State CapiTol Vs Canopy
 

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house rules
no crew votes
no feedin
checkin....after i drop you got 25 mins
this is my check.....

aiiight koo check..after u drop i got 25 mins............... therefore u got 25 mins or thats cheap son..u get as much time and i only got 25..or make it 45 mins or somethin

State, you have no skill.. My lines will leave you Astounded
And the only time he gets some action is with these around it (* *)
Fuck State, Tempa, and your crew them niggaz is horrendous
I keep a licence to kill and ya licence to live is suspended
It's the boot camp, and your gettin disrespected
Dont think bout callin ya crew your Lifeline has been disconnected
fuck info.... I use the internet streamline for dissin
offensive position... pissin on anything this dude is spittin
my quick wit allow me to spit sick shit like an infested dick
you flow fall's hard like pro quarterbacks who can't pick up the blitz
You whack dude. States wack as fuck, but I got a question to ask you
Do you work hard to be so whack or does it just come natural?

no beef....thats just how i do it

yeah......you got 25 mins cuz i dropped in 20 so you got 25....

aiight check son you wan do me like that..its over son

I Got A Desert Eagle For This bitch With The Big Ego...........
Time canopy spits somethin hot is when crack becomes legal......(never)


The Merkin Begins......................

Can't Believe I accepted a challenge from a mentally challenged........
Skill Level and your bank account are similar, they both unbalanced.......
Collabed with Llyod banks-n-burned ur rhymes, bars still aint "on fire".....
Like Magic Johnson my sickness is forcin' you to retire............
Your raps get pissed-on, this round im winnin like the detroit pist-ons......
"Punches" merkin you, Pussy backed down quick when the "fists" drawn....
smack the black off u-n-punch in your Noes, HEY Its michael jack-son!!.....
Put More Slugs in your spine then the "bullets" throwback-Son......
Like nerds..adaptin to the environment is a slow process....(YOU WACK)
Battlin' me is like cake for this kid, He Enjoys Losses.......


did that in 30 ate came back n spit.......waz hood nucca

jea but the rules were set up u culda took all day to spit that...sall good anywayz...u had a FIRE verse mayn..i give u props for that....mad sick shit........this gon be a hot battle

yup....lets get some votes in here

damn...can we get some votes up in this battle

Sick battle niggas. And yo canopy just gotta know.......Why did ya choose my name outta tha whole crew to put in ya verse? Don't bite off sumthin ya can't chew. LOL.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754

Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win....

Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=(

yea this battle was tite. Imma give it to capitol though. He brought it with tha throwback line and the pistons one too. Good Finish also.

vote - State Capitol

aye vote on mah battle too:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...032#post1379032

aight w/e man....and Tempa i picked you cuz your the crew co-leader..lol

Punches-Sc
Flow-tie
Personals-None that were solid...but Canopy
Opener-SC
Closer-SC
Enjoyment-Sc

decent battle...both had some hot lines...couple were played but still effective....vote for SC tho he just came harder.....peace keep at it

ok.....still no votes though....uppin

ayo this shit was a dope battle
the battle im postin is fucked up
but check it
ayo vote XxXtasy -vs- HellRaZor

peace

yo stae dawg u foin it big u got this battle by a bunch punches structure and everything any other could say and if any one else knew it to u won...
other doo i wasnt feelin ya verse dawg not bad but state has more talent than you and he had better punches....
v/state

I was feeling State more than Canopy..

when I first read it, I thought that canopy took it, becasue his verse was tight too..
but whn state came he came..

Punches: State
Flow: State
Structure: both i guess

I vote for state capitol...

NOW, return tha favor n vote in my battle.....

I forgot the link cuz... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133042

Ok this battle was fire but I got to give it to state capitol because his flow was crazy and he was mad creative with the bulls line and the piston line and witht he magic johnson line i mean his punches were harder so vote goes to state capitol

Ups to both of you.

State capitol came straight out and was on point. Had a good opener, and he used very good metas while he was throwing punches. All the while he flow was on point, and his structure almost remained ok. Personals were right on point in his flow as well. Didnt really see any multis though.

Canopy you opened up good, I liked the line about him getting action. After that you didnt really throw many punches, and you had a few lines in there that didnt rhyme, like your closer...which made you battle close weak. Try to use some more metas so that you can come up with more creative stuff. Your flow was a lil off also, throw in some multis and that should help it out some. Not too bad of a verse though, elevate a lil bit and youll be on point.

v/State Capitol