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ILLunatic vs Envee
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You spit first No Feeding No Biteing No Recycling No crew votes No hate votes No d/r votes |
What up its Envee checking in... Yo ILL whats ya sn??
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Yo yo,
Peep I called this kid out and he wouldnt drop unless i came 1st.... He like a dogg his flow is "Limp" witout "Buiskits" but he aint no Fred Durst... Im bout 2 add this "Head" to my signuter labeled "Ripped In Passion"... Call this battle math cause my rhymes "Whole Numbers" urs are "Fractions".... Call this kid a "Ghost" but dont trip u aint close "2 pac" missin like ya profile.... Illunatic to this "Hole" battle is like a pre teen pregnate bitch stickin wit denial.. Imma have u "Runnin" and ill get a KO over u cause Envee is "Disrespectin Ya Lines".... Call Envee, 2pac kid cause i can only handle bitches like you "One Day At A Time"..... This kid juss got "Easy Baked" juss like mac and cheese in a microwave... Sorry ya aint ill ur rhymes need work like ya girls hairy cooch needs a shave.... lmao i dunno dawg quik key up... U rushed me and told me 2 do it 2day so u wont forget.. aight go! |
Aight go ahead and contest the best, but I wouldn't suggest
I've read your shit before, and i'll tell you I am not impressed I'll tell you this you stand correct, from the words of ya sig. Explained it good, ya did! You're just a "Motherfucking Kid" Accepting to battle me is like asking for yourself to lose ya teeth I'll slap you with a mic.... ....wrap the cord around a throat, and watch you gasp to breath 3 Months since I last battled, you aint shit to come back too You been gone too, i'll make you returning debut. "Envee's back"...."who?" You're wack dude, I wont bother to check this battle, your that screwed Infact dude, i'll give you props.......... ......................I wont be that rude. Fuck it, let this battle conclude Fuck it.. i haven't done text in 3-4 months... that was a keystyle |
DECENT BATTLE...
illunatic-ur verse was okay,ur punches were good,u had a nice looking structure,and i thought i seen a personal in there also,ur verse flowed decent,and u had nice word play....so u had a very good decent verse for not text battlin in bout 3-4 months,not bad envee-ur punches were okay but a lil to simple,u had no wordplay really it wasn.t good,u did flow pretty good though,but u also need to fix your structure,so i say elevate on your structure...and a lil more on ya punches...you will get better v/illunatic |
/\ LMAO dawg tha 1st bar i had was word play....
Uppin' 4 votes.... |
envee hands down
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Finally someone sees tha wordplay and tha punches i threw lmao...
Uppin For Votes!!!!! |
i know I cant vote but i think illunitic won this
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So the dont say nuttin fuckin newbs Uppin |
ILLunatic took this in all caigories espicly punches cause thay were a good amount
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lmao..i like envee's punches...quite funny...u need to work on ur vocab and ur wordplay...lol..i like da cooch shaved part..hah..but umm..
illunatic..yea i dont really think u came back 3-4 months really give you an excuse..but i like ur wordplay and talkin about envee's about his comeback..lol..funny shit..well this battle was fun to see illunatic had more personals in his lines also .. but umm this is how it breaks down.. opener: envee punches: envee personals: illunatic multies: none wordplay: illunatic flow: envee structure: ill vocab: none really vote: illunatic ayo..can yall vote honestly on my battle heres the link: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132254 |
iunno man.. that was aight to be you just commin back and everything, but wordplay goes pretty much hands down to envee.. and flow is envee.. hmm, structure is ill, punches, i think goes to envee to, cause his were more complex.. i think im going to have to give it to envee by a hair or less...
v/envee |
This is how I rated this: -
opener: Illunatic multies: ?? personals: illunatic punches: Illunatic vocab: envee wordplay: illunatic flow: envee structure: illunatic vote// illunatic Yall were both good. But as the statistics show. Illunatic was better. Keep elevatin. Holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
envee-> nigga you won this... it may have been simple but at least ya throw some punches with wordplay...
illunatic-> i don't know whut was up with ya structure but that was aight... i didn't see no multis from either... good battle but truth is... envee won....!!! holla at ur gurl MFG Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This shit is funny mad people b dyckridin this cat i didnt say everyone did im juss sayin mad people did... This is some bullshit dawg.. Bump... |
This is how I rated this: -
opener: Illunatic personals: illunatic punches: Illunatic wordplay: illunatic flow: Illunatic structure: illunatic So.. Illunatic won.. pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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thats a really newbish structure it needs to be fixed as soon as possible becuz you wont win many battles like that..ur flow was good and ur punches were nice sepite ur structure..i think u won this battle easily in my oppinion...but both verses were bad... really lame bttle fo'sho overall *5* |
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ur structure was better than his.. but only by a lil.... your rhymes scheme honestly sucked big balls......... ur verse was just all around bad...i was feelin it... ur punches wernt hitting hard.. quite honestly i didnt think u had one personal in this verse thats why envee wins overall 4/10 my vote envee |
illunatic won this better flo all around....envee u did good but yo flows were to extended...........both had decent punches,,,ill had a better structure n rhyme scheme
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in my opinion evnee won this it was a very close battle illuntic had nice punches and everything but i felt that evnee won this by her punches their was just somethin bout her verse i liked but overall yall was tha same in everything except punches witch evnee got and illunatic got tha structure evnee u need to work on that fa real overall vote goes to evnee now please return tha favor i forgot to get tha link but tha name of the battle is me vs rapmaster please vote
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ill- ya shit was ok. I think ya punches hit harder then envees. ya structure was kinda crazy though. Not much vocab but still i think ya won. Not much personals either.
Envee- ya spit was ok too. But ya verse was too simple. Ya punches were ok. structure was aight too. ya had more personals. But work on ya vocab. If you had some vocab you could have won this battle. |
Damn.. how many votes have been put into this batttle?
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Vote Fair Peeps.... Explain Vote Vote On Tha Poll!!!! |
Damn kid! You've upp'd this 7 times already. Isn't the limit 5
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i say envee won, they both did goo but envee had some real good punchlines
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754
Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win.... Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=( :cussing: |
Envee - Good verse. Had some good punches in there. Structure was straight. Ya closer wasn't really a closer but ya do what ya gotta do. 6.5/10.
ILLunatic - Good verse also. I liked yours better cuz you kept it more street. You wasn't all like I'll murder you bla bla bla. But ya shit was real and gutta. Liked it. 7/10. Vote - ILLunatic |
i dunno tha limit like i said i juss came back people vote
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Vote- Envee
I think he came harder but it was a pretty close battle. Fave lines from Illunitic 3 Months since I last battled, you aint shit to come back too You been gone too, i'll make you returning debut. "Envee's back"...."who?" You're wack dude, I wont bother to check this battle, your that screwed Infact dude, i'll give you props.......... ......................I wont be that rude. Fuck it, let this battle conclude Fave lines from Envee called this kid out and he wouldnt drop unless i came 1st.... He like a dogg his flow is "Limp" witout "Buiskits" but he aint no Fred Durst... Im bout 2 add this "Head" to my signuter labeled "Ripped In Passion"... Call this battle math cause my rhymes "Whole Numbers" urs are "Fractions".... Imma have u "Runnin" and ill get a KO over u cause Envee is "Disrespectin Ya Lines".... Call Envee, 2pac kid cause i can only handle bitches like you "One Day At A Time"..... Good battle both of you keep up the good work |
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