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Decree Wun 06-29-04 02:22 PM

State Capitol Vs Gottaasswhoopin4u
 
aiight...ill battle in elevated frontlines from now on....just' for you

10 lines
no d/r cv or biting
2 hours to spit after check in
Blind Spit
No feedin
good luck

Pop Lotty 06-29-04 02:28 PM

checkin in.......

Decree Wun 06-29-04 02:29 PM

checkin in............Good luck.......:thumbs up:..

Pop Lotty 06-29-04 02:58 PM

recheck....my comp froze, and i had to restart....back again tho.

Decree Wun 06-29-04 03:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U
ur undefeated...go to elevated...unless ur a little chicken boy..*burcock, burcock*


Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........
Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich.........
I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask......
Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last......
I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack......
This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!...........
Quote:
look that was juss one bar, she bout to collapse/
she aint wanna go yesterday, cuz she had to get out on that track/

So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too..........
This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him,
so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............


its over ...its over...lol

Pop Lotty 06-29-04 03:24 PM

ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online".....
im rippin capitol, and leavin so much carnage...
u crews name is the "hardwood classics", so ur rhymes should get "thrown back" in the garbage...(hardwood classics is the name for nba throwback jerseys)...
u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer...
ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater...
he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl...
get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world
u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while...
u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child...

Decree Wun 06-29-04 10:12 PM

uppin this shit....will return favour.................

Poppa Kap 06-30-04 07:49 AM

Capitol u got nice mulites etc but this a battle, I would say there not important but PUNCHES are what are ur verse didnt contain any, ity just looked like intro 2 a diss track where they hadnt even started dissin yet, i didnt rate ur verse at all.

Gotta ass ur verse was nice, every line i liked because u were consistentent and had some witty punches are wacked personals in their aswell...good verse.

drop the quotations tho

ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online".....

he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl...
get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world

one sided v/Gotta...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132029

Pop Lotty 07-01-04 11:27 AM

^^^returned....uppin...drop links if ya want to.....

Decree Wun 07-04-04 01:04 PM

uppin this fam.................i will return the favour on who ever drops an honest vote on this....................

Terumoto 07-04-04 10:00 PM

state: not many punches.. and personals werent that good either.. wasnt really feelin your verse.. some ok wordplay, but i think your multis were kind of forced.. you traded off punches for flow.. which is a bad idea...I mean, im a real multi person, so i really feel punches with ill flow that are done well.. and your punches just didnt hit hard enough

gotaass:

"ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"....."
^^lol

but yeah.. although your rhyme scheme wasnt as complex as states, it still flowed well enough.. and you had some nice personals n wordplay in there.. and some pretty hard punches..nicely done

vote: gotaasswhoopin4u

return the favour.. need some votes on my battle with hoops.. its in my sig

Terumoto 07-04-04 10:02 PM

btw my vote isnt polled... its just an opinion..

but i need some experienced votes on my battle.. cos front lines is full of wack cats that vote for wierd reasons...

Pop Lotty 07-06-04 01:48 PM

uppin....will return favors..if the vote is polled

MoTiF 07-07-04 12:00 AM

u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child
hahahah Fuckin Dope Lol


Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........
Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich.........
Blah? 4/10
I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask......
Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last......
Played 3/10
I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack......
This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!.........
4/10 work on structure too
So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too..........
This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him,
so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............
wth was that 2/10

Overall...BLAH! I thought u were hot or somin 4.4/10


ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online".....
Lol 4.5/10
im rippin capitol, and leavin so much carnage...
u crews name is the "hardwood classics", so ur rhymes should get "thrown back" in the garbage...(hardwood classics is the name for nba throwback jerseys)...
Good personal/punch kinda stretched 5/10
u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer...
ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater...
Personal/punch agian 5/10
he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl...
get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world
Lol 4.5/10
u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while...
u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child...
Fuckin dope as i said...8/10

Overall decent i guess 5/10

Vote:Gotta

Decree Wun 07-07-04 12:11 AM

this battle was soo logn ago i got a new flow new structure and i spit harder but its ok..uppin

MoTiF 07-07-04 12:13 AM

7 days?

Pop Lotty 07-07-04 12:50 AM

^^^werd....hes in denial....

Metaskriptz 07-07-04 03:07 PM

I dont know about this

State Capitol-I dont know but this was a close
on but I thought you had like 4 lines that was better
the Gotta's and you had some things like similies
but I would give this a
7.3/10

Gotta-Your lines was stretched and it was hard for
me to read and But mainly you had some good
punches that I read but the otheres was stretched and
they Made it hard for me to read which means only a few
was aight

7.2/10

V/State Capitol

Daclassic 07-07-04 09:14 PM

SC: This was close. You came with an arsenal of nice word play and multies. nice strategy I think. structure was okay. nice personals...unless they were fake....punches were not up to par...overall solid verse

Gotta: This was close. You came with a couple nice lines that were about average. Your structure wasn't all that good ...which made it hard for me to read plus the spelling...you got potential. I always thought you were real real weak...solid verse

v/state

any of you'll return the favor

Pop Lotty 07-09-04 03:38 PM

uppin.....

PoLiFicK 07-09-04 03:48 PM

State beat This Dude Like He Stole Suttin...lol

Opener-

Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........
Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich.........

7/10 Couldve Been better

ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online".....

Alright 8/10

Bestline-

I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask......
Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last......

Nasty......9.6/10


u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer...
ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater...

Cool 8/10

Closer


So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too..........
This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him,
so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............

Cancel It 10/10

u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while...
u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child...

8/10

Winner-State

FlowIntelligent. 07-11-04 01:22 AM

hott battle!!! state your verse was just sick them multies were flying everywhere and were all hott....good personals hott punches good w/p multies structure was decent choppy in a couple plaaces...flow was consistent...you had a really good verse

fav bar:

I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask......
Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last......
I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack......
This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!...........

^ whooooooo fire right there best shyt i seen in a while

overall : 8.5/10

gotta: you had a fire verse too i think you came harder in the personals division but your punches werent as good and the flow was better the structure was all over the place wasnt good decent w/po good vocab honestly everything could have been a lil bit hotter good verse tho

fave bar :

ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online".....
^^ truest personal ever lmao

overall : 8/10

vote: state capitol

~!1!~

KillaCamFlow 07-11-04 02:02 AM

I gotta give...state..this battle because...i think his punches just hit a little more....do nto get me wrong ..but...gotass..yua rhyme was nice as a bitch but i think it lacked some puncheds but it was very nice...but i think state won..wit wordplay...and...punches....struc..go to gotta...but i think state won nice shit all around tho...nice shit....***

Vote-st


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