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Da Jokah (I.I) vs. SevenThird (D2R) - Crew Battle- Vote on this.
A'ight... House Rules Check in. 100+ Posts to Vote. Drop Due by Sunday 11:59PM.EST Since we both in NY Good Luck to Both. |
show me how yall do it up in NY ima DSGB but i got my own style that ill show yall soon ehough and for the record im not tryin to start no beaf...... Be easy
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"Da Jokah" aint no "Villain"-Dont Front Son- "I'm-Ya-Hero"
I'll "Snipe" This "comic" like "DC"- Votes is mine Five-Ta-Zero~(1) Don't like to Tattle- But It's Proven You Only Battle-Newbs It's a Fact- Half the cats you beat have only Battled-YOU! Ya Crew full of Ship Jumpers- But Yall ALL Loyal-To-Penis It won't Help you win- But sure makes corn-holes Convienient Dog you from Queens? now I see the kind of whore-You-Is When Ja Rules wack ass already Got Signed Before-You-Did You Try to Substitute Punchlines with "Reppin Da Hood" You misunderstood- Ya hometown does ya record-no-good My Styles Elegant- You Left Dead and sprawled with no evidence Except the "Young Blood" Spread on the walls of ya tenements(2) (1)- Joker- Villain in Batman Comics- Snipe and DC (DC Sniper)- DC is also a Comic Book Company. (2) "Young Blood" is in his sig... I shouldn't have to explain further. |
Due date is quickly approaching and your boy didn't even post a check-in yet... whats goin on?
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aight bitch lets gooo....
ayo my flow iz Ill....and ma Intentionz are drastic// my hallow tip bullets will fill....and turn ya whole body plastic// have u dressed up makin a bill..next thing.. u left in a caskit// like the iraqiez iam a kill,,u and ma bullets elope like da ball n basket// ayo my verse isLimited Edition like dem baseball cards// talk shit..ill have D2R crew like ma shoes and lace-yall-hard// ayo its bottom of Sevenand iam steallin tha Third// runnin for home base..yellin at cha pitcha flippin tha third// aight mayne ill Tell U Why Iam Madd Son..*showin da gun*// cuz iam pissed of at bitches like u..u a sadd one.*KNowin i wun*// Like pac n suge..iam a stay mobed up and stay a Young Blood// ill knock da wood..have u all robbed up..9+ya head.. i found out u got some blood// yo u kno u aint winnin like ma bois gettin bill preventions// and d2r aint got shit on ma bois tha Ill Intentionz// e.z nigga wun.. meanins.... Ill...Intentionz= my crew Limited Edition= My Crews Leader ..Botom ofSeven...stealin Third= boi iam battlin's name Tell u Iam Madd Son= its in his sig Young Blood= he used it against me from my sig Ill Intentionz= once again its my crew |
uppin this mu fuckah lets goo dont sleep niggas wun.....
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vote up niggas dont sleep ill return after wun..
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dont sleep on dis nigags holla wun
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uppin this muh fuckah DONT SLEEP NIGGAS
wun |
Da Joka-You came aight had not that much multies
But mainly similies was aight and metaphores stayed basic ..but you didnt come that hard some nice complexity and vocab and nice idea's 7/3-You came the same but your rhymes was basic .. I five you the Complexity and thje structure botrh kindof stayed there but you almost had it but slipped right derr on like 4 lines OVERALL-Both didnt come that Hard kindof weak but overall I think Joker takes this by a lil though becuz he had a slight more v/Da Joka Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127309 |
A'ight hot battle...uppin' this shit for ....uhh...this shit...
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are ya going to return thw favor I already beat him he admitted it and oh' yea You said you would Return the fav Thanks
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lmao @ this shit.... lets get some honest votes now....upping
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hmm...
