(FT)e-dubz vs. hoops(HC)
 

iight crew battle
10 lines..no hate, crew or d/r, no feedin
due by midnight tonite..any later and its a dq
goodluck fam, check in and spit whenever

fuck it imma drop now, i dont need all day...here it goes

Ayo.....i'll flex-this-beef, he could rest-fo-weeks and still not be next-to-me
im the best-for-eats, E will make yo ‘taste defeat’ like its yo moms new ‘recipe’
i'll stress-da-streets bringin black-slang to rap-fame, strikin like back-pains
as i strap-change to yo arm...... just as tight as money in crack-games
my words must be to complex, i come at you wit more multis than a dissociate*
i almost feel bad killin this kid, droppin more dope lines than appropriate
leave thoughts on da rest, that wont go away like aggressive sex
usually call me ‘out of dis world’....... how i send extra-ta-rest
run 3 in yo lady, ‘take yo top off’ like a ‘convertible mercedes’
hoops cant stand wit E, like lil ‘Bogues’ up wit ‘Grady’(McGrady)

*someone that is a dissociate has multiple personalities

E who?? no thanks i dont fuck wit drugs.....

kid couldnt fly with "flocks", if he fell off a bulding with chickens..
me getting hit with glocks, only chance against me he got to win-this..

respect my field,stabbin you with anthrax cant "inject" you ill..
since you givin birth to wack lines,heres contraceptive pills..
intellectual? na you not smart, you bout as complex as a cock..
this nigga so dumb, he had a battle with his shadow and lost..
momma fixed his wounds with thread,so now his battles embrossed..
leave him in my room with "plaques",left him him strangled with-floss..

they say opposites attract, guess thats why i was matched with you..
puttin metal in ya back, wouldnt make 10 men and magnets attract to-you..

aight uppin on our battle.. nice drop..
(10 men = tin men... wizard of oz)



UPPIN

nice spit hoops..uppin

uppin again...dont sleep

good spit both youz.........
Punches-Hoops
Personals-pretty non-existant....Hoops had the E-drug line but it wasnt part of his verse....so tie
Multi's-E
Opener-Tie
Closer-Hoops
Creativity-Both good....but Hoops

Overall-Hoops.....tight battle...pretty close in my mind

can you hit up some of my battles when ya got time...i'd appriciate it:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132724
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132597
and my new battle vs. Body Count

thanx homies.....p

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uppin dis again

uppin..leave links and we will return da favor

Punches-Hoops
Personals-E
Multi's-E
Opener-tie
Closer-tie
Creativity-E

v/E for better over all verse

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^tad bit unexplained, but still uppin for more votes... 1-1

edubz killed it.....

better multies..
better punches...
better flow...
better stucture.....

I was feeling his verse more, he showedmore effort in the spit, and i was diggin it more....

vote/edubz

lol datruth, nice explination there.. and nice hate vote lol.. i forget, when did i vote against you? ever since then, no matter what battle it is, you vote against me lol... its all good tho, cause i blacklisted you a while back, and i think you horus the truth, who was banned for biting ne way.. people posted you were the same person, IP's matched i think.. but ne wayz, ^the fuck outa here....nice sway also lol....

aight UPPIN some other honest votes..

uppin, vote in thiz crew battle everybody. stop sleepn

E: nice off tha dome spit man, ur flow was good, structure was decent too, had some good punches also, towards the end,but didnt come quite as hard as hoops,
Hoops: ur opener was dope,caught my attention and kept me involved, ur flow was hot, but what did it for u was ur wordplay,every line was a twist against ur opponent which made u have more creativity......VOTE:Hoops

ok this was a good battle hoops you had a good struture, i liked your punches and your lines were funny

e-dubz you were good to i just didnt like the beggining of it hoops won the beginning but you started taking over toward the end so you got my vote

vote=e-dubz

2-2.. damn yo, neck and neck.............im lovin it











UPPIN MORE VOTES... only 3 more votes needed... lets get this battle over with

close battle..keep da votes comin, leave links we will return da favor

yea..uppin this ish.. leave links and we will hit up your battles

aight this was a pretty tight battle... both of yall came hard at eachother.. imma go with hoops on dis one because he had better punches and personals and a better structure/ rhyme shceme.. i loved this line:

respect my field,stabbin you with anthrax cant "inject" you ill..
since you givin birth to wack lines,heres contraceptive pills..

that line was sick dawg... nice drop... no hate to E but this was hoops battle dawg.. good battle for both of you...

VOTE- HOOPS

votes needed below

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131984

yo edubz: i see you tried to use some good multi's but half didnt make sense or they didnt hit hard...The best-for-eats..please tell me what that means....
structure was bad... 5/10
your flow was sick though 8/10
your punches werent hittin as hard 5.5/10
your personals were hittin though 7/10
the meta's werent good but u tried 6/10

Hoops: heres a tip..when you spit dont space your lines..it looks ugly
your structure wasnt thatgood but better then his 6.5/10
your punches were hittin harder then his 8/10
your personals were pretty good aswell 8/10
seen couple meta's the flock of chickens was aiight nothin too good 6.5/10
your flow was good 6/10

vote: hoops

keep elevatin kids

uppin..

stop sleepin..lets get honest votes in here

uppin this battle.. drop a vote, and leave a link to one of your battles.. we will hit em back up... get at us

uppin this ish...leave links

e: the thing that lost you your battle was.... FORCED MULTIS... im not dissin you or anything, take this from an mc whos verses are multi-oriented.. and flow that doesnt punch doesnt impress me... dont use em if your vocab isnt good enough to pack punches in there.. cos seriously man.. the few punches you did have were pretty weak.. decent self-glory lines but they dont win battles.. some nice wordplay though..

hoops' flow, although a little more basic, allowed him to get hard punches in.. he didnt self-glorify as much... and when he did it was part of a punch. so id say hoops took it....

v/ hoops

one.

return the favour?? my sig??

i'll take a look at one of those battles in your sig, an drop an honest one.. aight, im uppin for the win, one more vote... aight UP

uppin for the win ya'll.. lets close this battle.. leave links

uppin dis for my boi hoops........................

Nice battle...ups to both of you.

E-Dubz, I was feelin all the multis that you had in there, they really made your flow a lot better. The structure wasnt too bad there was one line in there that was a lil streched. Wasnt really feelin the punches, you had some tight lines, but they didnt seem like they connected with him. You did close the battle pretty tight though, if all the punchlines were like that it woulda been better.

Hoops you had a nice line to open the battle, lol flying with chickens. Your punches were pretty consistent all the way thru, nothing was really spectacular, the one like about him battling his shadow and losing was funny though. You aint really use many multis, he beat you up there. Your flow was pretty straight though, most of your battles are usually easy to read. The closer I wasnt really feelin, maybe I just didnt get it I dunno.

Hoops threw punches consistently throughout his battle, more so than e-dubz did.

v/hoops