ILL Tempa vs. SparSin
 

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DQ'ed for missing midnight drop time

check it
 

alright spits do tomorrow at 12 for both of us,(pacific time for me) doesnt matter who drop first just drop when ya done....

Midnight not noon.

here my shit...
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/sparsin.htm

might have to listen to it twice to get my point across..

this cat gana post??
 

its 1.36 here in the morn... how long ya gona take... ya comp gotta virus what excuse ya gana use just to try n beat me???

Here it is dog. Notice tha IP Adress it ain't my house. I'm at my cousins cuz my shit is fucked up. I ain't scandaless. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/straightsolomusic.htm

wtf
 

hey uppin this shit, and by the way i herd ya shit tempa, but now when i try to listen to on our drops it says cant use outside links. ..bla bla bla... you gettin the same shit???

Uppin. Nah sparsin. I just listened to em. They workin fine for me. Let's get some votes in here.

they both had good flow but i got more in to ill tempers flow

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin
 

hey no offense, but ya gona vote on this dont just say who you think won, explain why and what we need to work on i aint gana get pist at critisim just tryin to up my skills and shit so tell me what i need to work on....dont be like the bitch that voted below this post....use him as an example...

Uppin for votes..........

Sparsin: wow. i really dont like your flow. its at least on beat, but i just dont like it. a hook on a battle? Wow... i dunno. Punches - kind of lacking. Your quality is pretty good compared to alot of cats on the site, but this needs a bit of polishing. Emotion aint too too bad either. Opener was prolly the best couple of bars.

6.5/10

Tempa: Quality - your usual brutal lol - no diss, you cant help it. Good beat choice. pay for votes line was good. Flow was a little off in a few points. Few good punches, but I expected a little more. Still - flow was a bit better.

7/10

If quality would've counted - tempa - you woulda lost, but you cant help that - and otherwise - tempa won this. Both drops weren't too impressive, but least ya'll droppin.

vote: Tempa

Uppin for votes........

Wow
 

uppin vote, and vendetta i could care less what the fuck you think, just hurry up and get the fuck off this site..

hahahaha - you are nobody... put down the mic son.

lol i feel ya detta for realz no diss spar ur better text dawg open mics battles aint u dawg sorry to free post

lol
 

so much hatred... Verbal i dont even see a mic in your hands... lol

Uppin for votes..............

uppin
 

uppin this shit vote and say what i need to work on or what i did good, dont be a bitch and jus leave some shit.....dont care if i win or lose just tryin to up skillz....

uppin for votes........

uppin for votes...

Wow, this was pretty bad....

SparSin sounded monotone all the way through the verse. You need to put some emotion in your voice, whether its real or fake. Punches were lacking a bit and quality wasn't all that great. You might have walked away with this though if you put some emotion in your spit.

Ill had a little more emotion in his spit. He came hard and it sounded a lot harder than SparSin's did. I liked a couple of his punches, but he was lacking in this department too. Quality could have been better.....

Vote - Ill Tempa.......just overall better rounded verse

ROFL^ do the robot ya'l!! "r-r-rooobooooooottttttttt"

haha...





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uppin
 

uppin this shit.. thanks for the word or advice.. but wtf this cracker talkin bout??robot? lol hook me up wit what eva you on...

lol @ the cracka.. look my up on mugshots im quite the opposite -_-.. was just jokin ne way.. stay up :)

I'm not gonna vote here seein as it may be considered a hate vote or whatever cuz me and tempa and hardwood all have a battle goin on... but heres what i thought

Sparsin- As far as potential goes, I think you packed with it... Your verse was tricky, I hated it but I liked it as well... I think your style of delivery is good but it lacked emotions and feeling... If you can work on this and make me feel what you thinkin through your voice then you will accumulate some v's... as it is now though it took alot away from your flow.... Good Luck in the future..1

Ill Tempa.... Ya shit was decent- I think you basically gotta do the same thing as sparsin, but you need to add somethin to ya flow to make it more interesting-- whether it be switchin up your delivery or what have you... experiment with your sound some more cuz you got the idea but your still missin somethin... Good Luck in the future 1...

Uppin for votes..........

seven third
 

i say you just vote.... its not gona be considered a hate vote my opioin vote for or agaisnt me... at least i dont think so, cause you sayin what you thought on this battle like the rest of the fools you aint jus.. i vote for ________/