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Hoops Vs. Miss Lyricist
10 lines max
no biting,feeding,recycling or cheating (rhymes hehe) no bs votes (covers all bad votes) 100 posts to vote.. House rules Checking in and droppin now |
miss so ugly, she spreads frowns like diseased needles.. she blinded to talent,eyes chinked like vietnamese-people.. she couldnt soar above par, if i knocked her ass inta-orbit.. only time she come ahead of me, is signing onto the forum.. chicks wit dicks,not hot tho,ugly but thicks her motto.. if she walked into a club naked, shed die a shot hoe..(lmao) you couldnt come number one, if no other numbers existed.. you couldnt be xplicit, if on Eminems cd you were printed.. 4 battles won, but still yet no ones heard of you.. even if you were laying down, you'd get murked vertical.. |
Checkin in... GL
This bitch is similar to a T-Rex- they both lifeless I’ma knock this one outta the park, caus once I pop you just can’t stop this I’m not the one to play caus without me, there’s no you I mean, c’mon, who else would bother wit this stupid ass fool? I’ll spit at you in a different language, you faglike mamasita No habla enspaniol? But you can’t understand English either! You don’t know shit bout me, but I know somethin bout you Is that doll you play with really an action figure too? I guess that’s all the “action” you be getting these fuckin days You like games motherfucker? Check it, cus you’ve been play’d |
Fuck the first line supposed to read: "What's the difference between this bitch and and T-Rex- nothin they both lifeless"
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132717
yes thanx and ill vote on this you have my promise.. thanx and.. pz. |
Miss lyricist won this right here. She came with good punches, and the last four lines sealed the win. Hoops had a good flow too. But some of his lines didnt rhyme that good.
vote - Miss lyricist vote on mine pleeease...the link is in the signature. |
lol... this is why i like to have the 100 posts thing... if you spit the verse out loud, the right way its rhymes pretty good..Influcuations of the voice is what makes em rhyme =)... but i appreciate your feedback.. UPPIN
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Shit hoops you have some decent lines which realy impressed me but some were EH! "only time she come ahead of me, is signing onto the forum.." that was cleverly used..
Miss L.. you also had decent punches in there but most were forced out so ended up eh! but the decent lines shows you have massive potential.. "I’ll spit at you in a different language, you faglike mamasita No habla enspaniol? But you can’t understand English either!" Clever.. pz. vote hoops.. pz. |
That's alright, folk. I appreciate it Rascal, but I'm kinda hopin that Hoops will win this time. Then the score will be even, and we'll have to have a show down to settle this for good. ;)
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I can't even vote on this one... whoever win this tho, betta holla at me fa sho... i'm bored as hell i wanna battle later... I like that fact that Miss Lyricist speak a lil' espanol... don't try to fool me i'm all over that shit... chao, Hoops y Miss Lyricist gustaria verlo hecho... hit my slang folks....
Get At Me i'm out ~wun~ oh yeah, good luck... both y'all |
Después de esta batalla se cierra, ma. aight UPPIN!
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After this battle close, aight, nikka winner get at me...otras puntas callate por favor,
i'm out... holla y'all i quit... i'm gone... lol |
Ah, brah... Now you got me all dissapointed and shit. Oh well.
And it's "After this battle it is closed." |
Usted piensa que usted es caliente..Pero usted no es... Gotta give it to you though, you know how to work a translater. lmao
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Miss. Lyricist killed it...
a lot of hoops liyrics were played and I wasn't feeling at all.. Especially his last line, that didn't make sense.. His punches were too easy to come up with while Miss. Lyricist went for his head.. She came out from he very beginning throwing punches until she knocked him out... V/Miss. Lyricist |
damn, there goes that 100 posts shit... I'll be back to vote later..
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hmm.. i actually thought hoops took this one.. miss' rhymes sounded really forced.. you probly dont get me, but even though you didnt fall off it just didnt flow well for some reason.. nice punches though
hoops' flow was more off the tongue, he had more syllables in his rhymes... and his punches hit a little harder i thought... if you actually look at em he had some orright wordplay, and his last line *did* make sense....................... v/ hoops |
gurl... damn u gotz mad flow... i cant vote cuz im new, n i dont have alot of post( i dont like wastn my time on sum of dez ppl) u need sum one ta get on yo level gurl..
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Thanks for the props. More votes would be appreciated.
