Yehti vs. infared
 

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im sendin 9 at you like 50 i got fifty on it they hit you ill help you digest em wit a missle trien to find a missin leg ill send waldo in for the riddle i aint gotta cock at you i point my cock at you and piss catch it on camera now thats a tape rkelly cant miss you sick literatelly go to sleep lyrically wake up on ya period then i finish my sentence you be the only guy sayin you independant wit destiny child(lol)you was born on accident im destinys child yehta would be proud yehti is an american now no more diva la resistance i incist he gives up on dissen or i will use threads to shread you up put you back to geather like humpty dumpty after his suicide bomin they couldnt put yehti back together again right now im loungin but the weekend is end of rest i put a eagle shell in ya vest they shatta and grow in ya chest

Checking in. I'll
have my verse up sometime soon. Be
on the lookout, for
it. I wont no show, so don't worry Red.
pze.

it's easy to see, ya bars and flow tend to flucture,
and you'll never not 'in' ... like your punches and structure.
you know its time i tell you a about yourself, geek,
the gap between us ... bigger than da 1 between ya teeth.
gona leave your dome shattered, all over the place,
you're definately infared ... being covered all over ya face.
kid, you have nothing to gain, except a huge frown,
since ya smile is big as the McDonald's one ... upside down.
youre pure garbage; another reason why u gon lose,
that i dont have enough feet ... to kick the crap outta you.

yehti nice verse i liked it great rhyming and great punches.u both need to start usin personals.infrared try breakin up ur line bad strucutre and no good punches aight jus keep elevatin.yehti good strucuture gooid flow no personals but strong punches and both obviously originality so ok new battle aight but keep practicin

v/yehti
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

Yehti - 1 ... infared - 0.
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pze.

Yehti vs. infared
 

infared- i liked that verse...
...but i dont think it made much of a battle thread...
try to set it up a bit better so you got funny punchlines and shit for a text...
but i think that would make an ok audio to the beat of somthing like the outro the OBIE TRICE CHEERS album...

Yehti- your verse was set up better and you had some funny punchlines there
overall you had a better battle thread good word play rhyme scheme...

good work by both...

vote- Yehti

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pze.

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pze.

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pze.

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pze.

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Whats up with the voting people?
pze.

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Whats up with the voting,
people? Can someone delete the
other ups aswell?
pze.

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Whats up with the voting,
people? Can someone delete the
other ups aswell?
pze.

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Whats up with the voting,
people? I've voted on like 10-12,
battles and I only get two
in return? fuck that. Can someone
delete the other ups, aswell?
pze.

Yehti - 2 ... infared - 0.
Still upping for votes. WTF is going on?
pze.

Infared- I just wasn't feeling any of it, you know I didn't like the way it sounded, flowed, the way it was put together in general.

Yehti- Yours was nice, you had a few good punches in there, good structure you had the flow, so I'm gonna give you the W.

Winner- Yehti

Yehti - 3 ... infared - 0.
Thanks for the vote BZ. Much appreciated.
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pze.

Yehti - 3 ... infared - 0.
Thanks for all who have voted.
Upping for some more votes.
pze.

structure - yehti
flow - yehti
punches yehti
metaz - neida

vote - yeti

i took the time to vote n explain it.... so should you vote on these links

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

Yehti pretty nice verse man. The structure was tight...nearly perfect. Nice punches and I was really feelin the flow.

Infared you need to get some structure, cause i cant pick out how you want the shit read. Makes it appear as if there is no flow to it. You need to be a lil more creative with it and throw some harder punches. I really couldnt pick much of anything out of your verse.

v/yehti