vote 4 dis !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

iigh i'll go 1st

wtf...drop sum rules......NO DR..NO CREW..NO BITIN..NO HATE VOTE....damn...

ummm..how many lines do we gotta drop? damn...this guy aint set nuttin...

iigh ni99a i did tell u in bitch slap but its gonna be 4-6 lines

im 1st

iiight go nikka...drop ya shit already is been like half an hour already..

time 2 killz
 

now nigga what da fuck is up wit da arron carter shit?
damn nigga act all hard but u actually a lil bitch!

hell naw nigga hate dick riders but last night a dick went inside him!
run bitch run im comin 2 kill dis gay bitch boys wit boys make me sick

dats y he mad dat ima vote 4 goerge bush someday
fuck orijinal dis is what he wuz doin yesterday :hump:

u up ni99a

Dude aint settin no shit, he's got ‘newbie’ branded on his forehead/
Or maybe he’s not a newbie, probably he’s one of those ‘Special Eds’/

Ten hours later, you see a reply, I thought I was gettin’ cock-eyed/
Worst verse I’ve ever seen, Jadakiss was even askin ‘Why Shy?’/

So let me rest my case, and let you peak this battle out/
'Cuz if you really think he betta than me, you a suspect of a Dickridin' scout/

upppin this mann...i wanna get this battle ova wit..drop a link n ill get back at you...1

upppin upppin upppin upppin vottes vottes votes votes...ill return the favor juss drop a link

uppin uppin uppin..damn.. ineed sum votes...damn...

This battle was whack, orijinal took it cuz... shytown you came whack this time..
orijinal wasn't that tight either but he won because he had some humor in his verse..
V/orijinal

uppin this battle. Uppin, uppin, uppin. Drop a link and I'll hit yours up. Vote honestly & professionally.

Shytown came out pretty weak in this, the punches werent hittin. The structure and flow was good though, but this is a battle and its not a poetry reading. Shytown yoy gotta open and close hard, if you can catch peoples attention from the start then you got a better chance of getting their vote. Also end hard, it helps to crush their pride.

Orijinal: nice verse, you had good personals, the flow was pretty syck and structure made it easy to read. You came out of the box hard and finished him off right away. Good battle

Uppin, uppin, uppin, uppin, uppin. uppin just once more. UPPIN. Vote honestly & Professionally, drop a link and I'll get back at U, 1.

Uppin it big..uppin..uppin..uppin..uppin..uppin..uppin.

Uppin big, uppin, uppin, uppin, uppin, uppin, uppin, once more UPPIN. We'll return the favor if you drop a link.

Uppin, Uppin,Uppin,Uppin,Uppin,Uppin,Uppin,Uppin,Uppin,

aight this battle was way too short to crit properly but i guess Shytowns was weak gerneally, i mean he was tryin to go at him all hard an shit but nothin landed properly, there were no punches or real personals it was kinda poor.

Orijinals verse was mediocre tho, i mean you could tell it was more relaxed an so it flowed better and had a couple of punches in there so that's all it needed really.

vote:Orijinal

Uppin, Uppin, Uppin, Uppin, Uppin, Uppin, Uppin, Uppin, Uppin, Uppin..

Uppin, Uppin, Uppinuppin, Uppin, Uppinuppin, Uppin, Uppinuppin, Uppin, Uppinuppin, Uppin, Uppinuppin, Uppin, Uppinuppin, Uppin, Uppin

dayum lmfao

orijinal: you had nice shit..that jada line was doep fam
your structure was aiight
your flor was pretty good
your meta's....were ok
your punches weere hittin hard
your personals were hittin hard

shy: ur shit was..ok..i guess
i wasnt feelin ur punches too much
and ur personals were pretty wack
ur flow was ok
ur structure was bad

vote:orij

rtf and drop an honest vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133281