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Fixed: Poison (I.I) Vs. Mad Dog (D2R)
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Mad Dog's Verse:
(Verse) I got ill intentionz on my mind time 2 make fools out these guys its intended/ I.I aka these dicks demented beaten w/lil hammers now they heads dented/ Ur attitude stinks boi u like 14 deserved to get spanked who the hell are you?/ This cat thinks he's amazing at rappin...yet he's losin to hoops/ And whats wit ur fav word playboi this aint Hugh Hefners sex pad/ Playgirls that way -> go find urself a man to get ur shit jacked/ U talk about it a lot...askin personal questions not always a safe bet/ Braggin about him losin his virginity but i doubt he's had sex yet/ Intentionz aint as good as DARK KNIGHTS all they got was bad times/ Come to mention ur destined to see WHITE LIGHT this is ur R.I.P rhyme/ Like TonySelf said this is a this is a dangerous crew/ But we never complimented...dangerous HA YOU???/ U bitches is like pin pricks...u dont hurt at all/ U fight like you live backwards...u walk then crawl/ So i guess this is the last bar heres a word of warning/ Dont look at the poll results...coz zero's watch u'll be scoring/ Dun watch u know about it! Poison's Verse: Who let this dirty mut off tha leash to roam tha streets... fuck animal control poison puttin this mad dog to sleep... u aint even a contenda, so how u suppose to compete... u jus a beginna, an ya brain will neva be close to complete... otha peoples flows get sucked up by u, like blood to a leech... puppy ya got mo wack shit, than there is sand on a beach... kid ya weak, im bout to add a loss to ya losin streak... ya kiddin me, u not gon win, stop amusin me... im abusin u, like a girl wit low-self esteem, dawg im usin u... only fa practice fool, an id be damed if i lose to you... i dunno who hyped you up but chu not shit... thats jus a common cold homie you not sick... tha only way u coulda been tight is if u were a virgin chic... but chu not, so u stink mo than birds an shit... ya late, erything u write i already heard of it... ya fake, u jus take tha lyrics an re-word it a bit... an i aint gay dawg, so don get tha shit twisted... jus ask ya moms, cuz she love doin them freaky positions... man u need to get cha head right, u da one wit bad times... you rappin on a website, bitch u aint destined to rhyme... Its ova playboi. |
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(Verse) I got ill intentionz on my mind time 2 make fools out these guys its intended/ I.I aka these dicks demented beaten w/lil hammers now they heads dented/ Ur attitude stinks boi u like 14 deserved to get spanked who the hell are you?/ This cat thinks he's amazing at rappin...yet he's losin to hoops/ And whats wit ur fav word playboi this aint Hugh Hefners sex pad/ Playgirls that way -> go find urself a man to get ur shit jacked/ U talk about it a lot...askin personal questions not always a safe bet/ Braggin about him losin his virginity but i doubt he's had sex yet/ Intentionz aint as good as DARK KNIGHTS all they got was bad times/ Come to mention ur destined to see WHITE LIGHT this is ur R.I.P rhyme/ Like TonySelf said this is a this is a dangerous crew/ But we never complimented...dangerous HA YOU???/ U bitches is like pin pricks...u dont hurt at all/ U fight like you live backwards...u walk then crawl/ So i guess this is the last bar heres a word of warning/ Dont look at the poll results...coz zero's watch u'll be scoring/ Dun watch u know about it! /\ thats my verse Limited never put the links there read this 1 |
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And Rascal dawg the links in my verse that Limited put in werent there so therefore it wasnt my proper verse Limited it aight man lets jus wake these non-voters the fuck up!!! |
