QBsmasher vs DangerousMyndLunatic
 

Aight both verses are due in 20 minutes.

10 lines min 20 max
N/Recycling
N/crew
N/biting

GL

10Lines MAXIMUM' .... I Done Told You Don't Get It Twisted Boi' ..

You Droppin First Since You Called Me Out' ..!!!! - ..

You Cool With That? Because If Not This Battle Is Over With

I made the post, I set it up, your goin 15-20 lines. and ill drop first. then you got 20 min.

It's 10Lines Maximum 5Lines Minimum.. Wanksta' ... Get It Straight' ...!!!!

go 15 max and we will do it, that 5-10 is too lil.

at least post something that has a lil content....

Im on top of the charts, you arent around
And I know that chest aint holdin ya down
So your smart and read books, equipped with good looks
Sad to say broads like you dont even make good cooks
So youve got twenty losses what would you do for twenty-one
Why dont you tell em about the pm, asking if you could rent me hun
Im a teen, human being, ripping machine
And it seems, youll be seeing, this first handed scheme
My rhymes are endless, youd say i have a miriad
The only thing you have consistent is your period
Youll be tryin to hop on my dick, cause you know im stayin
I wouldnt call you sister, if our last names were wayans
She says shes so nice, why she still aint got a break
Is a bigger question than, is britneys tits fake?

Checckity Checck.. Checck!!!!

Checck This Shit: ...

Do You Think QB Suck's I'll Poll The Audience...!!!

Your First Criminal Offence Was Waisting My Time,
Acting Like You Got Game, You're Guilty Dont Lie,
Your Second Offence Was Failure Of Style,
Lack'n Sufficient Substance, Except What u Smoke Out Of Ur Vial,
Plus You Don't Debate The Fact That Your Gay?,
Call The Homo-Police To Come And Take You Away,
It's Juvenile For You To Continue This Battle,
Pussy Ass Momma's Boy, Just Run Home And Tattle,
To Another Beating, You Should Consider Attending an A.A Meeting,
Either You'r Stupid or high, You Need To Catch Up On The Reading,
Man Like There Is Still Hope For Cats Like 'You',
Stop Frontin, Be True I Aint Saying Nothing New?
Getin 'Jiggy With It' Every Time You Get Raped?
Drinking Wont Give u A Clean Slate Stop Takin Dick At Any Given Rate

End Of Part 1
Blah Its Over With.. That Is All Because What You Wront Was Poor And Beyond 'Disbelief', Typical Trash Who's Hooked On Booze And Reef, Borderline Of Being Pushed On To The Cold Lonely Streets..!!!

Upppppin For Votes.......................................


wrot .. = Wrote**

I like Dangerous drop. QB didn't come hard enough, not enough punches.

Im on top of the charts, you arent around
And I know that chest aint holdin ya down
So your smart and read books, equipped with good looks
Sad to say broads like you dont even make good cooks
So youve got twenty losses what would you do for twenty-one
Why dont you tell em about the pm, asking if you could rent me hun
Im a teen, human being, ripping machine
And it seems, youll be seeing, this first handed scheme
My rhymes are endless, youd say i have a miriad
The only thing you have consistent is your period
Youll be tryin to hop on my dick, cause you know im stayin
I wouldnt call you sister, if our last names were wayans
She says shes so nice, why she still aint got a break
Is a bigger question than, is britneys tits fake?

nice shit....Let's see what she got...

Do You Think QB Suck's I'll Poll The Audience...!!!

