Orijinal Vs. Datruth29
 

No Crew Votes,
No Biting,
No Feeding Off,
10-15 Lines
Due 30 Min. After Check In..

Let's Get It Started...

I can't check-in right now man..Ill be back in 15 minutes..you can write rhymes I don't care, I need to go to a BBQ for a quick second. Be back in 15 minutes.

Aight, I'm checkin in now, Im sorry man..once you check in..let's battle.

i'm here, go.......................................

Son, you said both of us will go at the same time.

drop yo verse man, I'm done.............................................. .......... waitin fa you..

I'm about to get in this dudes ass, like when Gerbals Arouse Him/
I treat this like a Hool a Hoop, the way I "rap" Circles Around Him/
I'm yo Grim Reaper, my flow seems shallow but like pools it Gets Deeper/
Fuck RB, and I don't like yo Shit Either, I "damn"(curse)yo "flow" like Big Beavers/
You get Zapped to Ash, coz like garbage men the stuff you Rap (wrap) Is Trash/
And you're not the type with massive cash, that, I think We Know/
You reading musical staffs is the only time that you count C-Notes (money)/
The 1 on yo check's lonley Without Zero's, pick up the pace like you Dropped It/
U not a MC, You could pour cement all on da "Stage" and still couldn't "Rock It"/
You're just Not It, so Stop It, you rhyme like you sleep walk Uncocious/
You're last battle was a true and total dissappointment/
It seems that you and whackness are stuck together like Conjoined Twins/
He Licks Ass, I Kick Ass n spit cold flows til saliva solidifies n I Choke on Ice/
"Unorijinal", You need to quit, you seem really drained, like Broken Pipes/
As a matter of fact, i'll cut yo arm off if I ever see you Hold A MIC/

I won't hold it against you.. but I'm giving you 15 min. from now to write a verse..I made it in exactly 30 min....

you should of been started cuz.....

Son, you had a little less than a fuckin' hour to write your verse, how do I know when I was out you didn't write it?

Bitch, rushin' me..

Let ‘da truth’ be told, I’m half this niggaz age N still I defeat him in a lyricist contest/
This guy couldn’t flow any better, even if I gave him a full-blood test/
I emphasize on his age ‘cuz I’m 14, he’s five years older, but couldn’t beat me/
I’ll put my M-16s to ya face make have dots like you had full-grown acne/
He’s 19 years old, a nerd, his whole idea of men suckin each other is called romancin/
I’ll put this dude to sleep shoot ‘em wit my desert on his feet, let this bitch do breakdancin/
His occupation says “EMT”, wonder what he does for a living to make pay/
‘Eatin’ Male Testicles’ everyday, then he opens up Orijinal’s CD and presses ‘Play’/
Don’t make any excuses like you on your ‘job’ or you had writer’s block/
Cuz’ you had until 2 o’clock, his dick so small, he couldn’t beat even if he was a “dick-jock”/
Nigga, rushin’ me while he had a 50 minutes drop a fuckin verse, 16 lines/
29-60-1 I know what you’re thinkin, that his record, no, it’s not his waistline/
So now nigga, you’ve learned your ‘lesson’ and no, I’m not teachin’ in college/
But, right now I’m the one who graduated high school, and U da freshman wit no knowledege/
Let me give this bitch a ‘bangin’ closer, maybe some fireworks tomorrow/
Maybe I’ll give him ‘tips’ during “E.M.T.”, but I ain’t talkin about money, talkin about ‘hollows’/

BTW here are the explanations:

M16s make red dots when you target at people.
"Eatin Male Testicles" - E.M.T. is his occupation it says on profile.
"dick-jock" - Disk Jock a.k.a. DJ he couldn't beat even if he was a "Dick-Jock" A.k.A. DJ
"29-60-1" - You know how girls have waistlines like they titties, then hips then legs, that's a waistline, I'm saying that's his record.
"tips" & "hollows" - Hollow Tips, the bullets.

ill vote for this if u drop an honest explained vote in my battle first http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

STATE CAPITOL... You have to vote if you post in here cuz...........

