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Lil-trip vrs.. verbal violence
yp 10-20 lines amx
3-k.o 5-wins no hater d/r favor votes u spit first verses due in one hour ~one~ Lil-trip DQ'ed for pming for votes Quote:
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lol..aight...
If there was n award for whos freestyle was worst, verbal violence takes first
Bitches only get Burnt..Pussy U never had real Balls right from your own birth! Verbal couldnt compose a spit that hurt if he was spittin from under his skirt Your goin Back..trips goin For-ward dig that Bitch only if you agree n Concur Verbal reppin no rules so Ima take it back to 89 NWA n mix some Ol School Luda! Verbal Acts a Fool n only spits when he hangs off my lips n Drools! Couldnt throw a Punch if I handed you my left Knuckle on yo broken head "Trip your amazing" Thats the only "Verbal" comment your Head has ever said V-Violence sounds like a broken appliance n dis Snitch needs to be Silenced Don start spittin in a forum cus your the "Highest" bitch yo Lips are the driest When I asked to Bring "Beef" you tried to supply it than down right denied it Im yo Mountain Peak you cant climb it this death certificate for ya i signed it See gangs you flee it nigga im not a lawyer but i know business when i see it Im takin pussy Trip only "G's" it Toss of a coin you see Heads n think Pe-nis You far from the top of the ladder ssss...stupid i don stutter whos madder See Bad Boi n asked whos Badder? Puffy aint Biggie B's the 1 whos Phatter! So im done wit this lyrical encision wit my vision cuttin into your pink Blatter U as recognized as the "Air" around U kinda around yet no one sees "Matter" Ill teach you my walk as time goes on Alias name trip real Name Chron Jon Dont do "Footlongs" you got trip mixed up wit jus hate chill nigga your wrong Homie Ur fucked n gone Stick to yo Fakin U been "Hooked-ah" on Trips Bong |
yo i never liked that movie it was boring//
thats what u remind me of the never ending story// wake me up when it gets morning,as i start to get prepaird for this lyrical touring// lil trip he fake prewrittin scripts all he needs is verbal with a twist// ima poet like common he tryin to be like flip// he sad cuz with the loses he got his name minus well be r.i.p(rip)// he bout to get another loss by the verbal king// cuz i come out clean hard with the k.o streek// i cause lil trip to leave the violent scene// cuz im rated d for dangerous// not for pg leavin my rhymesspaceless// he to funny for me im the real rick james bitch// ima leave him toung twisted with mad libs// commin swingin breakin u like an old ladys hip// dislokate every vocal in you makin vibrations to ya finger tips// and one thing u sound ganeric yo,ima be ur worst case in any scenerio// ~one~ |
uppin for some votes on this aight.........~one~..
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aight uppin for votes, lets get some honest love, feedback, N of course Votes, holla
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aight hands down trip got dis
better flow structure(slo down ya lines tho) better punches everything better better verse other boi elevate a lot v/lil trip Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ya jokah u a hater dawg or u just dick riding on favors??????? whatever anywayz yall could be uppin for votes
leave a link and i will return the favor~one~ |
see i think VV one this one... tha otha kid didnt have good flow he stretched his bars way too long and structur sucked ass..
V// VV! |
uppin for mo votes on this if yall can please~one~
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B4 Lil-Trip even thinks it,This Is Not A Hate Vote.I'm Honest when it comes 2 Battles...
Lil-Trip To me that was just a bunch of bullshit you wrote.You don't rhyme very well.How the hell you gone rhyme "it" three damn times?That don't work.Oh,I see the pattern you were trying to do,rhyming three lines.Your should stick to rhyming two lines.Stay even,don't go odd,It doesn't do to well in battling.Then ya verse wasn't making any sense for real.It seems like you just was throwing stuff together. ___________________________________ Verbal Violence Even though your verse wasn't as long as Lil Trip,it was overall better.In some places,your rhyming seemed to be off.Like I didn't see where line 4 fit into.It was a couple more lines were I don't see what you rhyming what too.So you should work on that.But overall,your verse was better than Lil-Trip,cuz he was writing a bunch of bullshit. Vote=Verbal Violence. |
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Fuck you Star, The first vote laid down was broken down exactly on who won who..
