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State Capitol Vs Gottaasswhoopin4u
aiight...ill battle in elevated frontlines from now on....just' for you
10 lines no d/r cv or biting 2 hours to spit after check in Blind Spit No feedin good luck |
checkin in.......
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checkin in............Good luck.......:thumbs up:..
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recheck....my comp froze, and i had to restart....back again tho.
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Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........ Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich......... I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask...... Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last...... I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack...... This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!........... Quote:
So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too.......... This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him, so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............ its over ...its over...lol |
ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... im rippin capitol, and leavin so much carnage... u crews name is the "hardwood classics", so ur rhymes should get "thrown back" in the garbage...(hardwood classics is the name for nba throwback jerseys)... u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer... ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater... he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl... get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while... u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child... |
uppin this shit....will return favour.................
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Capitol u got nice mulites etc but this a battle, I would say there not important but PUNCHES are what are ur verse didnt contain any, ity just looked like intro 2 a diss track where they hadnt even started dissin yet, i didnt rate ur verse at all.
Gotta ass ur verse was nice, every line i liked because u were consistentent and had some witty punches are wacked personals in their aswell...good verse. drop the quotations tho ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl... get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world one sided v/Gotta... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132029 |
^^^returned....uppin...drop links if ya want to.....
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uppin this fam.................i will return the favour on who ever drops an honest vote on this....................
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state: not many punches.. and personals werent that good either.. wasnt really feelin your verse.. some ok wordplay, but i think your multis were kind of forced.. you traded off punches for flow.. which is a bad idea...I mean, im a real multi person, so i really feel punches with ill flow that are done well.. and your punches just didnt hit hard enough
gotaass: "ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"....." ^^lol but yeah.. although your rhyme scheme wasnt as complex as states, it still flowed well enough.. and you had some nice personals n wordplay in there.. and some pretty hard punches..nicely done vote: gotaasswhoopin4u return the favour.. need some votes on my battle with hoops.. its in my sig |
btw my vote isnt polled... its just an opinion..
but i need some experienced votes on my battle.. cos front lines is full of wack cats that vote for wierd reasons... |
uppin....will return favors..if the vote is polled
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u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child
hahahah Fuckin Dope Lol Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........ Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich......... Blah? 4/10 I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask...... Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last...... Played 3/10 I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack...... This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!......... 4/10 work on structure too So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too.......... This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him, so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............ wth was that 2/10 Overall...BLAH! I thought u were hot or somin 4.4/10 ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... Lol 4.5/10 im rippin capitol, and leavin so much carnage... u crews name is the "hardwood classics", so ur rhymes should get "thrown back" in the garbage...(hardwood classics is the name for nba throwback jerseys)... Good personal/punch kinda stretched 5/10 u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer... ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater... Personal/punch agian 5/10 he be on the net searchin for porn, u need to get a real girl... get off the comp, mtv's not the only way u can see the real world Lol 4.5/10 u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while... u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child... Fuckin dope as i said...8/10 Overall decent i guess 5/10 Vote:Gotta |
this battle was soo logn ago i got a new flow new structure and i spit harder but its ok..uppin
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7 days?
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^^^werd....hes in denial....
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I dont know about this
State Capitol-I dont know but this was a close on but I thought you had like 4 lines that was better the Gotta's and you had some things like similies but I would give this a 7.3/10 Gotta-Your lines was stretched and it was hard for me to read and But mainly you had some good punches that I read but the otheres was stretched and they Made it hard for me to read which means only a few was aight 7.2/10 V/State Capitol |
SC: This was close. You came with an arsenal of nice word play and multies. nice strategy I think. structure was okay. nice personals...unless they were fake....punches were not up to par...overall solid verse
Gotta: This was close. You came with a couple nice lines that were about average. Your structure wasn't all that good ...which made it hard for me to read plus the spelling...you got potential. I always thought you were real real weak...solid verse v/state any of you'll return the favor |
uppin.....
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State beat This Dude Like He Stole Suttin...lol
Opener- Let's Flip-the-script, His Own ass He "whips", This kids-a-bitch........ Your Raps are on Bum Status, Your far from Rich......... 7/10 Couldve Been better ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... Alright 8/10 Bestline- I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask...... Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last...... Nasty......9.6/10 u crew is classic, thats a nice deciever, ur the only believer... ur crew is sad, they breed rbs cheater... Cool 8/10 Closer So Put the mic down, and pull your skirt down too.......... This bitch is gon' cry and complain after i merk him, so watch out for Gotaasswhoopin' Gettin Ripped Part 2............ Cancel It 10/10 u trash, i hope u havent been doin this rappin thing for a while... u think ur the prince of rb...cant be, ur jus my illigitemate child... 8/10 Winner-State |
hott battle!!! state your verse was just sick them multies were flying everywhere and were all hott....good personals hott punches good w/p multies structure was decent choppy in a couple plaaces...flow was consistent...you had a really good verse
fav bar: I Spit An-thrax, let the gats-blast, right through your gas-mask...... Your Lines are half-assed, He who laughs first laugh's last...... I laugh-at, you thinkin' you the best on this site, Kid your ass-crack...... This Kids Mad-Wack, Hey Look I Have-Facts!!........... ^ whooooooo fire right there best shyt i seen in a while overall : 8.5/10 gotta: you had a fire verse too i think you came harder in the personals division but your punches werent as good and the flow was better the structure was all over the place wasnt good decent w/po good vocab honestly everything could have been a lil bit hotter good verse tho fave bar : ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine.... only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"..... ^^ truest personal ever lmao overall : 8/10 vote: state capitol ~!1!~ |
I gotta give...state..this battle because...i think his punches just hit a little more....do nto get me wrong ..but...gotass..yua rhyme was nice as a bitch but i think it lacked some puncheds but it was very nice...but i think state won..wit wordplay...and...punches....struc..go to gotta...but i think state won nice shit all around tho...nice shit....***
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