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State Capitol(0-0) vs. Spul(0-0)
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm western check in on Tuesday verses due on JULY 7wedsday votes due by the next saturday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
checkin' in. IU guess we DO get to battle State. :D
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yes i believe we do........hmmm...thats jus' my luck huh...........
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Prepare to get yo first loss!!! :D Even though it ain't goin' on yo record. :cool:
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dont get to cocky...the 8 wins i didnt even try :laugh:
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^that's what they all say. ;) lol :cool:
Edit: damn, forgot about freepostin' rule lol |
fuck it i aint wastin no time
You aint no vet-er-an, You had to give head to get-ahead............ He On Stage Like, "Its Spul imma Blue-Print Veteran, Gunit101 is da only one im better than".... Beatin me is Not possible, Punches will put you in the hospital........ How You gon' defeat me when you can't get passed the smaller opsticles.... You aint best Emcee for 4/04/, That Was April Fools.......... These Nines Will soak up your body more then public Swimming Pools...... You Aint Part of a Crew, DId You Even Read the Blue-Print....... The Plan Was To steal your beats and then Get Rid Of You, Cause You Worthless Like Buttons and Lint................ I Seen Your Pic, Everyone Look, Mr.Bean Is Back.......... SPul can't produce, soundclick page Full Of Wack Tracks.......... SP stands for Stupid Pussy, I won't be surprised if he doesn't drop........ Stick To your tradition, it's obvious you arent meant for HipHop....... Do yourself a favour and freepost 3 x so you can get DQ'd.......... Cause You Finna Melt Quick Like An Ice Cream cone from DQ.... (dairy queen) Lastin Line, everyones quiet, surrounded by the media....... Fuck the last line thhe first 14, already have him on the first flight back to india............ |
damn, why so early? but yea, I can
t spit tonight, so I'll spit sometime tommorow. |
sall good i jus dropped cuz im bored LOL..aint nuiffin better to do
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yea, whatever did this in 15 mins:
You’ll never be significant in this game, cuz you got no fuckin’ flow The only State Capitol you are, is the one abbreviated KO You say my beats suck. Fuck you, you can’t hear or see You needed a beat for the anthem, and who’d you ask? It was me So stop it wit this shit. Go hold yo dick, cuz skill you lack it Man, I’ll knock you out faster that Andy Roddick wit a racket Don’t be proud of yo record, cuz you battled herbs jus to get it You prolly smoke ‘em too, cuz the rules of flow, you always forget it Yes, I jus rhymed wit the same endin’, but still… I fuckin’ merked you Cuz yo verse had me confused like Kutcher, but I’m askin’… “Where’s yo flow, dude?” |
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this was the only line i seen that was feed off of....if he would have had another line that fed than he would be DQed but now you know for next time... |
aiight, uppin'. So if it ain't a DQ, then Seventhirds vote was bullshit, but who gives a fuck. And uppin', and the feedin' ain't DQin' me so don't jus say, "SPuL fed so he lost". Judge on the verses.
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Ight- best lines went like this ....
Spul- had 3 nice bars in this ... Yes, I jus rhymed wit the same endin’, but still… I fuckin’ merked you Cuz yo verse had me confused like Kutcher, but I’m askin’… “Where’s yo flow, dude?” - The closer was pretty funny- Decent Opener, and I liked the bar with the Andy Roddick punchline... Like I already said you've come better than this before, but nice verse... it had good structure, good punches, nothing spectacular but a good verse. State- Your verse wasn't too great, I think the structure was kinda strange and some of your punches missed the mark, and some were just basic... example Beatin me is Not possible, Punches will put you in the hospital........ How You gon' defeat me when you can't get passed the smaller opsticles.... - decent flow here, but no real solid punches....---You Aint Part of a Crew, DId You Even Read the Blue-Print....... The Plan Was To steal your beats and then Get Rid Of You, Cause You Worthless Like Buttons and Lint................ I Seen Your Pic, Everyone Look, Mr.Bean Is Back.......... SPul can't produce, soundclick page Full Of Wack Tracks..........-- This part is why I vote for spul... its just really basic, the punches are weak- I've seen you come much better than this- Good luck in the future both, but Vote Spul... |
yes i feel you...i had no time to waste..i jus' spit whatever came to my head first...if i was dedicated and REALLY wanted to win this..considerin i had like a week to drop a verse...id take the whole day jus free'in until i get A reall sick line..then maybe the next day another line would pop to me..and keep goin until i have a FIRE verse..but naww...lol......but the sexyness in my rap still shows.... and big ups to SPul for pullin an ill verse
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lol @sexyness in yo verse. lol but tight battle.
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boo. i had better lines for you spul. im ghostwriting for whoever battles you next week.
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this battle was weak.
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stop freeposting..regardless who you are read the rules........
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:laugh: lol yea, man, if you do audio I wouldn't mind battlin' you. But i'm done wit text, unless it's tourney's and leagues. So hope you battle me in one of those. Yea, uppin' |
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Spul got this because of the more complex and original lines. V/Spul |
that is sexy ^..what you talkin bout..lol j/k...2-0 spul
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lol thanks for votin' apotho. uppin' this
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State Capitol - aight decent verse....jus sum stretched lines....punches were decent and only a couple hit nice....i think u meant ur closer to be india....if so then it was funny...if not then it sucked....would like ot see sum betta meta's....and keep up the personals...just a lil bit over decent verse....give it a 6.7/10...
SPuL - lol u pretty much cracked on his flow the whole time...which was the only big downfall of his verse....so decent concept...umm punches were decent and funny at times...opener was nice...and thats what prolly took the battle....cuz it was the hardest hitting punch and caused the most effect.... Vote - SPuL |
yeah it was pos' to be india what did i put lmfao.......
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OMG I PUT INDIANA SHITTTTT........that ruined the whole fuckin closer.................. hhaaha it was pos' to be India
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lmao yeah....
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Battle Closed....ko....spul Wins>>>>
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tight. :cool: 6th KO in a row. :D
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accually its not closed he re opened it..sucker
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spul takes this hands down good personals,nice hitting punches,and flow,and his structure was clean ''so fresh'' lol...this was a decent battle but spul murdered this battle
state capitol u did come decent ur structure was ugly tho,and it made ur verse not flow well,ur punches were okay...but u should elevate a lil itty bittty more...okie doke much luv son v/spul v/spul |
4-0 for spul
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uppin'
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uppin'
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okay this battles closed...because we need votes on some many other battles...peace
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