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mic-wrecker vs. killa
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no bitin feedin scritcly original flamez feel me.... as far as votes no hate dick rydin da'z it u spit 1st let's go!!!! |
checkin in......... where killa at??? yall no......
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Oh my fault yo let do a punchline battle 4 line iight due in 20- mins iigt??
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yea w/e but i'd rather do a regular battle w/ the rules i had set above but its w/e
20 min...punch line battle |
Alright this si my check in now so let get this started
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yu not comp to me, deez punches stomp for free//
have ya strugglin 2 breathe like an outta breath heavy d// tryin to b killa cam but u just anotha teen strugglin wit cha sexuality// bubble wrapped in pink wit a mic tryin to "pop" some faggot shit at me// |
my bad forgot to check but im here world............
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Your gonna be asking for a loss reduction like ya was getting a rebate
You be in each and every state ,searching for some rhymes like u was on Ebay Ya the closet you got to a barrel is touching a tech9 cd Ya couldnt have my head if you had a rhyme in a head like...ET.. This made weak i want a rematch on this 1 |
Yo cazn i get another 10 mins man that was weak i want ti to be reasonable
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Fam u came back acting like you needed to come back like u Man Up
I asked the whole d2r squad and styill noone wanted to be a man and Stand Up. You trying to inflouence people that the Generals is coming and He's Back Only time you in charge is when you in bootcamp collecting the ThumbTacks Alreight here my 4 lines |
KillaCam Flow
took this shit Type east Mic-Wrecker had nuttin on him best line of the battle was the Rebate, Ebay line that was nice small Verse tho next time go for like 6 - 8 it looks better Mic Wrecker ur Structure is iight Punches to weak like ur throwin a Fether from a chicken at him come harder next time ull prolly take the W iight Killa ur punches yet where still hard even tho it was a 4 line battle good shit and votes goes V/ KillaCamFlow |
yo this was kinda weak- I've seen both of you come nicer than this before- but as it stands heres my honest breakdown....
yu not comp to me, deez punches stomp for free// have ya strugglin 2 breathe like an outta breath heavy d// very basic punch here, and rhyming free with d aint too hard--- very dissapointing... 5/10 tryin to b killa cam but u just anotha teen strugglin wit cha sexuality// bubble wrapped in pink wit a mic tryin to "pop" some faggot shit at me// Kind of a forced multi in terms of rhymability- the punch is a little better than the first bar, but even the wordplay is a little basic--- better than the first line though... 6/10 Your gonna be asking for a loss reduction like ya was getting a rebate You be in each and every state ,searching for some rhymes like u was on Ebay First line was decent-- but not feelin the second or the punch- decent rhyme though - 7/10 Ya the closest you got to a barrel is touching a tech9 cd Ya couldnt have my head if you had a rhyme in a head like...ET.. again feelin the first line- but not really the second.... I think this was stronger than mics jumpoff though, if for nothing else but the rhyme scheme is on point.- 7/10 Vote KillaCamFlow--- Good luck in the future both.... and fluckin drop a vote here... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453 |
this was kinda a weak battle but ima have to give this one to killacamflow:
breakdown: mic-wreaker yu not comp to me, deez punches stomp for free// Are you serious ....weak 3/10 have ya strugglin 2 breathe like an outta breath heavy d// Omg ..another weak Shyt 3/10 tryin to b killa cam but u just anotha teen strugglin wit cha sexuality// Blah....Weak....no different from the other's 3/10 bubble wrapped in pink wit a mic tryin to "pop" some faggot shit at me// Lol...wow but ......no 3/10 damn your verse was weak all over you really need to work on your punchlines..and your personals overall ... very weak verse 3/10 Killa Your gonna be asking for a loss reduction like ya was getting a rebate Decent line... 7/10 You be in each and every state ,searching for some rhymes like u was on Ebay lol..one of your best lines 8/10 Ya the closet you got to a barrel is touching a tech9 cd Decent again..but could have been better 7/10 Ya couldnt have my head if you had a rhyme in a head like...ET.. Iight pretty good verse but it was very weak at times 7/10 overall weak battle but ima go with killa cam flow on this one... Vote=killacam flow please return the favor in my sig thank you |
man this confused me.. i didnt like the set up but based on ur 4 lines i gotta go with killa he just merked wrekka his punches were much better so my vote goes to killacamflow...
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KillaCam-PRetty good I though you took this
but pretty good but pretty even often verses and average and had a few med punches and metaphores Mix-Nice But I thought you slipped on some parts and It didnt have it like it was v/KillaCam |
ok this was a pretty wack battle
Mic wrecker....your flow was good an ytour structure was good but that was about it, an you don't win battles off of flow an structure, your punches were sad, your personals didn't exist, bad drop man you need to seriously elevate ya game son, so I'll give you a 5/10 KIllacam.....not much difference.....good flow an structure, but everything else was lacking, you had one punch which was the rebate line that was it, an sadly thats what won you the battle, y'all both need to evelate an drop some personals in your verses.....5.5/10 Killacam won becuz of one line Vote: Killa |
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