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Young Dez vs *The~Star*
10 lines No strecthing No D/R No crew No Biting YD spiting first Good Luck Let's get started |
yo star don't play around wit me cuz i got guns dat pop like pringles/
it will make u lean back like Fat Joe's single battling me u must be insane I'll snatch away yo life like 50 snatched ja rule's chain u broke and I hold grands like da Rubba Band man but nobody know dis cat like da rest of da D12 band on the mic I 'll dismantle dis man like P.Diddy did Da Band and da gun will put u to an early sleep like its da Sandman I don't even wanna battle dis chump he gay he the type of guy who rolls around wit high heels and pumps I'll kill u and battling u tipsy cuz u fuckin wit Young Dez da Prince of da City |
aight Star yo turn spit yo shit ..................
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Started nice,but it ended crappy.Let’s go……..
Non-talented, couldn’t think of ya own, your whole spit is based on celebrity names Non-creative, can’t be original you’ll never have fame in the battling game Should get protection for your chest, cuz you wouldn’t wanna get popped But the way these words are hitting you, you just automatically drop The words that you write compare to wind, they just blow by My words stick in ya head cuz my flow smooth, straight leave ya mouth dry Could never stop dropping these rhymes, that's why I'm on top of tha grind Unlike you, you suck, you wouldn’t succeed if ya talent was working in the coal mind Scientist drill holes to get to the earth’s core I’m doing what they doing to ya brain, leaving you eternally lyrically sore I got this.Hit more categories than he did.Matter-of-fact I hit all,unlike ol' dude. Let Tha Votes Begin |
Damn can we get some votes?
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Young Dez i liked your verse and the use of all the celeb references but it seemed you were more focused on that then attackin' The Star. Even though i really liked you Fat Joe line the pringles part was sorta play'd but still fit, My opinion is that you just didn't come at Star like she came at you, only becuase star came directly at you. The Lack Of Personals was disappointing for sure. Stars last line i thought closed strong. Stars verse had the structure set up, Dez you stopped makin line markers after the first line i don't know why.
Keep it live both of ya'll... Vote STAR The Star I thought you verse was good a bit weaker then you past battles, though definately. |
My Fault didn't know you'll had a poll vote requirement of 100.
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^Thanks 4 checking it out anyway.I'll hit ya battle up.
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good shit first lady ma...........thats how you rep........
you came at ol dude wit some fire.......... cant vote cause we in the same crew.......but jus giving you your props |
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yo...i'm goin fo star kuz everythin wuz betta...aight battle but star beat u in every categorie but not by much...but still ur beat
vote=Star |
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Ahh man the star you won and the reason is ya rhyme was creative flowed better and the punches werent on the elementry basis like when you said The words that you write compare to wind, they just blow by
My words stick in ya head cuz my flow smooth, straight leave ya mouth dry that won it so my vote goes to the star |
Young Dez vs *The~Star*
WARNING: This vote is not a reflection of how good you are
...but a reflection of how good you were to the other battle Young Dez- ok opener... 1st line a little stretched compared to 2nd... 5/10 Quote:
a little more w/p and this bar would have been ok... 4/10 Quote:
a little personal... needs better structure... 4/10 Quote:
not really doin anything to him... bad punch... 3/10 Quote:
2nd line a little stretched compared to 1st startin to slack off in punch... 3/10 Quote:
ok closer but stretched 2nd... 4/10 Quote:
*The-Star*- some ok vocab and w/p good opener... 7/10 Quote:
ok r/s alrite flow ... 6/10 Quote:
good r/s good flow a bit of punch...7/10 Quote:
ok punch needed better w/p on the 2nd... 6/10 Quote:
good closer closer 2nd a little stretched... 6/10 Quote:
overall- The-Star had a better structure...eg word/play and rhyme/scheme ...the punchlines were ok too vote- The-Star peace... |
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star won this with better punches and a good flow..young dez ur flow was off and ur punches didnt hit hard, some of ur lines were too short and some stretched..no hate
v/the star return the favor wit honest votes on the battle in my sig |
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