I don't understand why the fuck you made it 100 posts, Hoops... |
Im just wonderin how many times I gotta call out and PM Miss. Lyricist before she will actually battle me. :huh:
Dont have 100 posts yet....almost lol or I would vote on this. |
cause, people whove been here a while, give better votes, na mean ? some dude who just signed up, who knows nothing about rap battling, would give a vote for a line like this "i fucked ur mother (ooooooo)".. hehe.. not sayign ur lines are liek that,cause i give you mad props, that spanish line was goooood....... but vets and others give more intelligent votes, and reasons that explain it, rather than noob votes.. thats all hehe.. it takes a while longer, for the battle to end, but its better in the long run... lol no offence, but lil soulja, you act as if her verse is stompin on mine lol... miss, its dick ryding from noobs like that i dont want voting =/.. they just vote for peeps they like or respect more... and not look at verse construction, metaphores, multies, punches, structure... yea <--- those reasons...
UPPIN PS: why you gotta put me on blast about that translator mah, hater :p lol :) |
Okay, I understand. Yah verse was tight too, but whatever.
lol, so you did use the translator? QB, you'll get yours when you get yours. lol |
lol whut?! too hot, me? lol
how up, lol... fuck that elementary bullshit one year spanish shit... if ya don't know street spanish then give it up... It means the same thing don't get caught up takin' the shit word fa word... you won't get far... I never said i'm that damn hott, but don't be a victim cuz ya ass will get blazed... you don't wanna switch language barriers... you will get fuck up in a spanish battle i see that y'all juntos pero no revueltos... Mas sabe el diablo por viejo que por diablo... No me dejes con los ruleros puestos... That's directed to whoever said "Se cree la muy muy"... Okay, get ya translators out now fa that shit...
Don't Fuck wit' me... Close this up, and do y'all Finale and get at me afterwards. Oh yeah, when y'all finally give up, i'll tell ya whut it means... puta..... Miss L. taken ya words i am NOT damn hott, beeotch but don't get twerked... Get At Me MFG uppin' this shit fa both anybody tryna get at me DON'T ~wun~ uppin' uppin' blah lol |
hey y'all, damn i take that shit back i ain't tryna piss ever'body off and everythin'... but i hope y'all both do good on this one...
lo siento, whoever got offended... ~wun~ |
upp up and awayyyyy... lets get some more votes.. =).. leave links and we will return the look at your battles.. we appreciate it
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uppin
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Like I said before, Hoops really didn't come hard to me.. Miss Lyricist came out and went for his head.. she insulted him and belittled him more than he did to her....
She started off harder than Hoops and everything and hoops' verse was just okay.. V/Miss Lyricist |
Awe, they're cheating, they won't let me vote...
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lol at Miss... I was directing my "you think you hot" at Hoops. I don't wanna start no shit, but if you call me a bitch again, I'm gonna have to show you what a true bitch is. Fa real.
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you must didn't read the rest of that lol... u know whut, wuteva... Miss Lyricist like i said lo siento to those i offended, i'm not gonna go there, plz don't get me started... i been fuckin' cleared that up, so whuteva... just calm down cuz u don't want me heated... drop the offense... Good luck,
~wun~ MFG |
uppin on this battle.. dont sleep..leave links and we wil hit em up
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Who said I got worked up? You were the one tryin to cuss me out.
That's right, whatever. You just learn to comprehend English shit, alright? Because you can't seem to get yah facts straight. I'm starting to regret my nomination for you as a good femcee. You have a bad attitude problem, and take out yo shit on the wrong folks. Specifically, me. |
first off English is my first language second, i tried to correct a mistake... calm down... i ain't finna kiss ass but i openly admitted my fuckin' bad, shit... Who got the attitude right now, not me... i'm just relaxin', i already said lets rest it, but now u trippin'... No beef no problem, let it go... one mo' time: my fuckin' bad damn... i'm in a good ass mood today and i ain't finna go there... drop it...
MFG |
<-- ups for more votes.. Leave links and we will hit them up..
votevotevotevotevotevotevotevotevote :).. much appreaciated |
Miss, you're getting on my nerves. Your bad- I get it, you get it out of yah head that you can keep posting here. :)
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dont sleep ya'll... vote and leave links.......
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Uppin.. This is taking for fucking ever.
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lmao i know!.. coem on guys.. voting isnt going to kill you, and if it does, well to bad.. IF YOU LEAVE LINKS, then we will return the looks at your battle.. the only way to get votes is to vote in peoples battles and leave links.. im bout to go take looks at the UPPED battles right now....Much appreciated
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Uppin...
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i cant vote just wanted to say nice battle miss won it
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