^^Rb been so fuckin inactive...my topical battle wit Shadow has been open for a month. UPPIN THIS SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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mad dog: your verse was way more creative i felt your punches hit harder then poisons your lines were worded better and better vocab i felt you hit hard with the personals but structure wise wasnt to great your complexity....uh...it was not too complex but good......your flow was ok.....your opener was just better then his and your closer was too this wasnt no ko..but i think mad dog edged poison in every category by like 1 point poison: good shit too..you had good punches..and good personals i think you'd do good in audio just by the way you worded yout lines but i dont htink its good to do that in audio..your structure was ok your opener was alright your closer was alright too......flow was good your complexity...was shown..wwell you tried overall ..vote: MAD DOG |
Mad Dog
I got ill intentionz on my mind time 2 make fools out these guys its intended/ I.I aka these dicks demented beaten w/lil hammers now they heads dented/ not feelin this line playa Ur attitude stinks boi u like 14 deserved to get spanked who the hell are you?/ This cat thinks he's amazing at rappin...yet he's losin to hoops/ LOL And whats wit ur fav word playboi this aint Hugh Hefners sex pad/ Playgirls that way -> go find urself a man to get ur shit jacked/ lol...like N-Sight..LOOL U talk about it a lot...askin personal questions not always a safe bet/ Braggin about him losin his virginity but i doubt he's had sex yet/ lol.... Intentionz aint as good as DARK KNIGHTS all they got was bad times/ Come to mention ur destined to see WHITE LIGHT this is ur R.I.P rhyme/ ok could of done better with this Like TonySelf said this is a this is a dangerous crew/ But we never complimented...dangerous HA YOU???/ decent U bitches is like pin pricks...u dont hurt at all/ U fight like you live backwards...u walk then crawl/ ok...lol So i guess this is the last bar heres a word of warning/ Dont look at the poll results...coz zero's watch u'll be scoring/ decent closer decent battle verse from you...ive seen better...but you had some nice lines and your flow was nice 7.5/10 Poison Who let this dirty mut off tha leash to roam tha streets... fuck animal control poison puttin this mad dog to sleep... Played...how many times have i seen a line like this vs mad dog u aint even a contenda, so how u suppose to compete... u jus a beginna, an ya brain will neva be close to complete... blah.... otha peoples flows get sucked up by u, like blood to a leech... puppy ya got mo wack shit, than there is sand on a beach... BLAH again... kid ya weak, im bout to add a loss to ya losin streak... ya kiddin me, u not gon win, stop amusin me... decent... im abusin u, like a girl wit low-self esteem, dawg im usin u... only fa practice fool, an id be damed if i lose to you... ok..wheres the punch though i dunno who hyped you up but chu not shit... thats jus a common cold homie you not sick... lol...aight tha only way u coulda been tight is if u were a virgin chic... but chu not, so u stink mo than birds an shit... 2nd lines was wack this like had potential ya late, erything u write i already heard of it... ya fake, u jus take tha lyrics an re-word it a bit... ok... an i aint gay dawg, so don get tha shit twisted... jus ask ya moms, cuz she love doin them freaky positions.. feedin...but ok man u need to get cha head right, u da one wit bad times... you rappin on a website, bitch u aint destined to rhyme played.... an ok verse..your punches didnt really hit that hard and some of your personals were played.. 6/10 Vote-Mad Dog |
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Maddog:i saw some humoring lines in there hehe.. sorry about losing ot poisoin lol, got dq'd for sending a guy i votes in his batte, my battle link.. guess he felt i was begginf or votes.. ne wayz, i saw some nice punches, and some nice personals.. decent battle verse..
poison:you had a few played lines in there, and some of your verse i was feeling and some of it i wasent.. like this line: ya late, erything u write i already heard of it... ya fake, u jus take tha lyrics an re-word it a bit... ^was an ok line, but it wasent hard hittin at all foreal.. id say maddog came out on top in this battle.. no hate to you pois, much respect.. i just felt he came a lil bit harder.. decent battle ne way you guys v/maddog |
if oyu could hit up this battle of mine..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133427 (me vs trase) *polls vote* lol |
once again none tooken calamity, i jus aint been spittin at mah fullest ability, i don kno wut da fuck is goin on, but thanx.
