Bodo Bunce Vs. Datruth29
 

ok.. 10 lines..
due in 30 min.
no feeding off.
no bullshit or crew votes..
ok, check in, and let's go

i was writin when i was waitin on you to set it...so here it is

You got toubles with me? Well tell me so I can solve ‘em
Nigga your throat is ‘questionable’, and I’ll be solvin the problem
Being around me is dangerous, nigga im claimin
That you’ll never be safe, like fat kids runnin bases
Homos who hate this, will get a broken jaw
Cuz you stayed up all night, just to stick your dick in the crack of dawn
When it comes to this rap thing, your just a lost cause
You guns clap? Well mine to, and im about to give you ‘a round of applause’
your not hot, your wackness keeps on doublin
Cuz your just ‘fucking stupid’, like jessica simpson’s husband

What was that, at that rate you never will Sell Records/
Bonce couldn't "drop no hot shit" if he lived eating on Bell Peppers/
I got more bars than jail cellars, and you really ain't about shit/
I read your last flow, you're more worn out than yo outfit/
I doubt this man can beat me, I turn the heat up like an arsonist/
I wanna urinate on him so bad that my dick's clogged, n it's hard ta piss/
I'm fin to hit you with some shit that'll rip you without pistols/
you talk bout guns but the only time you held lead, was a pencil/
I carry stripes like Zebra's and I thought that I should jus teach ya/
you win? i'll be pissed....
coz yo stucture's more off than the leaning Twoer of Pizza.......

I meant the leaning "TOWER OF PIZZA" last line....

lol...you said no feeding off...but i will ignore it

it's all good...........

uppin,...

Once again I can't vote yet but everyone needs crits sometimes:

BodoBounce: Nice verse, the first I've read from you and I automatically figured you'd beat Datruth cos I've read a mediocre verse from him in another thread. It was all pretty simple, not many multi's and a simple rhyme scheme but the funny punches made me laugh so it's all good - fav. line was:
"Being around me is dangerous, nigga im claimin
That you’ll never be safe, like fat kids runnin bases"
But that "crack of dawn" line is WAY overplayed.

DaTruth: I figured Bodo had got you on this battle but you opened up pretty strong, the "more worn that your outfit" line was overplayed but it's still funny as hell so it's all good. You fell of half way through with the "hard to piss" line cos that didn't really mean much, it was just kidna filler but the ending was strong too.

If I could vote, it would be for DaTruth but only marginally.

Peeze.

upping again ya'll, vote, i'll return tha favor

ok... any more votes?

This was a tite battle. Bounce had some tite lines like the fat kids and bases one. Truth came back with some lines like the hot shit one. But bounce had that one line with the round of applause and the jessica simpsons husband one too. The battle was close...but I think Bounce took it.

Vote - Bounce

Ok I felt this battle shit I was biting my teeth.Bunce killed it with the Cuz you stayed up all night, just to stick your dick in the crack of dawn line but truth had the Bonce couldn't "drop no hot shit" if he lived eating on Bell Peppers but I gotta say bunce had that one line That you’ll never be safe, like fat kids runnin bases and that won him this.Vote goes for Bodo Bunce

Uppin

da truth got this one barley had had some punches that hit pretty weak but landed
bodo dawg that was aight to but not very hard hitting punches well none to say(no hate)
v/truth
return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131634

lol @ lyrical flows or w/e sayin "when it comes to this rap thing your just a lost cause" was a bad punch....it was the set up homie, not a punch

uppi

This battle was pretty tight I was feelin both of the verses.

You got toubles with me? Well tell me so I can solve ‘em
Nigga your throat is ‘questionable’, and I’ll be solvin the problem
This was a weak opener.....2/10
Being around me is dangerous, nigga im claimin
That you’ll never be safe, like fat kids runnin bases
I think ive heard this before but its tight 5/10
Homos who hate this, will get a broken jaw
Cuz you stayed up all night, just to stick your dick in the crack of dawn
I kinda of understand this, but its not that hard... 3/10
When it comes to this rap thing, your just a lost cause
You guns clap? Well mine to, and im about to give you ‘a round of applause’
This was your best punch I liked this 6/10
your not hot, your wackness keeps on doublin
Cuz your just ‘fucking stupid’, like jessica simpson’s husband
Jessicas husband is stupid??? 1/10

17/50

What was that, at that rate you never will Sell Records/
Bonce couldn't "drop no hot shit" if he lived eating on Bell Peppers/
not the best opener, but good 2nd line meta 4/10
I got more bars than jail cellars, and you really ain't about shit/
I read your last flow, you're more worn out than yo outfit/
jails have cellars? 3/10
I doubt this man can beat me, I turn the heat up like an arsonist/
I wanna urinate on him so bad that my dick's clogged, n it's hard ta piss/
you turned the heat up, but you wana piss on him? 5/10
I'm fin to hit you with some shit that'll rip you without pistols/
you talk bout guns but the only time you held lead, was a pencil/
Was a lil feeding here i wasnt feelin it much 2/10
I carry stripes like Zebra's and I thought that I should jus teach ya/
you win? i'll be pissed....
coz yo stucture's more off than the leaning Twoer of Pizza.......
not a good closer..but good meta 4/10

18/50

v/datruth

sayin someone is fucking stupid...jessica simpson husband fucks her, shes stupid...so hes fucking stupid...

if you woulda understood that i would've got the vote...thats gay

Naw, I Doubt That You Would Of Still Got The Vote Though.....

he did the 17/50

you got 18/50

he gave me 1 for that cuz he didnt understand it..

it would have AT LEAST been a 3

which adds up to 19/50

uppin this...

gosh, i hate this 50 characters thing

upping again

Structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Personals: Truth
Punches: Tie
Openor: The truth
Closer: Da truth
Vote: Truth

Upping

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uppin for votes...............................

uppin

Weak battle, but truth takes it barely, just cuz bodo had some gay ass lines...

Bodo- Your opener was gay and didn't made sense, which took away from your verse. You had some weak, played punches that didn't hit. You didn't really have any personals, and your closer was gay. The only good thing you did was your struc, but everything else sucked. Wack verse.

Datruth- Your verse also was pretty bad. Your first four lines were pretty good, but then it fell off from there, rapidly. You had some punches that missed completely, and you also didn't really have any personals. Your wordplay and flow was better, and your struc was aight, so you get my vote. Elevate tho.