ILL Tempa vs. Unfortunate
 

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No D/R
Win by 3 votes=KO
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Verses due 30 Min. After check in.
You spit first.

U trying to battle me dog...........................?

your suppose to spit first
remember that was how i said it

yo we got to pause this battle. im going to myrtle beach so ill be gone for 12 days ill finish it when im done

Nigga you better write a verse ain't nobody tryin to wait 12 days. Just write and post one up real quick. Shit.

Here's my check and i'll have my verse in 30

Yo you battling outta ya league and ya pushin ya luck//
I wanted a challenger, but “unfortunately” you suck//
Says he from "HV" the willow, he just remembers a small room//
But it’s really a "H.airy V.agina", it’s this niggas mom’s womb//
Yo kid when this battles ova, everyone will chant for me//
Cuz ya gotta realize I’m like a soft dick, I can’t be beat//
So do like ya said, and take yo ass to myrtle beach//
Cuz whether you post or not you’ll still suffer defeat//
I’m done “Roc-in this Fella”, I think my job here is done//
Post ya verse if ya want but ya chances of winnin are 99 to 1.

Yo it's a quick time so you can do yo shit before you leave.

If ya don't post it's a no show and loss.

He posted up on the corner with his mom and wife
saying man ill give u head if you just spare my life
this ill tempa aint showing hes more like a baby crying
you say theres hard streets in florida you know you lieing
life is easy when your mothers paying the bills
ill tempa taking on unfortunate are you foreal
real g's are on the street husling around the block
but u a fagget in the house playing with your cock
he blacker then burnt chicken, wacker then vanilla ice
most of your shit prewritten, let me give you some advice
everytime someone battles unfortunate you know its curtains
you from florida dont you think you should be out somewere surfain

yo fuck it, its 6:30 am im going to get some pussy this took 10 minutes to write hope you feel it.

alright lets uppin this shit for some votes i will never do a noshow

yo check it i wrote it quick you trying to put some one down for going on vacation its more like you trying to get an easy win, it took you forever to write this shit, i was to busy packing or else i would go first now go home and wack it

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that was so good Unfortunate man i think its a surtain win for you

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Ill Tempa Took This Shit

I'll Explain Y After I Got 20 Posts

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eh... I was actually feelin both verse but i'm big on personals it makes these battles on text good. Unfortunate attempted on personal but just wasn't hittin with 'em his flow was there but his structure was basic but aight. I think his verse might have made aight on an audio.
But Temp came with them hard hittin personals about unfortunates name location and vacation spot and that Hairy Vagina line had me laughin. His structure and flow was on point aswell this time so good verse and big ups to both but
vote ILL TEMPA

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opener - ill
closer - ill
struture - unfortunate
flow - unfortunate
punches - ill
metaz - ill
creativity - ill

vote - ill

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133957

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Yo you battling outta ya league and ya pushin ya luck//
I wanted a challenger, but “unfortunately” you suck//
/\ Nice opener

Says he from "HV" the willow, he just remembers a small room//
But it’s really a "H.airy V.agina", it’s this niggas mom’s womb//
/\ lol nice punch

Yo kid when this battles ova, everyone will chant for me//
Cuz ya gotta realize I’m like a soft dick, I can’t be beat//
/\ kinda a self diss mixed wit a self glory didnt feel

So do like ya said, and take yo ass to myrtle beach//
Cuz whether you post or not you’ll still suffer defeat//
/\ ok not special though

I’m done “Roc-in this Fella”, I think my job here is done//
Post ya verse if ya want but ya chances of winnin are 99 to 1
/\ Nice closer


He posted up on the corner with his mom and wife
saying man ill give u head if you just spare my life
/\ Nice opener

this ill tempa aint showing hes more like a baby crying
you say theres hard streets in florida you know you lieing
/\ lol nice again

life is easy when your mothers paying the bills
ill tempa taking on unfortunate are you foreal
/\ not feeling

real g's are on the street husling around the block
but u a fagget in the house playing with your cock
/\ blah not feelin

he blacker then burnt chicken, wacker then vanilla ice
most of your shit prewritten, let me give you some advice
/\ ok diss but kinda weak

everytime someone battles unfortunate you know its curtains
you from florida dont you think you should be out somewere surfain
/\ weak closer

V/Ill Tempa Unfortunate u had a nice beggining but dawg u fell off half way it let you down

RTF on my sig plz.................................

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Someone vote and close this bullshit!!!

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Tempa- Killin tha punches your closure was HOTT i like that you came strong in this battle you had a couple of good personals in your verse too "unfortunately you suck" hahaha

Unfortunate- opener wasnt all that great your 2nd line was iight but i wasnt feelin it your verse was iight but definatly not your best if u wouldve tied in more punches you couldve taken this on

vote- Tempa