HIGH-TECH vs j_da_monsta
 

yeah 10 lines verses due 30 mins after check in u spit first

yo high tech...drop a vote in this battle...and then wen yall have ur verses up illc ome back here and vote http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132255

well i can already tell this is gonna be a no show in about 30 mins if u dont spit ima take it to tha mod's i hate it when u faggot's waste my time i said 30 mins and drop and i can already see u got off line pc

battlen me this kid's vision must be impared by that liqour~
replace his mouth with a ima faggot kick my teeth in sticker~
he so scared to spit he left tha forum look at tha hesitation~
stick his own head up his ass and watch him die from constipation~
the only thing this kid is packin is a bad hackin fuckin cough~
i bet he's lookin at my name rite now and startin to wack off~
this is like a fuckin mike tyson vs vanilla ice it's a wack bout~
i'll have these people is aww like when janet jackson's titty decided to fall out~
so inhale exhale this massacre that u facen that str8 radiation~
like it was genocide it's eradication so put in your recomendation~

Sorry I aint kno if you accepted or not, but imma spit anyway.

This cat's got more 'nuts' in his mouth, than in "Snickers Bars"//
Rhymes is so deathly sick, im diagnosed with "SARS"//
Your career couldn't get hot, if you sat down and boiled it//
Nothin but "crap" comes out your mouth like backed up toilets//
Have you seeing more lights than a 70's disco//
Cut the fat boy's throat, and watch his ass bleed Crisco//
No weak flows, keep it street though, beat a weak ho//
You only drop 'hot shit' after eating burritos//

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^uppin

^^^^ uppin even though his shit was probally prewritten it took u 2 and a half dayz to do that shit

Look at the date that I posted and the date that you posted......I don't just stay on this rap site, im on like 6 other ones too. Think before you open your mouth.

battlen me this kid's vision must be impared by that liqour~
replace his mouth with a ima faggot kick my teeth in sticker~
^Safe Opener.. Kiid... 6/10

he so scared to spit he left tha forum look at tha hesitation~
stick his own head up his ass and watch him die from constipation~
^Nice Use Of Vocab.....!! 7/10 .. And Nice Punchline

so inhale exhale this massacre that u facen that str8 radiation~
like it was genocide it's eradication so put in your recomendation~
^Nice Use Of Multie...!! And Straight Closer' ... 7/10

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This cat's got more 'nuts' in his mouth, than in "Snickers Bars"//
Rhymes is so deathly sick, im diagnosed with "SARS"//
^Lmfao Nice Personal...>!! And Good Punch Decent.. Opener... 6/10

Your career couldn't get hot, if you sat down and boiled it//
Nothin but "crap" comes out your mouth like backed up toilets//
^Weak Puncline' ... Fallin Off.... 2/10

Have you seeing more lights than a 70's disco//
Cut the fat boy's throat, and watch his ass bleed Crisco//
^Ok... Punch..!! Decent Bar 3/10

No weak flows, keep it street though, beat a weak ho//
You only drop 'hot shit' after eating burritos//
^Weak Closer Tried.. To Hard To Fit Them Multies In Your Verse' ...!!! -/10

Vote:TECH

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iight...i thought both verses were ok. both came mildly hard, but monsta...you didn't come hard enough. nice multies, personals, n flow, but tech brought some harder shit. sorry dawg...

vote: tech

high tech had it won, he jus had the better linez all around, better flow, better punchs, and i think it went together good.

v/high tech

it was close but i liked high-tech better so thats who my vote goes 2

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aight yall uppin for sum votes.....................

Hi tech's verse was ok, It was too simple tho. He had weak punchess and his tyson and Vanilla ice shit was wak. I wasnt feelin his verse at all. His lines were stretched and his wordplay wasnt really all that decent. J had an ok verse, I thought his punchlines hit better and his flow was to. I dont realy understand why the fat joke but at the same time I dont understand why Hi felt he had to pop Genocides name in so I didnt count it against him.
Flow, J
Punch, J
Structure, J
Wordplay, none

V/ J da Mo.

peep out one of my battles and vote honestly.

hmm kinda lopsided battle. High i have to say u won. harder punches, better flow, and better structure. neither one of u tried a personal. better metas for high. "he so scared to spit he left tha forum look at tha hesitation~
stick his own head up his ass and watch him die from constipation~" haha i lov that punch. very nice. "This cat's got more 'nuts' in his mouth, than in "Snickers Bars"//
Rhymes is so deathly sick, im diagnosed with "SARS"//" um its ok. but not great. peace

alright props to both battlers, but here's the verdict.
high tech-decent structure in this one, this was your plus in your verse.
with a nice line
stick his own head up his ass and watch him die from constipation~
but your downside, as is in many people's here is the corniness of certain lines.

the only thing this kid is packin is a bad hackin fuckin cough~
i bet he's lookin at my name rite now and startin to wack off~
i couldnt take this line seriously at all. try to come more serious, and nearly beef wit it.
so inhale exhale this massacre that u facen that str8 radiation~
like it was genocide it's eradication so put in your recomendation~
those lines didn't make sense. points off severely for that alone.

i-you came with decent structure. lyrically you guys are nearly the same. except you understand that you must come serious. And your verse, though small effort, was more serious to battling so this is why you got this one.

high-teck had it better flow and punches didnt see to many metas multis aight but overall this was high tecks he had 1 line with good vocab but nun the less thats my vote the other cat had pretty good stucture thats all
v/high-tech
return the favour in my battle vs schrema in my sig is the link thanks peace