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For$akeN 07-01-04 11:25 PM

etcetera .vs. G-BaLLZ
 

rules are:

3 bars only (6 lines peeps)
no hate/crew votes
no d/r of course
no biting
no unexplained votes
30 mins to drop can be 10 mins late dont care.......
no one spits first just go before the time limit is ova

*Check*

etcetera 07-01-04 11:26 PM

*check in*

For$akeN 07-01-04 11:37 PM

I know why you called etcetera because your whackness goes on forever~
you couldn't take control of this battle if your hand was on a lever~
ha called me a punk in a battle thread but I didn't battle you cuz I ain't harm herbs~
and because you is one you tried to cure me of sickness but I retaliate with verbs~
all you can do is "blow" shit like the wind but you ain't close to blowing me away~
bitch you couldn't burn me if you were already in the sun goddamn suns ray~

etcetera 07-01-04 11:38 PM

all i do is spit flows, sniff coke, rip flows
you a bitch so all you do is spit slow

yo you aint a thug you dont even heat is
what you competin with? i spit and make concrete give

you sound like a virgin to rb for the first time
cuz the dopest lyrics you ever kicked was my worst line

For$akeN 07-01-04 11:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by G-Ballz
I know why you called etcetera because your whackness goes on forever~
you couldn't take control of this battle if your hand was on a lever~
ha called me a punk in a battle thread but I didn't battle you cuz I ain't harm herbs~
and because you is one you tried to cure me of sickness but I retaliate with verbs~
all you can do is "blow" shit like the wind but you ain't close to blowing me away~
bitch you couldn't burn me if you were already in the sun goddamn suns ray~


herbs can cure sickness........

he called me a punk and made a thread that I didn't agree on here:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129560

thats all forgot to put that shit there sorry...

etcetera 07-01-04 11:44 PM

are you gonna cry about it?

For$akeN 07-01-04 11:45 PM

no just explaining my drop with that link and shit ya know!

etcetera 07-01-04 11:47 PM

aight i feel you im still gonna win though and im not uppin for votes im just nice like that

Ca'lam 07-02-04 08:03 PM

^lol at ecetra.. sry G for freeposting lol.......... he funny about that he gonna win with that verse :O..






UPPIN THIS

Biggie_XL 07-02-04 08:19 PM

G Balls that was some nice shit my vote goes to you you had good punches and i nice style. and electra you id ok

Biggie_XL 07-02-04 08:23 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Biggie_XL
G Balls that was some nice shit my vote goes to you you had good punches and i nice style. and electra you id ok



:laugh2: sorry about my spelling i was typing fast



G-Ballz that was some nice shit my vote goes to you, you had good punches and i nice style. and electra you did ok

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

For$akeN 07-02-04 08:53 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hoops
^lol at ecetra.. sry G for freeposting lol.......... he funny about that he gonna win with that verse :O..






UPPIN THIS


word homey I even gave him a chance cuz I was checkin' out his
other drops & shit ya know??????

and thanks for the vote Biggie XL much appreciation fam....

uppin' this shit!

Yehti 07-02-04 09:19 PM

-Gballz.
I know why you called etcetera because your whackness goes on forever~
you couldn't take control of this battle if your hand was on a lever~
flows average, switch the lines around, cause the top punch was a decent personal
ha called me a punk in a battle thread but I didn't battle you cuz I ain't harm herbs~
and because you is one you tried to cure me of sickness but I retaliate with verbs~
average flow, weak punch
all you can do is "blow" shit like the wind but you ain't close to blowing me away~
bitch you couldn't burn me if you were already in the sun goddamn suns ray~
aight wordplay, average flow, weak punch


-Etcetera.
all i do is spit flows, sniff coke, rip flows
you a bitch so all you do is spit slow
liked the multis, flow, no punchline though
yo you aint a thug you dont even heat is
what you competin with? i spit and make concrete give
liked the multis, coo flow, bad wordplay make the punch weak
you sound like a virgin to rb for the first time
cuz the dopest lyrics you ever kicked was my worst line
liked the flow and multis, the punch is played out though


Overall, G got this. He had the strongest line and the better verse overall. Et had the flow. G, work on your creativity a little. You had a decent personal in ya verse. Work on a more complex flow aswell. You're doin' aight. Et, work on your wittiness and creativity, since you already got the flow down.

Vote - Gballz.

For$akeN 07-03-04 12:32 AM

uppin.....leave links if ya want peeps I'll get back to it!!!!!!!!!!!!

verbal violence 07-03-04 12:35 AM

sight g u got this wit da ballz lol et u came with out nuttin lmao(get it)
g dawg u had da punches and flow with tha structure good job
v/g
return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131634

For$akeN 07-03-04 01:03 PM

uppin.....peeps dont sleep on dis shit aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

For$akeN 07-03-04 09:06 PM

uppin this battle leave links peeps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FLooZe 07-03-04 10:48 PM

gballz won this shit i think cause he was way hotter all around with his opener:
I know why you called etcetera because your whackness goes on forever~
you couldn't take control of this battle if your hand was on a lever~

i think he woulda won if he only spat that line.

etcetera you need to work on everything all around pretty much.no hate there just a comment

TAKENOTICE 07-03-04 11:04 PM

I know why you called etcetera because your whackness goes on forever~
you this was my fav line in your verse g cuz i'm big on personals.

you sound like a virgin to rb for the first time
cuz the dopest lyrics you ever kicked was my worst line
this was the my fav line in ect. verse

both verse were alright G def. came harder then ect.
punches were weak mostly for both some parts strectched but gballz verse just hit harder and he attempted with the personals.

so i gotta Vote G

For$akeN 07-04-04 12:08 AM

ok thanks for the votes peeps.....uppin for the final one leave a link also!

For$akeN 07-04-04 02:41 PM

uppin my bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Know-Gimix 07-04-04 03:11 PM

this was a cool battle... I love short ones-- quick to the point--- iight heres my breakdown


Opener- etcetera flowed really well but the punch was a little weaker than G-Ballz, I really felt the way he worded his first bar.
Flow- (multies, readability)- I think etcetera had more flow in his verse, a whole bunch of multis- it rhymed nicely
Punchlines - I liked both of you, but neither of you came to sick with the punches, I'd have to say you were both kind of even, you each had a couple strong lines and you each had a couple weak ones... I think the strongest punch in the battle goes to G-Ballz opener though.

I think this was kinda close, and if it had to go on just rhymability I'd give it to etcetera, but I think G-Ballz had stronger content in the beggining of his verse so vote G-Ballz.... please hit this up -- http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453


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