verbal violence Vs Datruth29
 

Ok.. 10 lines..
you want me to go first, then have you in
15-20 min after mines..
and no feeding off my verse..
no crew votes

Iv'e read your flows, and you're really Just A Bitch Player/
I'm about to "drop bars" on this punk, like CLumbsy Brick Layers/
Like a Fat bitch trying to get into a narrow space I leave you Stuck/
You're the "slut mc", in every battle you get "Fucked"/
You chose to battle me, you must be the careless Type/
I'll slap you and throw you to the ground like a Pair of dice/
this is lyrical tug a war, who do you think you're tryna Pull Wit/
yo mouth is like the asses of male cattle, all that's comes ot it is Bull SHit/
you're gassed up, like fat kids uncontrollably releasing Obscene Farts/
but yo heart pumps kool-aid, so you're really nothin but a "Sweet Heart"/

aight kid listen to these playa scripts//1.ima give u da truth 29 times just so u dont get it flipped//2.cuz ima violent kid when i come around da truth gets told he a trip//3.
i aint into ur last sentamental line cuz you think its just fine//4.but to the gay world its a crime//5.he 1-2 tellin me i get fucked in a battle well it happind to you//6. ima serve him on verbals dish with a side line of yo moms pussy a.k.a fish//7. im the yupe to start a battle and finish he takin it like it was harry potter quiditch//8. u need to quit it and start commin wit somthin real and spit it//9.u aint da truth just admit it//9.ciz i take this battle witht he power like pop eyes spinach//10.

now we could be uppin tham votes peeps aight ~one~

-Datruth29.
Iv'e read your flows, and you're really Just A Bitch Player/
I'm about to "drop bars" on this punk, like CLumbsy Brick Layers/
flows average, wordplays aight, punch was aight
Like a Fat bitch trying to get into a narrow space I leave you Stuck/
You're the "slut mc", in every battle you get "Fucked"/
flows average, good wordplay, played punch
You chose to battle me, you must be the careless Type/
I'll slap you and throw you to the ground like a Pair of dice/
flow was coo, wordplay was good, pretty coo punchline
this is lyrical tug a war, who do you think you're tryna Pull Wit/
yo mouth is like the asses of male cattle, all that's comes ot it is Bull SHit/
liked the flow witht he multi, wordplays good, punchlines aight
you're gassed up, like fat kids uncontrollably releasing Obscene Farts/
but yo heart pumps kool-aid, so you're really nothin but a "Sweet Heart"/
flow good once again with the multi, liked the wordplay, punch was weak


-Verbalviolence.
aight kid listen to these playa scripts//1.
ima give u da truth 29 times just so u dont get it flipped//2.
cuz ima violent kid when i come around da truth gets told he a trip//3.
flows average, no wordplay, weak personal
i aint into ur last sentamental line cuz you think its just fine//4.
but to the gay world its a crime//5.
flow was coo, weak wordplay and punchline
he 1-2 tellin me i get fucked in a battle well it happind to you//6.
ima serve him on verbals dish with a side line of yo moms pussy a.k.a fish//7. im the yupe to start a battle and finish he takin it like it was harry potter quiditch//8.
flows coo, weak punch, aight wordplay
u need to quit it and start commin wit somthin real and spit it//9.
u aint da truth just admit it//9.
ciz i take this battle witht he power like pop eyes spinach//10.
liked the multis, flows good, wordplays coo, punchlines weak


Overall, Truth got this. Truth had the hardest and harder lines in this battle. Both had some flow. Truth, work on your consistency, creativity a little, and touch up on your wording mayne. Ya getting there. Verb, work on your wittyness and forming punchlines. Just keep at it mayne.


Vote - Datruth29.

ok, pumpin up

upping............

fasho... uppin

uppin again

da truth won thiz off the box he was hot just killin every on thiz bicck just ta let ya know

verbal i was fellin u 2 but may the best rapper win thiz battle good luck all

uppin fo mo votes drop a link i will return the favor

ill vote in this battle if u drop a vote in this battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132721

alright verbal heres your problem...your structure is the ugliest thing next to Michael jackson :laugh: i mean space them out..u have talent we can see that but dont have it like a paragraph..it looks ugly and viewers wont want to peep it

verbal: ur punches were ok nothin special
structure still smell like poo poo poooo
your flow was aiight...but the structure ruined it
your personals i saw effort and potential


da truthL u had better structure
better punches..shit was bangin playa
ur personals were hittin pretty hard
good flow..i culd read it clearly

vote: datruth

I couldn't understand what the fuck verbal posted... lol, and I thought he wrote he was going to give Datruth 29 times... I agree completely with state, brah. Space out your lines so that we can actually read them.

Datruth had some nice shit, as usual. Best bar to me:
Iv'e read your flows, and you're really Just A Bitch Player/
I'm about to "drop bars" on this punk, like CLumbsy Brick Layers/

Never saw that before.

Ok, Ok.... Fash... Upping

dick riding
 

dawg this is a dick riding vote son ima dq this shit

uppin

Hell naw man.. people are cheating now.. I think that the mods must be little kids.. I winning thus battle hands down, yet he is dickriding?

uppin

Word up Da truth got dis battle, nicer lines. Ay yo Verbal, i aint undastand shit u was sayin dawg stick to punchlines an not story tellin ight? no hatin jus tellin ~~1~~

upping again

upping

Iv'e read your flows, and you're really Just A Bitch Player/
I'm about to "drop bars" on this punk, like CLumbsy Brick Layers/

That shit was nice...And you closed the battle well to..poor sweet heart.

DaTruth had the better punches...shit was right on par the entire time. Verbal I just wasnt feelin anything you were sayin, you had a lot of basic punches...sorta like just sayin hey man you suck...that wont win battles.

Datruth was on point with the flow and structure, was nice I could read it and feel how you wanted it to flow. Verbal you need to do something with the structure, and take out the numbers that doesnt help or stand any purpose. The flow just wasnt there for ya verbal...maybe if you fix the structure it would be eaier understood.

Some nice metas from Datruth, he brick layers, and the sweetheart i was rollin at that one. Verbal you gotta come with some stuff more than just some basic rhymes...the point is everyone can do the basic rhymes, so you gotta be creative to get peeps attention.

Overall datruth was just harder...more consistent...flowed better.

v/Datruth29