Your First Criminal Offence Was Waisting My Time,
Acting Like You Got Game, You're Guilty Dont Lie,
Your Second Offence Was Failure Of Style,
Lack'n Sufficient Substance, Except What u Smoke Out Of Ur Vial,
Plus You Don't Debate The Fact That Your Gay?,
Call The Homo-Police To Come And Take You Away,
It's Juvenile For You To Continue This Battle,
Pussy Ass Momma's Boy, Just Run Home And Tattle,
To Another Beating, You Should Consider Attending an A.A Meeting,
Either You'r Stupid or high, You Need To Catch Up On The Reading,
Man Like There Is Still Hope For Cats Like 'You',
Stop Frontin, Be True I Aint Saying Nothing New?
Getin 'Jiggy With It' Every Time You Get Raped?
Drinking Wont Give u A Clean Slate Stop Takin Dick At Any Given Rate

End Of Part 1
Blah Its Over With.. That Is All Because What You Wront Was Poor And Beyond 'Disbelief', Typical Trash Who's Hooked On Booze And Reef, Borderline Of Being Pushed On To The Cold Lonely Streets..!!!

also some nice shit.....


i was feelin QB jus a tad more. He gets my vote. pc-1

Openor: Dangerous
Structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Personals: Dangerous
Punches: dangerous
Vote: Dangerous

QBsmasher

Ok,your verse was basically about her being a female.And you played most,if not all your punches on that,which was not a good thing.Your punches were not that good.So next time you battle a female,you shouldn't focuz so much on her sex,naw mean.Throw some punches that you could throw to a male or female,naw mean.Your flow was cool.Your verse was to focus on her sex to me.
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Dangerous

Your verse was cool.You had a little bit of wordplay in there.Your punches were cool.Your flow wasn't all there.You had a nice lil verse.
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My vote goes to Dangerous for having a overall better verse.Holla at my battle

Oh well 3-2 uppin for more votes...

Hard one to call, but if I had to pick I would say QB

to me.. this was one sided.. DML had the punches... they hit way harder...

QB, you attepted multies, which are a plus, but you didnt execute thema s well as i would have wanted em to be...good try tho...


v/DML

return the favor, with an honest drop
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132624

Much appreciated

QBsmasher Drop:

Im on top of the charts, you arent around
And I know that chest aint holdin ya down
weak ass opener no wordplay or creativity 5.5/10
So your smart and read books, equipped with good looks
Sad to say broads like you dont even make good cooks
what kinda diss is dat????? 5/10
So youve got twenty losses what would you do for twenty-one
Why dont you tell em about the pm, asking if you could rent me hun
false info not 20 losses fam 5/10
Im a teen, human being, ripping machine
And it seems, youll be seeing, this first handed scheme
weak 4/10
My rhymes are endless, youd say i have a miriad
The only thing you have consistent is your period
everyone uses womens mentrual period against them uncreative 0/10
Youll be tryin to hop on my dick, cause you know im stayin
I wouldnt call you sister, if our last names were wayans
what the fuck is dis? wayans??? ain't no wordplay & ain't working 3/10
She says shes so nice, why she still aint got a break
Is a bigger question than, is britneys tits fake?
how can you diss someone like her???? 6.5/10

overall:5/10

DML's Drop:

Your First Criminal Offence Was Waisting My Time,
Acting Like You Got Game, You're Guilty Dont Lie,
that was just decent ma 5.5/10
Your Second Offence Was Failure Of Style,
Lack'n Sufficient Substance, Except What u Smoke Out Of Ur Vial,
pretty nice I was feeling it 6.5/10
Plus You Don't Debate The Fact That Your Gay?,
Call The Homo-Police To Come And Take You Away,
unoriginal..... 5.5/10
It's Juvenile For You To Continue This Battle,
Pussy Ass Momma's Boy, Just Run Home And Tattle,
you can do better than this...... 6/10
To Another Beating, You Should Consider Attending an A.A Meeting,
Either You'r Stupid or high, You Need To Catch Up On The Reading,
good flow decent punch 7/10
Man Like There Is Still Hope For Cats Like 'You',
Stop Frontin, Be True I Aint Saying Nothing New?
ok punch 5.5/10
Getin 'Jiggy With It' Every Time You Get Raped?
Drinking Wont Give u A Clean Slate Stop Takin Dick At Any Given Rate
it was ok..... 6/10
Blah Its Over With.. That Is All Because What You Wront Was Poor And Beyond 'Disbelief',
Typical Trash Who's Hooked On Booze And Reef, Borderline Of Being Pushed On To The Cold Lonely Streets..!!!
pretty good there 7/10


overall: 6.5/10
vote: DML

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