J DOT vs Blimp
 

yo u go first...15 min after check in
no limit, but dont make it hella long

u kno the rulez, none of that coward shit ppl be doin (no crew votes, hates, and all that other shit)

aight checkin in

due at 25 after for u........do yo shit

yo i love 2 carry chrome, blast and scatter bones//
ill leave J Dot boxed in like larry holmes//
left wit a flabby dome, beef became a hobby//
jello da side of ya face like bill cosby//
man my wrist rocky, what up wit da bricks ocky//
lock da strip down state prop, gun cocked, get down or lay down//
neva took a bus but move like a greyhound//
niggas waitin me, since im quiet it's alot of niggas hatin on me//
blimp keeps da heat up on him, like a stove furnish//
j dot aint stop yet til da dum dum start burnin//
like remi on da buildin give u some higher learnin//
it feels like da world turnin but im standin still//
niggas askin who has j dot done kill//
homie iwas taught 2 eat da beans dont let im spill//
homie ill neva squill//

holla back a little keystyle

aight drop ya shit

checkn in....had to go for a while, but im bac

im bill cosby? whatever? that makes me a legend or a hero/
follow my orders....u just my son like theo/
u know 'kids say the darndest things/
'u love to carry chrome', this kids got the darndest dreams/
get real, u a sweet nigga, check ya cavities/
u gotta go, RB reached its maximum fag capacity/
im a legend, u cannot stop my game/
the smallest baller in da lane, but u cant block a thang/
im too much for u, u said it right, u kno the truth/
im southwest airlines, u could be greyhound, im always above u/
fuk u, pay me, the two words i live to kno/
imma hustler, im not known but i run the show/
this is J DOT 101, i never lost a battle, and im bout to kill u/
so i answered everyone's question, this battle should bump me up two/
and marck my words, this is the worst fukin flow i ever spit/
but still came harder and better then u ever did/
so dont u wish u never said any of that false shit/
too late, check ya wig, its just been split/

waitin 4 yall 2 vote

Blimp ya verse was syck man, nice punces...I was really feelin the flow. Nice metas esp the one with the jello like bill cosby. You did have a couple streched lines though, work on that to help the structure a bit. Nice multis too those are what kept ya flow in check.

J Dot you were feedin off him bad, and he still murked you. You dont go feedin off peeps verses, thats just a good way to lose, your structure was way off, wasnt feelin the flow. You did have some good punches though, and a few good metas would been better if you werent feedin.

v/Blimp

Please return the favor, vote on this, its a hot battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133401

good lookin holla back need mo votes

Blimp
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...that newbish...structure was pretty good...flow was decent...u had some nice metas...wordplay was tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

J DOT
dont feed hoecake...that takes away from ur verse...and like i told blimp, dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure was pretty good...flow was ok...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty simple...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had an alright flow...neither had good personals...blimp had more, and better metas...blimp had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...blimp gets my vote for a better overall verse...

VOTE - BLIMP

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote in the link in my sig...thanx man...

opener - blimp
closer - j-dot
wordplay - blimp
creativity - blimp
punches - blimp
metaz - blimp
personals - tie ( no good)
structure - tie
flow - blimp

overall vote = blimp

drop a vote on this link ....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

in the rulez of this battle it dint say no feedn, we set it up, he shouldve said sumthin if he dint want feedin

Damn, this was a tought battle.

opener - blimp
closer - J dot
wordplay - J dot
creativity - blimp
punches - J Dot
metaz - blimp
personals - None
structure - Both same J Dot some bars a little long (no biggie)
flow - Blimp

overall vote = Well overall I'd say this battle goes to J Dot cause of harder punches. The count right here /\ /\ /\ would indicate that Blimp wins by a count of 4-3 but I put more emphasis on punches seing as its a battle and all. But J Dot, ya did feed off his verse alot which was a strong source of a few of your kille punches. In the rules it says
"u kno the rulez, none of that coward shit ppl be doin (no crew votes, hates, and all that other shit)"
I read that as RB rules which are

No crew
No feed'n
No Dick
No Hate
etc...
So..... Ima say this, I am inclined to poll vote for J Dot, but I'ma leave it up to you too to discuss if the rules would have indicated feed'n or if Blimp should have said somthing about it. P.M me with whats up. If Blimp compains about the feed'n then the vote goes to him, if not then it goes to who had better punches which is J Dot. That simple.

Oh and P.S

Blimp, in your battle you were "1 up'n yourself alot"
Try and focus on knock'n him rather than 1 up'n yourself, cause ya did a good job of both but I felt that if you had a few more punches towards him especially near the end then you would have taken this either way.

Return the favour.

blimp took this battle it was tight but when u look at his flow n structure its betta then u c that the punchlines killed j - dot

v - blimp

vote on mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135183

uppin

Im feelin blimp on this one. His structure was betta and flow was tighter. I aint have enuff post 2 vote but I still gotta give props when needed.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136313

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136311

Blimp had a nice flow and structure however, i felt that J Dot came back on this nigga with his first lines:
im bill cosby? whatever? that makes me a legend or a hero/
follow my orders....u just my son like theo/
u know 'kids say the darndest things/
'u love to carry chrome', this kids got the darndest dreams/
^nice come back, like a real street battle.. and nice opener..

Neither of you had any good personals which are really whut matters, but y'all threw sum punches.. i think both did an equal amount..

J Dot had the betta closer, y'all just work on following through don't drop a tight first 2 bars but then fall off in the end.. nice opener Blimp..

overall: J Dot took this< my vote

this is fiya check my diss to LK (in my sig)
~wun~

^thanx for the honesty...good lookn

need mo votes

need 1 mo vote 2 end dis

AIGHT HERE IT IS

blimp you had good multies and shit but j dot fliped the script and tha cosby line came harder then anything you had so my vote

v/ j dot

return the fav

blimp always makes me laugh and dis one did and i thought it was hard and flow was great and so was srtucture

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v blimp he had the best verse out there jay dot you got to elevate man if you wanna get better... you know what they say practice makes perfect you should try battleing people more your leage really. Good battle but blimp frashed him with his punches that hit hard the most and flow