"Its a Bunch of Bullshit..", sounds like n opinion but has nothin to do with a battle.. He was all over the place writing shit bout wrongs n songs n one syllable shit n not personal multis at all, regardless of how long it was it was pretty aparent who won.. Then his friend who voted the exact same off your battle voted, n now you n your jus returning the favor.. Honestly if you made sense n your opinion, it wouldnt be so fucked up but your jus dickridin regardless.. the only reason you put in the title you vote honestly, is so it doesnt get DQ'd cus we have ab attlee goin on, that isnt honest but low, whatever |
^If your shit is garbage its garbage.Have no need to dickride bitch.He voted for me,cuz I merked ya ass (as you can see you have no votes).Ain't return the favor,to me,your shit was striaght bullshit.So get back with that mess
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trip gotz this, for harder punchs, and this line verbal spit, sounded kinda like compliment in my point of view "thats what u remind me of the never ending story//"
like hes never ending, never dien n shit, but i liked trips for harder punchs, i liked that it was longer too, verbals was too short. v/lil trip. |
aight this was a pretty good battle all the way arround... both of you came out pretty hard and i like that.. lil trip came harder with the punches and personals than verbal... plus verbal your shit was off and on rhyming.... no hate but ya gotta keep tha flow goin... i just wasnt feelin your verse.. like i said no hate to ya but thats just the way i see it... both of yall have good potential and keep elevatin (especialy on structure)... good battle both of yall
VOTE- LIL TRIP |
Lil-Trip Drop:
If there was n award for whos freestyle was worst, verbal violence takes first Bitches only get Burnt..Pussy U never had real Balls right from your own birth! hmm it was pretty good not tight tho 6.5/10 Verbal couldnt compose a spit that hurt if he was spittin from under his skirt Your goin Back..trips goin For-ward dig that Bitch only if you agree n Concur pretty good some good vocab here... 7/10 Verbal reppin no rules so Ima take it back to 89 NWA n mix some Ol School Luda! Verbal Acts a Fool n only spits when he hangs off my lips n Drools! ya their we go getting better by each punch homey 7.5/10 Couldnt throw a Punch if I handed you my left Knuckle on yo broken head "Trip your amazing" Thats the only "Verbal" comment your Head has ever said nice again 6.5/10 V-Violence sounds like a broken appliance n dis Snitch needs to be Silenced Don start spittin in a forum cus your the "Highest" bitch yo Lips are the driest weak worst punch yet 6/10 When I asked to Bring "Beef" you tried to supply it than down right denied it Im yo Mountain Peak you cant climb it this death certificate for ya i signed it pretty good and i'm pretty sure your gonna merk him! 7/10 See gangs you flee it nigga im not a lawyer but i know business when i see it Im takin pussy Trip only "G's" it Toss of a coin you see Heads n think Pe-nis ya this was a hell of a good punch tight wordplay 8.5/10 You far from the top of the ladder ssss...stupid i don stutter whos madder See Bad Boi n asked whos Badder? Puffy aint Biggie B's the 1 whos Phatter! haha nice wordplay 7.5/10 So im done wit this lyrical encision wit my vision cuttin into your pink Blatter U as recognized as the "Air" around U kinda around yet no one sees "Matter" word nice again 7.5/10 Ill teach you my walk as time goes on Alias name trip real Name Chron Jon Dont do "Footlongs" you got trip mixed up wit jus hate chill nigga your wrong Homie Ur fucked n gone Stick to yo Fakin U been "Hooked-ah" on Trips Bong wow pretty good closer 7/10 overall: 7.5/10 (good job! :thumbup:) VV's Drop: yo i never liked that movie it was boring// thats what u remind me of the never ending story// wake me up when it gets morning,as i start to get prepaird for this lyrical touring// weak opener I will harsh 3/10 lil trip he fake prewrittin scripts all he needs is verbal with a twist// ima poet like common he tryin to be like flip// weak can I say more 5/10 he sad cuz with the loses he got his name minus well be r.i.p(rip)// he bout to get another loss by the verbal king// pretty good 6/10 cuz i come out clean hard with the k.o streek// i cause lil trip to leave the violent scene// ahahahahhahahahaha im laughing in pity .... 0/10 cuz im rated d for dangerous// not for pg leavin my rhymesspaceless// weak again 2/10 he to funny for me im the real rick james bitch// ima leave him toung twisted with mad libs// not a good punch BigChase I think says that a lot!!!! 0/10 commin swingin breakin u like an old ladys hip// dislokate every vocal in you makin vibrations to ya finger tips// and one thing u sound ganeric yo,ima be ur worst case in any scenerio// your best line is your closer highly uncommon 6/10 overall: 3/10 lil trip won! |
maddddddddddd dickiders he ain't even deserve a vote VV I be talkin
about!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
watch urself bitch u know it and i know it i won this battle muthafuka!!!!!!
so dont be commin at me like ur my got damn dad saying i dont diserve a vote cuz i do and i know i won end of the got damn story.... oh and can we be uppin them votes on who really won~one~ leave a link i will return the favor |
verbal violence: i think your verse was really bad the structure was all over the place some lines were short some lines were long and your rhyme scheme sucked...you had only 1 or 2 hard punches the rest were just decent or really weak...your flow wasnt consistent and you had some filler in your verse...you had multies but they were weak multies and made your verse worst...your wordplay was also bad...and you need to extend your vocab...
overall : 3/10 lil trip: you had a decent verse...your was too much filler tho granted you was throwing punches but it was like........"filler............punch......filler..........fille r......punch" made less of an impact on your verse...one good thing about your verse was the structure even tho the lines were long the structure was good......btw shorten the length of your lines that also makes your verse lose impact...you had some good multies and about 6 good punches the rest were pretty weak...you had decent wordplay and consistent flow...overall the thing that stood out most in your verse was the multies....good job overall : 6/10 vote: lil-trip ~!1!~ |
lil trip totally outclassed violence here,
punches were harder, better structure, everything really! nothing bad from either party but violence needed to come stronger my vote - lil trip |
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