SiccWitIt vs NightVision
 

Aright Bro, spit ur shit, and then ill spit after u, get it done, holla

aight checkin in i'll spit in 30 to 35 i gotta go piss rite quick u betta show to

just waitin for u bro, dont worry ill be here .................

like i bad infection your rhymes u gotta get rid of it~
i'll spit my rhymes to your face and let u get siccwitit~ (get it that's his name)
get inside you tear out your fuckin liver and bladder~
then your heart and give em to ya on a silver platter~
spit this shit so hard he wont come back he will collapse~
jump his heart back up he see i'm still their and he start's to elapse~
i bet he think's he's immortal think's he is fuckin painless~
this is comen from a faggot who's favorite planet is uranius~ (get it urainus)
this guy rep's tha hood like that makes him a fuckin man~
the only hood he ever rept was one from tha klu klux clan~


tha urainus part was like your ass aka your ainus haha

u gotta check in now to or else u could sit their and write a 40 min verse then copy it and check in then so check in now

Hmmmm....lol....hmmmmm

Im gonna slap the shit out ya Face,Im loud like the base,And i always win the race//
Specially when faggets like u is spittn,i can luggie better shit then uve written//
I like how u have to explain ur raps to the crowd//
Why dont u just scream LOOK HOW GAY I AM real LOUD//
"Hey guys did u get my jokes, haha , thier funny" sound familiar?//
Im gonna make this guy a fuckn lost memorie like the easte bunnie//
U been to the hood?The dirty Part of WalMart dont count dogg sorry//
Ur raps Ur style and ur fuck name is played out like ATARI//
Bitch ive been Imortal , homie where u been?//
Just like MOTAL kombat im bout TO...FINSH HIM!!!......BITCH//

i cheked in already shit checkn in checkn in, fuck just read the raps this aint fuckn the first day a school, we aint takin roll

Uppn for Vote FUck the structure feel the FLow and ill return the Favor

uppin for some mutha fuckin votes ................

aight both were good flows nightvision had weaker punches and that why im givin it to
siccwittitt

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return tha favor tho no hate just honesty

Nightvision had weak ass punches the Uranus is commonly known heard it a million times..but he flowed nicely

SiccWitit..he had better punches than Nightvision..structure ur flow a little though...personals were better...

Vote-Sicc

^^ wtf is wit all these dr fuckin votes shit i aint sweatin it though

uppin for some votes..............................

flow night

structure night

punches night

personals no one

humor both

vocab night

overall this was a lopsided battle night took this easy his structure was good punches were on lock vocab wasnt very bad flow was betta then sikwitit's now for sikwitit your structure was off i didnt feel your punches were hitin very hard flow was bad because of your structure so that's why i gave this to night go vote on my battles now

no no no sicwitit wat is this no rhymes man come on rhyme the first two lets get on this but nice multiple rhymes in the first line i liked that.u lacked good punches and personals man u got the potential i voted on 2 of ur battles and for some reason u jus dont link wit good punches but u can cause ur rhyming ability is good.aight nightvison great personal to open wit i liked it a lot.nice flow it was consistant. so for better personals and punches my vote goes to vision

v/nv

NV's Drop:

like i bad infection your rhymes u gotta get rid of it~
i'll spit my rhymes to your face and let u get siccwitit~
nice using his name against him with a good punch=perfection 7.5/10
get inside you tear out your fuckin liver and bladder~
then your heart and give em to ya on a silver platter~
weak thing but still good tho 6.5/10
spit this shit so hard he wont come back he will collapse~
jump his heart back up he see i'm still their and he start's to elapse~
pretty nice punch I was feelin' it 7/10
i bet he think's he's immortal think's he is fuckin painless~
this is comen from a faggot who's favorite planet is uranius~
not liking the whole gay thing but it was a good punch anywayz 7.5/10
this guy rep's tha hood like that makes him a fuckin man~
the only hood he ever rept was one from tha klu klux clan
nice is he white????? 6.5/10

overall: 7/10

siccwitit drop:

Im gonna slap the shit out ya Face,Im loud like the base,And i always win the race//
Specially when faggets like u is spittn,i can luggie better shit then uve written//
what's this rhyming 3 words in one line and 2 words in the 2nd line & not rhyming the ending 1st bar & 2nd bar is fuckin' stupid kid 4/10
I like how u have to explain ur raps to the crowd//
Why dont u just scream LOOK HOW GAY I AM real LOUD//
as I said in night's drop i'm not feelin' gay jokes cuz they played unless its a good punch and in this one it isn't good 0/10
"Hey guys did u get my jokes, haha , thier funny" sound familiar?//
Im gonna make this guy a fuckn lost memorie like the easte bunnie//
what the fuck is this??? 3/10
U been to the hood?The dirty Part of WalMart dont count dogg sorry//
Ur raps Ur style and ur fuck name is played out like ATARI//
not weak shit again 5/10
Bitch ive been Imortal , homie where u been?//
Just like MOTAL kombat im bout TO...FINSH HIM!!!......BITCH//
shouldn't of added the bitch cuz that makes you sound weird here 3/10

overall: 3/10

vote NV

siccwitit won dis hands down, dis wuz da only ap i laughed my ass off on, the structure was off but who cares? vote-siccwitit

uppin for some votes on this and no herb dr votes for sikwitit

uppin for some votes on this and no herb dr votes for sikwitit

aight this shit is been open for 6 week's uppin for votes leave a link i'll hit it up and shytown that was a pure dr u fuckin homo

aight uppin this shit has been open for like 6 week's now and no dr votes like tha newbs sikwitit got to vote for him leave a link i'll hit it up

kk


sic:gotta say, it had niec flow, but man your punches really lacked bruh.. you just need to elevate on that tip.. cause if you had punches withthat flow then you would have beat him.. but you didnt hehe.. just try and get more creative punches and shit.. then you should be strait on the battle tip...


night:you had nice punches,, flow was a lil bit worse than sic, but it was still decent.. had some nice personals and shit.. good job.. good battle verse

v/night

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057
^ hit that up

night:i liked your flow beter than,sicc's but your punches were really played,that took away from your verse alot..
sicc,did'nt like your flow but thought your punches were good,punches won you this battle,sorry night but your shit waz jus 2 played..
vote/sicc
return the favour:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025 skforty7
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245 gunit
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134328 stank

no dr votes^^^ uppin for sum votes this was like 1 of tha first battles i had it should be closed

no dr votes uppin for sum votes this was like 1 of tha first battles i had it should be closed

amma hand to night.
boy jus came a lot harder and had a couple good personals/ let me break it down.

flow night

structure night

punches night

personals no one


vocab night

night not the best battle of yours ive read but you still had enough
vote.. night

sicc.......didnt really feel any of that drop think you had one good line and even that only gets 7-10 not a good at all.
you had no humour. no structure. no personals and just 2 attempts at punches.
overall..5-0 not good at all


night....ive read a lot of your shit and this wasnt some of ya best. seen you come a lot harder but i still think you gave more than sick
your structure was better as was your flow and punches.
im a give you my vote but you jus lucky he didnt drop hot coz youd be beat fa sho.
but dont worry this was one of ya first battles you much better now.
overall 7-10
verdict.. night.