I'm about to get in this dudes ass, like when Gerbals Arouse Him/
I treat this like a Hool a Hoop, the way I "rap" Circles Around Him/
1st line makes me think your gay, but the 2nd one was syck 6/10
I'm yo Grim Reaper, my flow seems shallow but like pools it Gets Deeper/
Fuck RB, and I don't like yo Shit Either, I "damn"(curse)yo "flow" like Big Beavers/
Damning his flow like beavers that was creative 5/10
You get Zapped to Ash, coz like garbage men the stuff you Rap (wrap) Is Trash/
And you're not the type with massive cash, that, I think We Know/
Dont understand the massive cash, but the garbage line was nice 5/10
You reading musical staffs is the only time that you count C-Notes (money)/
The 1 on yo check's lonley Without Zero's, pick up the pace like you Dropped It/
the C-note was creative I liked, the 2nd line was a filler though 5/10
U not a MC, You could pour cement all on da "Stage" and still couldn't "Rock It"/
You're just Not It, so Stop It, you rhyme like you sleep walk Uncocious/
Im not sure about using rock it and concrete together :-/ 2/10
You're last battle was a true and total dissappointment/
It seems that you and whackness are stuck together like Conjoined Twins/
This was a complete filler 1/10
He Licks Ass, I Kick Ass n spit cold flows til saliva solidifies n I Choke on Ice/
"Unorijinal", You need to quit, you seem really drained, like Broken Pipes/
this first line was creative 6/10
As a matter of fact, i'll cut yo arm off if I ever see you Hold A MIC/
not a bad closer 4/10

34/80


Let ‘da truth’ be told, I’m half this niggaz age N still I defeat him in a lyricist contest/
This guy couldn’t flow any better, even if I gave him a full-blood test/
Good opener 7/10
I emphasize on his age ‘cuz I’m 14, he’s five years older, but couldn’t beat me/
I’ll put my M-16s to ya face make have dots like you had full-grown acne/
M16s make ya have dots? 2/10
He’s 19 years old, a nerd, his whole idea of men suckin each other is called romancin/
I’ll put this dude to sleep shoot ‘em wit my desert on his feet, let this bitch do breakdancin/
not really a hard punch coulda been better 3/10
His occupation says “EMT”, wonder what he does for a living to make pay/
‘Eatin’ Male Testicles’ everyday, then he opens up Orijinal’s CD and presses ‘Play’/
Nice personal....6/10
Don’t make any excuses like you on your ‘job’ or you had writer’s block/
Cuz’ you had until 2 o’clock, his dick so small, he couldn’t beat even if he was a “dick-jock”/
Mediocre punc 5/10
Nigga, rushin’ me while he had a 50 minutes drop a fuckin verse, 16 lines/
29-60-1 I know what you’re thinkin, that his record, no, it’s not his waistline/
im not sure where you got that from? 2/10
So now nigga, you’ve learned your ‘lesson’ and no, I’m not teachin’ in college/
But, right now I’m the one who graduated high school, and U da freshman wit no knowledege/
This was more of just a filler 2/10
Let me give this bitch a ‘bangin’ closer, maybe some fireworks tomorrow/
Maybe I’ll give him ‘tips’ during “E.M.T.”, but I ain’t talkin about money, talkin about ‘hollows’/
Good closer also...fireworks and tips i liked 7/10

32/80

v/datruth


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Recounted: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...5&postcount=576

Yo bitch, I just added that shit up..I have 34 also..so how do you vote datruth if we both got the same score? You added wrong dummy. Now this vote doesn't count.

WHy are you trippin, who obviously liked my verse anyway because he voted for me.. calm down, you don't have to call people out of their names....

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punches-Orijinal
personals-Original...both had some good ones tho
strutcture-tie
creativity-tie

Overall ima have to say Orijinal...u both had good versus but i was feelin his punches and personals more....and his opener's and closers were stronger....close battle tho

and can u both plz drop honest votes on my batt'e here...p homies
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132614

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datruth: alright flow, some nice punches n wordplay. but that opener man.. thats a line in "boom" by royce 5'9'.. not the whole thing just "i rap circles around".. dunno if you were biting or if it was just coincidence, but whatever.. so i didnt find it as great as everyone else did cos i heard it before..

orijinal: hard hitting punches is what won you this battle.. flow was bout the same as truths, but you had better vocab n shit. so you took it.

v/ orijinal

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in my opinion da truth got this battle , i aint 2 gud wid the explanations but here it goes

opener - da truth
closer - origional
punchlines - da truth ( only just, they just tipped it for me)
metaz - tie

if this aint explained enuf , am sorry but thats just me (noob!)

drop a explained fair vote on these links

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133335

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133370

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133487

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OK, clarification:

QB brought that up too.... Naw, this is me calling him gay in the first line.. you prolly have to be from the Bay Area to get it, Gay men in Frisco and other wierdo's put Gerbals inside of their anal cavity for pleasure...

when I use the phrase, "i'm all in yo ass", it just means that i'm dominating or beating you.... yet, in my meta, I compared that phrase to him literally putting Gerbals inside of his ass, do you get it now?

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Once again Truth comes wit creative punchlines an a sick flow,
im not good at explainin but i do know this
Original waz nice but sum of he lines didnt make sense or wasnt strong
Truth was nice an his lines were creative made sense an was strong
obviously u can see im votin for Truth because i believe honestly that he did come harder than Original an i do believe Original could have come harder...good endin Original, but ive seen better from u. nice dropz ~~1~~

PSW only honest votes round here ~~1~~

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