Scriptive vs. hustler17
 

ok here are the rules:

no feeding
no biting
no d/r votes
no h8 votes
no crew votes
10 lines max
you spit first ill spit right after you good luck... :thefinger

aight (whats biting and feeding)

true to my rhyme, I bang down the keys
try to rap back, open your mouth and freeze
Ill blast it so hard, you'll fall to your knees and beg please
I twist the beat, turn it roun three-sixty degrees
Chew up my words and swallow, yo head is empty hollow
put up a beat, try to listen and follow
I aint no beginner, I aint no hoe
got more weed to pay your dough
at this game I can beat any experienced pro
so get your act together and get on with tha show

biting is taking other peoples lyrics, and feeding is where your gtting your rhymes off the other persons verse...

good luck...

ok i got this,

by the end of this vese your shit will be imobolised-
your going to be crying, "hustler17 got beat" your getting circumsized-
people reading my shit, your dick ryders have been compromised-
your going to lose so i think your should unsubscribe-
ill make you look more of a foll than you already are-
ill roll you up, bake you till your black, shove you in a cookie jar-
you can't be serious, challenging me i suprised you didn't choke-
imma put your body through a grinder, make your body as runny as egg yolk-
this is the last two lines whats it gonna be-
that was where i murdered a fake emcee-

aight, not bad, well wanna go another round???????

not right now we'll just keep it as one round aight lets just get hte votes in for this battle peace !!!!!!uppin!!!!!!

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bump :laugh:

c'mon peeps start votiiin!!

come on where are the votes on this thing................ GET VOTIN...

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both were shit so i'm voting for ummm scriptive for not making me throw my computer out the window

wow thats encouragin i dint think i did that bad for one of ma first battles, im still elevatin aight so at least be easy on me....

both of them came weak, Hustler was pretty boring, nuttin that caught my eye..... scriptive was a lil betta, his use of words, but still pretty weak.

winner....... Scriptive

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scriptive won but both of you need to elevate keep it up though

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They were weak but its ok, cuz they new at this. Hustler had some creative stuff but none of them were punchlines. U should aim at Ur opponent, I get tired of stressing this to U kids. In a war, niggaz who battle aim to fuck anybody in the other side up. thats wat it is. try this concept Hustler, it really works.
scriptive had some ok shit but his lines were stretched and alot of filler. not as much a hustlers but almost. Use better punches nextime, Ur vocab was better than ur opponent.

Punches, S
Structure, H
Flow, H
Metaphores, None
Vocab, S
Opener, H
Closer, S
Overall verse, S

V/ Scriptive
P.s. Hustler, U did good and I liked wat U wrote untill the last part, U had writers block. next time diss the nigga on the other end of the battle to Ur best ability. keep ur flow and structure, u was ok on that. keep elivating. and vote on one of my battles in my sig. learn wat not to write from the niggaz I either K.O. or injure and leave lyrically scared. peaz

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ya i agree both were rlly weak but i say scriptive


v/scriptive