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Mad Dog I got ill intentionz on my mind time 2 make fools out these guys its intended/ I.I aka these dicks demented beaten w/lil hammers now they heads dented/ Ugh...Seems Like A Filler Ur attitude stinks boi u like 14 deserved to get spanked who the hell are you?/ This cat thinks he's amazing at rappin...yet he's losin to hoops/ Diss To Hoops..But Not Really To Poison And whats wit ur fav word playboi this aint Hugh Hefners sex pad/ Playgirls that way -> go find urself a man to get ur shit jacked/ Aight...Aight Punch U talk about it a lot...askin personal questions not always a safe bet/ Braggin about him losin his virginity but i doubt he's had sex yet/ Fake Personal/Punch...Assumtion..Nice If It Was True Intentionz aint as good as DARK KNIGHTS all they got was bad times/ Come to mention ur destined to see WHITE LIGHT this is ur R.I.P rhyme/ Nice..Prolly Best Line...Nice Meta Like TonySelf said this is a this is a dangerous crew/ But we never complimented...dangerous HA YOU???/ Off Beat..Coula Been Betta U bitches is like pin pricks...u dont hurt at all/ U fight like you live backwards...u walk then crawl/ Decent So i guess this is the last bar heres a word of warning/ Dont look at the poll results...coz zero's watch u'll be scoring/ Aight Closer Alright Battle Verse..Coulda Been Better With Flow and Word Ususage. Nice Drop. 6/10 Poison Who let this dirty mut off tha leash to roam tha streets... fuck animal control poison puttin this mad dog to sleep... Wack u aint even a contenda, so how u suppose to compete... u jus a beginna, an ya brain will neva be close to complete... Wack otha peoples flows get sucked up by u, like blood to a leech... puppy ya got mo wack shit, than there is sand on a beach... Wack kid ya weak, im bout to add a loss to ya losin streak... ya kiddin me, u not gon win, stop amusin me... Best Line But Still Weak im abusin u, like a girl wit low-self esteem, dawg im usin u... only fa practice fool, an id be damed if i lose to you... Filler---Wack i dunno who hyped you up but chu not shit... thats jus a common cold homie you not sick... Played..But Aight tha only way u coulda been tight is if u were a virgin chic... but chu not, so u stink mo than birds an shit... LOL..Fuckin Wack Again ya late, erything u write i already heard of it... ya fake, u jus take tha lyrics an re-word it a bit... Aight...Reworded Woulda Sounded Better an i aint gay dawg, so don get tha shit twisted... jus ask ya moms, cuz she love doin them freaky positions.. Wack man u need to get cha head right, u da one wit bad times... you rappin on a website, bitch u aint destined to rhyme Well Personal but Everyone Uses It LOL...Please Elevate and Then Come Back and Make Up A Rhyme With SuM Punches and Creativitie. 2/10 Vote-Mad Dog ~R~ |
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Mad dog - some good punches - I thought the hoops line was dope. lol. Little lacking on word play - but punches were there. Closer was nice. 6.5/10
Poison - wow - reading this was BRUTAL. How old are you? These rhymes were terrible. I think this was your best line: im abusin u, like a girl wit low-self esteem, dawg im usin u... only fa practice fool, an id be damed if i lose to you... - but I agree with Restricted - 2/10. ouch vote: mad dog |
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Punches-Mad Dawg
Personals-Mad Dawg Flow-Poison Structure-Poison Multi's-Poison Creativity-Mad Dawg Wordplay-Mad Dawg Vocab-Tie Enjoyment-Mad dawg Overall--Mad Dawg Poison...u had flow structure and multi's over mad dawg, but its the personals and punches that win battle's and he up'd u there...also he was more creative nd wordplay/creativity im a fan of vote-Dawg plz drop honest votes on this battle of mine vs ~Star~ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133764 |
ok Mad dogg has this prety much sown up with a needle lol..
overall better verse except flow didnt feel it all.. Poison had some decent shit going on but punches an personals wern't strong enough.. i can vote bcus Poison left II.. pz. |
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