seven:"Da Jokah" aint no "Villain"-Dont Front Son- "I'm-Ya-Hero" I'll "Snipe" This "comic" like "DC"- Votes is mine Five-Ta-Zero~(1) ^good opener..7/10 Don't like to Tattle- But It's Proven You Only Battle-Newbs It's a Fact- Half the cats you beat have only Battled-YOU! ^nice punch...6/10 Ya Crew full of Ship Jumpers- But Yall ALL Loyal-To-Penis It won't Help you win- But sure makes corn-holes Convienient ^eh.. bar helped your flow points, but punch wasent that hard.. Dog you from Queens? now I see the kind of whore-You-Is When Ja Rules wack ass already Got Signed Before-You-Did ^that stuck lol....7/10 You Try to Substitute Punchlines with "Reppin Da Hood" You misunderstood- Ya hometown does ya record-no-good ^stuck a lil bit..6/10 My Styles Elegant- You Left Dead and sprawled with no evidence Except the "Young Blood" Spread on the walls of ya tenements(2) ^not the greatest closer...ok..wasent a punch there jokah:ayo my flow iz Ill....and ma Intentionz are drastic// my hallow tip bullets will fill....and turn ya whole body plastic// ^weak opener..no punch have u dressed up makin a bill..next thing.. u left in a caskit// like the iraqiez iam a kill,,u and ma bullets elope like da ball n basket// ^no punch..just gunplay ayo my verse isLimited Edition like dem baseball cards// talk shit..ill have D2R crew like ma shoes and lace-yall-hard// ^ehh....wasent feelin this ayo its bottom of Sevenand iam steallin tha Third// runnin for home base..yellin at cha pitcha flippin tha third// ^no punch aight mayne ill Tell U Why Iam Madd Son..*showin da gun*// cuz iam pissed of at bitches like u..u a sadd one.*KNowin i wun*// ^no punch Like pac n suge..iam a stay mobed up and stay a Young Blood// ill knock da wood..have u all robbed up..9+ya head.. i found out u got some blood// ^gunplay, but no punch yo u kno u aint winnin like ma bois gettin bill preventions// and d2r aint got shit on ma bois tha Ill Intentionz// ^wasent effective....would have flipped this bar..first line should have have came last... seven:you had flow,and your ppunches were on point.. jokah:i havent seen any of your other verses,but you lack punches..you didnt hit him once forreal..and gunplay dont get you know where unless its ina tight punch..stay up v/seven third |
oh...forgot to to say "No hate." lol.. i wasent hating, just the way i saw it.. get at me if i need to explain my thoughts further
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Seventhird, I was feelin ya flow all the way thru your verse. You had good structure which made it easier to read as well. The opener I didnt like too well, 5 to zero ive seen peeps say something about KOing people too many times, its just to played out. A couple nice personals though, Young blood, I liked that it was good for a closer. Your punches were here and there, but you didnt have a couple of ones that were hard. Good Verse
Jokah, your flow was pretty nice...it went from one verse to another very well. Towards the end though it seemed like you got off with the flow and structure a lil, but nothing major. You did attempt to use some personals against him, which werent bad. You tried to use young blood after he already used it against you, and I think that back fired. He hit you pretty hard with that one already, and it wasnt workin tryin to turn it around. REally aint see any multis from you, and you seemed to talk about yourself a lot too. If your going to praise yourself, at least use it to put the other person down. Your punches just werent connecting with Seventhird...good flow and shit just come harder next time. v/seventhird |
uppin this muh fuckah 1-1 dont sleep
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Uppin this shit.... stop sleepin and start pollin fuckers.
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Lemmy Breeeeaaaak It Down...
Punches:Seven (But Very Close, What It Came Down To Was Who's Style Supported Them Better) Wordplay:Seven (Even Though That Batman Shit Was Wack, No Offence) Flow:Seven (I Loved Reading That) Complexity: Seven (Verse Speaks For Its Self) Overall Enjoyment: Seven (Juss All Around Liked It Better, Except The Batman Thing) Vote Goes To Seven... ~One~ |
seventhird that was mamazing.jokah it was aight.ok jokah u had a fresh opener but it didnt really hit hard at all and ur punches werent anything special but ur flow was good jus nopt a good content.fresh verse.seventhird ur verse was really good i liked it since the opener the opener was jus great it had a lot of wordplay and personal in it.u didnt slow down neither ur whole verse hit hard wit constant personals and hard punches.ur flow worked out really well too and his was a great original verse.
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arright its standing at 3-1 in my favor- Uppin for some more of them votes.
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We Need to get this shit closed.... drop some votes and some links.
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rmm...nice battle breakdown
7....nice verse..i liked ur rhyme it was mad hott..nice wordplay....ya stuc was good but...it was mad hard reading wit all of these""""""""....lol nice ve3rse those all around....7/10 i say if ia rated it... Da..Nice flow...i was impressed wit ya skillz really first battle ivew seen of your...name on the board...butti was hott tho...lacked..wordplay but used some...some good punches...i liked ya struc..it was good....i think You Lost because of Lack...of wordplay..iight nice tho....just 1 lost to me i see...so i think you ince but just did not come all that best you could have iight 1 |
Iight- Match point- lol..... Uppin for more voters.
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Even though they same crew now 7 Repped D2R on this 1 so im uppin this for the closure
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uppin this get it done qwik niggas e,z,,,'
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Yeah if I win this battle will still count in favor of D2R in that crew battle- lol funny how things work out.... lets get this closed fam.
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uppin this--- ------------------------------------ drop links
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da joka- please stop doing rap now, or elevate a hella lot.... stop trying to rhyme every line and come with an actual punch.... if you do that, you'll improve ten-fold
seventhird you had some wit to your shit, a few basic but OK associations (DC, comic, snipe, ect.) but you need to lose the " " quotes are gay, if the reader can't understand it without the quotes, you need to word it better so they get it.. other than that you seem to be on the right track, keep at it, you took this one with ease vote - seventhird |
uppin this muh fuckah
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vote up niggas wun
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Seriously lets get this shit done voted on and closed...... drop links
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uppin this pplz dont sleep
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This sight gettin innactive as fuck.... drop some votes
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uppin this muh fuckah dont sleep...
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uppin nuff said
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50 Characters..................................... VOTE ON THIS SHIIIIIIIT-- NOW... drop links
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uppin this muh fuckah
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Aight uppin this for my man SevenThird Destined 2 Rhyme reppin at the time
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uppin this muh fuckah
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