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METAHphysiKz 06-27-04 11:52 PM

METAH vs. Orijinal
 
10-20 lines
first to 5
3-0 is a kO
votes need explaination


pZ

Orijinal 06-27-04 11:58 PM

U Spit First.... If U Think U Can Beat Me............

METAHphysiKz 06-28-04 12:01 AM

this aint a crucifiction but im gonna Nail this fight ..
bitch you aint Original .. you cant even spell it rite ..1
METAHz comin threw and bout to lock tha exits ..
wit crazy wordplay like playin scrabble wit a bunch of Dyslexits ..2
and you outta ya mind like smokin dust wit shrooms ..
Orijinal couldnt fuck wit me if i was a slut wit goons ..3
ya battle career consists of internet boards and chat rooms ..
you assed out in this battle like small briefs on Fat Dudes ..4
METAHz gonna win this hands down .. no doubt So Nuff ..
cause orijinal is soft like a box of Krispy Kreme Doughnuts ..5


quick shit for ya .. holla bacc son

Orijinal 06-28-04 12:57 AM

Ayo My Whole Fuckin Computer Froze I Think I Caught A Virus So Imma Do My Shit Kwik ....ight Gimme 5 Minutes

Orijinal 06-28-04 01:03 AM

Couldn't describe himself so he named himself after a lotta letters/
You a chicken that I just plucked with all my rhymes, you lost all your feathers/
Tellin' me I can't spell, but spelt his whole name wrong/
I dunno what I'm battlin METAHPHYSIKZ is dat a bitch in a thong?/
You know you don't want this, I got all my fans chantin'/
Once I shoot one bullet you'll be dodgin' like your avatar dancin'/
You should've looked at my profile and checked my facts/
'Cuz Im dangerous I'll leave U bleedin', ya whole body will need a Tampax/
Metaphysikz sounds like he spittin' black magic/
But really, after this shit he'll turn 2 black ashes/
You ain't neva gonna battle a kind like this eva eva again/
Know why? Cuz Im a senior graduated U a fuckin freshmen/
Did ya see what weak shit you typed? I think U need a Eye PHYSIK/
Cuz dogg, if you know wut U wrote then U juss ass in lyrics/
Look I'm gonna leave 'cuz this battle is done, Game Over/
U'll neva see a lyricalist like me, like findin a 4-leaf clover/

holla at chea boy

METAHphysiKz 06-28-04 01:07 AM

aigh good look homiee

lets get some votes on this battle

Orijinal 06-28-04 01:10 AM

no fuckin dickriders in dis bitch nor crew votes..hated dat BS

Orijinal 06-28-04 01:27 AM

uppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn please vote...ill return da fava..

C.M.F.S 06-28-04 02:13 AM

METAH .:vs:. Orijinal
 
METAH- your verse was ok good rhyming and flow and shit
but you only spit 10 lines when you set up 10-20 that left it
open for him to hit harder

Orijinal-you had a good verse same as good flow and shit
i think you had the opportunity with more lines
so you got a few more punches in

good work by both...

vote-Orijinal

Orijinal 06-28-04 12:04 PM

uppppinnnnnnn thiss battttle...we needs some votes man..ill return the favor

Wicked One 06-28-04 01:55 PM

Metah- Your verse was okay...but your punches didnt seem to hit hard ya know...plus you had shorter lines then he did so overall you did decently in dis battle but elevate.....
Orijinal-I hate your name!!!! j/p.....Anyways nice verse and your punches were good too so overall you win this battle for better punches & you had a good flow too....

v/Orijinal

Orijinal 06-28-04 09:30 PM

upppinn...please vote ill return the favor...please please pleas.e..uppppppppppppppinnnnnnnn

Tempa 06-28-04 09:39 PM

Orijinal - Some of yo shit wasn't original. I saw a couple rhymes that were predictable and that i've seen before. You had a couple of good punches. But lyrically i think metah got ya.

Metah - Pretty good verse. Saw some nice punches. Good flow. That was an overall good verse. Thumbs up.
Good luck to both of ya. Vote - Metah.

Return tha favor. Link in my sig.

Orijinal 06-29-04 01:32 AM

upppin this .....please vote ill return the favor...this battle needs to get eneded. 1.

Orijinal 06-29-04 01:54 PM

upppin this battle....please vote..ill return the favor one..

Orijinal 06-30-04 07:51 PM

uppin this battle...it aint ova til is ova kids...vote honestly and professinoaly...1

Judge. 06-30-04 07:56 PM

Structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Punches: Orijinal
Personals: Metah
enjoyed: Orijinal
Vote: Original

$MOKESKREEN 06-30-04 08:03 PM

Orijinal came with a good flow and his punches hit harder than Metah's. Personals were hit harder too. Both of you had pretty good flow but I think Orijinal's verse was a little better, it stood out more.

Vote Orijinal


Return the favor we need honest votes for this battle!!!!

Orijinal 07-01-04 03:01 AM

uppin this battle...vote honestly..dont sleep on dis battle..vote professionally...1

DoubleEdge 07-01-04 03:12 AM

Orijinal.. That tampax shit is WWWAAAAY played. umm.. I didn't really see hard punches. flow ain't too bad. could use wordplay..

Metah: Ya got a couple good punches. that dyslexits line almost sounded like you dissed yaself... Other then that was pretty dope.

Vote: METAH

Peace

East Miles 07-01-04 11:41 AM

Orijinal gets my vote for the simple fact I liked his better.....Especailly that line : Tellin' me I can't spell, but spelt his whole name wrong/
I dunno what I'm battlin METAHPHYSIKZ is dat a bitch in a thong

lol you sick as fuck

vote: orijinal = )


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