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Poison Vs. Hoops
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no recyclin no feeding (we drop 20 mins after check in) no biting 100 posts to vote.. its 10:01 pm here now... im dropping in 20 mins.. this is my check in..lets go PMing for votes currently not allowed: Quote:
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aight scratch that 20.. we gonna drop lil later... voters have to wait :P :thefinger
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aight man im bout to drop soon.. ima wait a lil bit more.. i know you had things to do.. aint no thang, live life.. aight get at me
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my drop
Destroyin this kids easy, packin him away neatly..
disposin of his punches, like lunches, i eat em weekly.. poison couldnt cook-up rhymes if i smacked em with a Bar or grill.. mistakin if you call "Skippin school" your reason for bein ill.. diluted............ya rhymes run crooked like "Wooden-Legged-Sports".. I said he eats like a pig,he responded "No thanks.Allergic to pork".. kind looks as if hes drugged, this "dope"is gettin rolled and smoked.. like a sappy Disney movie, im revokin ya right to "hope"..(for a win) the way im "lining" you up............ my nicknames ya Barber.. the way ya verse "blowin up", ya structure couldnt be-any larger.. |
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yo that shit was tight, mad props.
U couldn beat me if i tied myself up an handed u a bat... face it ya wack, tha day u get skillz is tha day Magic come back... i was readn ya raps, basically a bunch of non-sense... usin unecessary words, writin as if u were unconsious... hoops in a rush to lose, like fat men wantin food in lunchlines... this dude so terrible he gotta explain his punchlines... ima throw u a beatin, like i was ali in his prime... murda ya lyrically, an do like oj an get off clean wit da crime... ya like a blind man tryna rip me off of wut chu see... but cha blind to talent, thats exactly why ya cant see me... please vote |
please vote on this ill return tha favor pc. uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Damn that was a close ass battle.Nice shit from both.Nice flow from both.Equal in the punches.That shit too close 4 me too choose.
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vote on this please, good battle right here show us both love
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NICE ASS SHIT 1 of tha hottest battles ive read in a while shit...
Punches will go 2 Hoops Opener will go 2 hoops Structure will go to Poison: hoops in a rush to lose, like fat men wantin food in lunchlines... this dude so terrible he gotta explain his punchlines... Winner is .... HOOPS Wow that was a surprise lmao V// Hoops But it was mad close 2 decide thoes catagories i hadda really think... Wordplay will go to Hoops Closer will be a tie Personals will go to Hoops FAVORITE LINE WILL GO TO Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Well like I said that was a very very very close battle,almost a toss-up.Both had good flow & punches.Hoopd had nice wordplay also.So I gotta go with Hoops.
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uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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ya u both came decent....
Opener: Hoops..cuz magic lines are played Closer- both pretty tight...tie Punches- Hoops Personals- none Flow-tie Complexity-Hoops Wordplay-Hoops Enjoyment-both had some clever lines Overall-Hoops...came a lil harder and had some better wordplay...good battle tho keep at it |
durmil you cant vote you don have 100 posts
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100 posts to vote on this shit??? haha ight then sorry my bad b!
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true.,. 100 posts are needed.. my bad man, just sometimes people wit low posts make bad votes that are un-explained no what i mean ?... not including you, your vote was explained enuff.. tho i still cant count it.. thanks for leaving feed back tho, much appreciated.. leave links guys, i will look at your battle and make an honest decision...
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diluted............ya rhymes run crooked like "Wooden-Legged-Sports"..
I said he eats like a pig,he responded "No thanks.Allergic to pork".. kind looks as if hes drugged, this "dope"is gettin rolled and smoked.. like a sappy Disney movie, im revokin ya right to "hope"..(for a win) ^^fav lines from hoops hoops in a rush to lose, like fat men wantin food in lunchlines... this dude so terrible he gotta explain his punchlines... ima throw u a beatin, like i was ali in his prime... murda ya lyrically, an do like oj an get off clean wit da crime ^^fav lines from poison Poison had the better flow since hoops was a little shaky in the begining, but hoops has moth clever punches and personals, so i'ma vote for hoops vote:hoops Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Dayum hoops that shit was ill, Economics dont know what hes talkin about. Flow was tight as hell, rhymes were syck, and the overall verse was VYLE. Your competition was hardly that, you need to take off the 100 votes so that i can vote!!!!
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I think hoops got this 1 came out arms and artillary swingin. I think Hoops had sum nice punches and had an aight structure. The wordplay was nice to read i thought this was quite an impressive display of battlin.
Poison no h8 coz we got our own battle but u went 2nd and i didnt think u really got this. The wordplay punches and personals were pretty basic however i thought the structure again was a nice 1, i think both do still need sum work on their technique if they are to compete comfortably against vets in this site. V/Hoops (Overall good spit but still room 4 improvement) |
Much appreciated...if i havent already, ima try to return an honest vote to ya battles.. UPPIN for last vote
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yo to me I think that Posion took this one. It was close though.
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Sorry, man you need 100 posts to vote. I respect ya opinion tho, cause he had some pretty ill lines in ther... =)... well ne way.. Uppin this again :)
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dat was serious tho wheneva anybody feel like battlin the king holla
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one more vote
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one more vote guys! lol.. all im asking for.. come on, lets get some more votes on this battle..much appreciated
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UPPIN... come on ya'll.... we just need a few more votes, lets get em in!
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UPPIN for the KO ya'll.. lets go
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aight poison wen u talked about him explainin his punches thats considered as feedin.ur punches were weak and ur flow was good. u had a lot of personals and it was a fresh verse but still the punches are weak.hoops excellent flow good punches too easily a win
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