NightVision vs = -- Killah -- =
 

yeah i gotta do this over cause killa spelled my name wrong ima copy and paste his verse

aight yall this was killa's verse that he did but i had to redo it cause he spelled my name wrong
Yo Night Vision its a Fight decision but ya dumb
Try to look in the future kid now ya 5-1
You think u spell sick smell sick but chould i care-less
To win this battle cry to god to get Blessed
The vision i see is ur little bitch ass losein Duke
Leave ya on tha floor like its a madden Juke

aight yall and this was my verse

introduce this wannabe faggot fuckin face to tha curb~
roll him up and smoke this cat cause he's a tru herb~
fuckin mushy faggot your rhymes i'll just str8 consume~
this guy couldnt get pussy if he lived in a woom~
given this cat internal plus external fuckin wounds~
the only time he passin hot shit is when he gets gas from prunes~

NightVision vs = -- Killah -- =
 

NightVision- you had a good verse with a nice flow
good rhyming thoughout...overall good little verse
with punches

Killah-that was ok but you need to come harder
some good rhyming tho...

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Openor: Night
Structure: Killah
Flow: tie
Punches: Night
personals: Night
Vote: Night

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ill vote on this shit but u gotta drop a vote on one of mine

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killah, you had sum decent lines,
You think u spell sick smell sick but chould i care-less
To win this battle cry to god to get Blessed
i didnt get that one tho, n it didnt have enuf syllables on the second line.

nightvision, the woom line was hot, opener was alrite, the finish was OK but could of been better.

ima give this vote to nightvision

ill poll when on a yall puts a fair vote on mine.

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NightVision vs = -- Killah -- =
 

try again then fuck it...

-killah- this was ok for an opener 5/10


-night vision- this was a better opener... good w/p and r/s 7/10


-killah- ok rhyming... nothing else... no punch 3/10


-night vision- nice flow w/p punch 7/10


-killah- ok rhyming... ok closer 5/10


-night vision- good r/s... good w/p... funny closer 7/10


overall- nightvision had a better flow more consistent rhyme scheme
and came with harder punches...what more can i say

no hate but it wasn't really worth breaking down such a small verse
if you go to the rules it says all battles have to be 10 lines or more first

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~Killah~

Yo Night Vision its a Fight decision but ya dumb
Try to look in the future kid now ya 5-1
^Weak played line poor opener^

You think u spell sick smell sick but chould i care-less
To win this battle cry to god to get Blessed
^Don't really understand this line weak^

The vision i see is ur little bitch ass losein Duke
Leave ya on tha floor like its a madden Juke
^Best line from killa but again weak^


~NightVision~ *Trace now*
introduce this wannabe faggot fuckin face to tha curb~
roll him up and smoke this cat cause he's a tru herb~
^Lol good opener already won the battle^

fuckin mushy faggot your rhymes i'll just str8 consume~
this guy couldnt get pussy if he lived in a woom~
^Again good bar^

given this cat internal plus external fuckin wounds~
the only time he passin hot shit is when he gets gas from prunes~
^Not a bad close but the structure went a bit off @ the end^

Total miss match in my eyes Killah you really need to elevate
your shit, have a look at some of the help you can get on the
site. Didn't do well in anything really didnt rhyme if it did it
was playyyyed... No punchs, no wordplay, below basic.

Trace done well in this one, Would have killed this kid with just
the opener. Weak battle Trace need to start battle some peeps
in your own league now leave the newbs your better then that.

Prod

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i would have to say that this one goes to trace...

killah:hmm.. your shit coo.. but you werent punching nething.. you were just rhyming and flowing nice.. if you had put some punches in there, then easily would have been your battle.. but no punches were hitting for real..


trace.. you won due to the punches.. i saw one or two that were pretty good.. easily won due to the punches..


vote/trace

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killa:some decent lines,but i was'nt feelin your punches,structure was alright nothing that really caught my eye,your flow was about average,need better vocab though.
legacy:unlike killa's verse i was feelin all your punches,you came with a good opener n thought your closer was good also,your ryme scheme was koo,my only advice would be 2 extend your lines by like 2 sylables but thats bout it,jus a suggestion....
VOTE/LEGACY

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Votes=NightVision

He got my vote for better punches.Killah verse was weak.He could have came better on the punches.Legacy had a better verse beacuse of punches.

Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!!