it a 2.3/10....
flash - u easily beat him with punches and personals....u ahd meta's.....u had way better flow.....better wordplay.....more complex shit....and merked his verse....simple and easy battle....give it a 6.2/10 vote - flash... |
i give it to flash by way of punches and wordplay
vote-flash |
Aaah nice nice....
Mc - You got some weak shit poppin there. I think if u take ur time and re read what u write u can accually do better i mean look at this closer We agree on one thing, 2PAC is a legend in this so called game/ My rhymes are young and fresh, yours are so old and bald, its lame/ Wtf is that??? /\ weak man weak Flash - Nice personals, good word play, uhh okay structure.. okay flow ass droped in wit disses! u better askin a doctor of sickness...... hes' 'gangsta' folks', cuz '860' will be how many shots his body gets hit with... /\ Lol nice u twisted it i like that... Vote: Flash |
upp'n
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uppin bitches.......
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Close battle, but Flash came out with the win because of better punches and more creative writing
MC Riot- Good verse, but you had a couple wack lines like the doberman pincher line and your closing line was wack. You had good punches and a few good personals. I loved your opener, and your cindarella line was good. You lacked in wordplay, and you had one extra line which kinda fucked up your structure. Flash- Good verse also, you came good here. Your opener was kinda lame, but your bill clinton line and the personal about him being white hit hard, and gave you the win. You had better wordplay, and slightly better punches, so you get my vote. |
upppin
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They call this cat Flash, cuz he gets merked in an instant/
Like instant mashed potatoes his REALNESS is subliminally distant/ - This is mC RIOTs best... this opener was pretty good, it flowed well decent punches, but your verse fell off the rest of the way... If you can keep the intensity consistent I think youll stack some victories here. ur wack and just crazy! u 'gettin fucked all the time' what do u rap as a lady... i mean once he 'hit his spit' his Rep Dropped faster than Arnold back in the 80's... ......ass droped in wit disses! u better askin a doctor of sickness...... hes' 'gangsta' folks', cuz '860' will be how many shots his body gets hit with... Best part of flashes verse... some decent punches- not a bad verse all in all. I think your verse was more consistent with its quality... Vote Flash. |
shit I forgot.... Can you two please drop a vote here ...... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305
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vote goes to flash fo betta punches, wordplay..mc riot iight verse but need betta punches..
v/flash return da favor wit da battle in my sig |
A'ight...mC Riot...I don't know why you goin up against Flash...when you lost to an herb named Syck. You didnt have a terrible verse...just wasn't on Flash's level. Simply put...if you want to challenge tha big guns...elevate everythin. Punches were sorta elementary...structure was good...flow was good...but Flash got this in every category.
No hate. Vote- Flash. Hit up my open mics please. They in my sig. And these battles. Thanks. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130054 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129842 |
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